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Reviewer: tmr (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Holy hell that was worth the wait!
There are so many things I adored about this chapter: I loved the descriptions of the house/compound - I could see it. I loved how you mixed some hot, sexy moments with some amazingly tender ones. Aurora Borealis :) made me think of your other story, which i worship as well.
The idea of Bella leaving letters/messages for Edward to read during each hour of her change is brilliant and heart wrenching - I actually started to well up with tears!
Did I miss the morphine, or maybe that's coming next?
You, my dear, and this story (along with your other) are the reason I became addicted to this site. Yours was the first story I read and here I am some four months later. Your writing is so, so vivid and your characters resonate.
Thank you so much for updating this. I am looking forward to all of the next chapters, Bella giving him her gifts (recording and blood) - I can't wait!
Reviewer: HeartnSoulzDesire (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG!!! Please tell me he stopped... sucks that ya stopped there... UPDATE AGAIN SOOOOOOOOOON!!!
Reviewer: iifyoucjordan (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
omggggg i can't believe it just ended!.. i hope there is another update..SOON.
so good!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Holy cow! Fooling around in the Aston Martin! Hot damn!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
that was an amazing chapter, great job! ! cant wait to read more :)
Reviewer: sbrettgal (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I loved this chapter! This is what Breaking Dawn should have been when Bella was changed.
I fear we're coming to the end of this story though ... and that makes me sad!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Loved the Dom-Edward, that is amazing. I can't wait to see what you do for the transformation... hurry up and post!! :)
Reviewer: mslane (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Nice way to have them change her. I like that Rosalie and Alice made plans for the beautification afterall it is permanent. And Bella was able to check a few more things off of her list. It should be interesting to read what Bella wrote in her transformation diary to Edward. Looking forward to the transformation! Thanks for writing. :D
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my god. Of course you would leave us with that!! Ugh.
Excellent chapter, as always. It's always worth the wait. =) But with that being said, I do hope this chapter comes a little faster since it's finally happened and Bella's finally going to be changed!
I hope you share some of what is written in that book with us. That was the swetest gesture. =)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
well I was wondering about this story just the other day! Glad you updated! I really enjoyed the chapter! I think it was very well written in the sense that the time ticked by at an appropriate pace...every emotion was there!
The romantic idea of Bella leaving Edward for a "few days" with something to read...was very intimate and sweet!
Everyone's input in the last few days was wonderful!
I hope she goes through and wakes up having everything OKAY!
Reviewer: txtwihard (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Definetely worth the wait!!! Edward in leather, panty exploding goodness!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Amazing!! cant wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This chapter was amazing! Perfect "ending"... I loved the way you ended the chapter and i can't wait to see edward's response to Bella's letters to him. Can't wait!
Reviewer: prayingforpattinson (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my GOD, you have to hurry and write the next chapter. I'm about to lose my mind, I can't stand it. This is one of the best chapters so far and you left me hanging. You have an amazing way of touching my soul and you spike my desire for more. I hope you win your contest, I will be voting.. Thanks so much for this story.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
How could I forget to give you 10 stars? Well here they are.
Reviewer: HiediCoe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! I don't know I want to be sad or happy, maybe I'll just be both. That was such a good chapter, I'll have to read it at least 2 more times. Can't wait for more.
Thanks
Reviewer: SnazzyT (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
It was great timing....switching to EPOV....although the more I read the harder it is for me to picture Bella's foul mouth! LOL!
Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
As always, AMAZING. The biting scene actually made me teary. Hot, but so poignant at the same time.
Another great chapter.
Reviewer: bluelori87 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow oh wow, i can not wait to read what is going to happen, i can't wait!!!!!!!!! I will be checking everyday
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Your chapters get better and better! Really hot, this is how Breaking Dawn should have read, really love this Edward and in black leather, needless to say I shouldn't be reading this at work! Please update soon, what if he can't stop, well I will have to wait! Off to vote!!!!!
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love all of the stuff on the “bucket list”. The bowling would have been hilarious! I could only imagine how hard the boys would throw the balls. Now….How do I get me one of those Edward ice cream sundaes?
His last few words at the end were beautiful. Perfect ending to the chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Lan (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
*_* HOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!
speachless..
pretty please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG1 How do I love this story, Let me count the ways!!!!! Great, Awesome, terrific chapter. I hope that you have pity on all of your devoted readers (me included), and don't make us wait so long for an update. Especially after leaving us with such a cliffy.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
It just keeps getting better and better! I picked up this story right after you posted Chapter 4 way back when and it remains one of my absolute favorites.
I have to say I MUCH prefer this biting scenario to how it went down in Breaking Dawn. So much of vampirism is tied into passion and I love that you have linked the two together.
Here's one more review to get you to 10,000!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ohhhh myyyyy goddddd!!! Wait.. God isn't here right now, lol. I think I made a mistake. I saw the update, and couldn't stop myself from reading even though I'm in the car with my grandmother.. And I'm so turned on that I can't fucking breathe correctly!! Oh well.. SO worth it!! I wish there was a higher number on the ratings scale.
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