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Reviewer: Twilight_Muse (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
GAP...GAP...GAP. OH.MY.GOD. UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: AAurelia79 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
THE BITE FINALLY HAPPENED!!!!! *fistpump*
The idea for the hour-by-hour binder is perfect. Can't wait to see what she wrote!
Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG suuuuuuch a good chapter. I love how you have this story going. It's such a wonderful alternative to Breaking Dawn. And how you decided to have him change her - much more romantic than following a c-section (although that was necessary at the time). I can't wait for the next chapter. You're a fabulous writer!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Laura! That is how it should be! Yeah! Thanks for getting it right and making her change much better and more romantic. Love your story! The emotions you put behind the sex makes it absolutely beautiful--or forceful, wild, hot...etc. Whatever it needs to be at the time. Perfect.
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I'm so glad you are back. I've missed this story very much.
Reviewer: Winelovers (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow....I've missed you so much....so glad you are back....this was awesome! I can't wait for the rest...
Missy
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Your an amazing writter.. I feel it so much... I love it.,. you go girl
Reviewer: Lauravamp (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my God! That was perfect! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh Lord, you had better finish this or I'm gonna die, and then you will have the guilt on your hands. LOLOLOLOL.....it's so sad...I always get upset when I read about Bella's change; probably because it upsets Edward so much.LOL...Anyway, great job; I've been here since the beginning. Thanks for all your hard work.
Reviewer: MaggieJean (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hot damn that was a long ass wait! I think you were actually trying to kill your readers with anticipation! I was starting to feel like you get some kind of sick thril out of making us die from smut deprivation. But holy shit that chapter was worth it. I forgive you for the sadistic need to torcher us with such a long wait. Edward in leather was totally worth it. You are fully awesome once again.
Reviewer: goddess (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
This was great! Exactly as I would have wanted it. Awesome job!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was another incredibly hot chapter! Also, if I was going to have Edward change me, I would totally want to have him bite me during sex!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG--the Edward sundae was too delectable! The idea of sucking whipped cream off of Edward's beautiful cock is too much for me to deal with and remain sane! And I loved the end, where he bit her after making love. Perfect.
Reviewer: B0babs (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I absolutely loved the gift Bella gave to Edward. It brought tears to my eyes as I was readaing. I'm hoping you include much of what is in there in the next update while we're waiting for Bella's change.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow! I can't believe we made it to the biting! I felt so bad for Edward. The emotions that he was going through made me feel like giving him a hug! Or have an ice-cream sundae...whichever. LOL! These two really know how to get their kink on!
Kat
Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh my gosh..
BEST ENDING EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleaaaase! if you value 7,000 people's sanity, you will not take as long as last time to write write write!!
(congrats on the huuge number btw!)
AH! I'M SO EXCITED!
you need to promise that you will include everything on the list! and not in the way like.. doing 3 in one shot!
good job! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Finally! Yeah!! Although Please, Please Please tell me in the next few sentences you describe Edward extracting his teeth so Bella stops at Vamp and before corpse. I mean they have to be able to finish THE LIST right? Anyway, Great as usual. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what you come up for them next.
Reviewer: geg (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
holly moly!!!
now i am worried, he sucked her blood at least 4 times before the scene faded to end.
cant wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was so perfect.....the way you left the ending of this chapter was just WOW! And thanks for all of the effort you put into it, it was really amazing, every.....single......word.....of......it! You got my vote!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. That was just...wow. The end of this chapter just blew me away, it was so powerful. That's how I've always envisioned her transformation *should* have been - full of love and tenderness. And you could really feel Edward's anguish in those final moments. I simply can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: adidas187 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG!!! Edward biting her while coming??!! That was genious!!! Good Lord. I need to be alone. AWESOME CHAPTER!!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
wow. .. cliffie!! i hope edward wont be carried away.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Very nice but what about the morphine?
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Fantastic job- I always hated the way Bella was turned in BD-it seems so obvious that Edward should do it while making love to Bella.
The Edward ice-cream sundae -mmmm. Delicious. One of my fave items on Bella's list.
You write beautifully, but Bella's words to Edward, to comfort him during her change, were exceptional. Simple but powerful-Edward wasn't the only one who was choked up.
This is without a doubt one of my favorite chapters and well worth the wait.
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! OMG OMG! I pray you write again QUICK!!!!! You have left me shaking! Pure genius. I couldn't believe you could get better in your writing & you have surpassed all my expectations. You are now my 2nd favorite author of all time...you can't blame me if I keep Stephenie Meyer as my number 1...all hale the goddess Stephenie! I could continue to sing your praises here, but I do not want to keep you from finishing chapter 25.
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