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Reviewer: kelliejo (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
There is something so totally hot about him biting her while they do it. I'm fairly certain that's the only way I'd want it done to me!! :)
I caught onto this story rather late. But I do love it so!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
It's so late that I can't write a long review, no matter how hard I try. However, I will say that this is one of my favorite chapters EVER and that's saying something! Excellent work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Princess Meg (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love your story and I can't wait or the next chapters! I'd love to see how your Bella-vampire will turn out, and the sex between them can hardly get any better! Thanks for your story!
Reviewer: hothoney111 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
wow! loved it! you leave us with such a cliffie though! i can't wait to read your next chapter! i'm looking forward to how edward deals with her change and him reading her present! please don't leave us hanging too long! ;)
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Damn, demanding Bella is hott!
Reviewer: mskohl (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! That was so hot! Damn.
Ummm, what about the morphine? oops, Edward? Like you're going to say, hold that thought, Bella, I've got to call Carlisle in here for the final act of this floor show. LOL
I had other things I was going to say, but damn, if that didn't just erase them all from my memory.
Great chapter! Thanks for taking the time. I wish I were going to Twi Con. I can't believe I'm not when I'm only hours away. But, I just can't get there. Have a blast and I'll see ya' on you tube!
Reviewer: ciao_ama (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my godness...! That was so amazing and fantastic!!! I wish there better words to describe it. Thank you so very much for the great story.
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Lord I LOVE this story! I love the leather Edward scene too..Bella tied over the barstool and being spanked was very similar to an awesome lemon in The Red Line by Winndsinger over on FF. (Chapter 9 if you care to compare, but that one was more of a role playing rape fantasy..definitely worth a read if you haven't though). Oh and speaking of nonconsensual fantasies, that might be cool to add to the list. I know he's dominated her, but nonconsent is a bit different and I know a lot of us pervs get off on that hehe
Also..tsk tsk..Edward forgot to get the morphine in her before he bit..not like it would've worked though. Can't wait for an update. If the sex is this good when she's human, it's gonna get crazytown when she's unbreakable!! Yay!!
Reviewer: Mademoiselle Chocolat (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OH MY GOSH! I Don't know waht to do with myself right now. I'm kind of a mess, waiting for an update...I was reading this on FF, and freaked out when I foiund it continued further here :D You are awesome! I'm pleased that Bella gets he way in terms of her transformation! And, she's either bald, brazillian, or has e. c. shaved out. I hope our golden boy isn't too angsy while he reads, and I'm anxious to know what is in the book Bella gives him. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE MORPHINE! lol I'm hoping that #26 is next. Update soon!
XoxoX, Mademoiselle
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG. WHAT A WAY TO GO!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. WOW! LOVE YOUR WRITING.
i GET SO INTO YOUR WORDS THAT IT FEELS LIKE I'M ACTUELLY THERE.
THANX
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh, lady, so many tears. Bravo. Spectacular. Beautiful. Stunning. Heartbreaking. Better than the book. I love it immeasurably. I can barely form sentences.
Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
omgosh sex crazed edward bit bella!!! this should be interesting for edward to explain carlisle how the transformation started so early... um i kinda was horny and well bit her. sooo good cant wait for the next chapterrrr.pure brilliance this was
Reviewer: AnUnsatisfiedMind (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AMAZING...I loved it. Can't wait for what comes next.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Aww. Thats so sweet. I wanna cry. And I wanna go have sex on the balcony with Edward. :D
Reviewer: wilkesmom2 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I absolutely love this story and can't get enough! I can't wait to see what happens after she is changed! Ha! Hope you post soon!
Reviewer: anngelik (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I absolutely LOVE this story, I hope you update again very soon.
Reviewer: meritposita (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! too long the waiting and soooo worthy... i love every single part of this... the change it's how it should have been... love it love it love it!!
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I LOVE THIS STORY
Reviewer: leesed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Amazing... That is how I pictured him changing her to happen the whole time I was reading. Hope to read more soon!!!! :)
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You just HAD to stop!!!!!! OMG!!!! I LOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD it though. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEE update quickly!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please with an edward ice cream sundae on top???????
Reviewer: fillintheblank (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Giant SQUEEE!! This chapter has been...WOW. I don't really have words right now, but you are amazing!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
aww sweet in very way
Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
HOLY HELL ! Every chapter....I swear to you.....every chapter is the best I have ever read. I wnt my "I Voted" sticker please. Thank you for your hard work on this story. There are so many twists and turns.....and fucking juicy twisted up lemons too. Hell, I'm voting for you to get a Pulitzer.
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That is so the way I wished it had happened for real. But I'm a little confused about the place Morphine was supposed to play. Edward had to have known the last couple of times he talked with Carlisle that it wouldn't work if he was going to do what Bella asked of him...
Reviewer: crystal16 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
another delightful addition :O) Thanks *sheepish grin*
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