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Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
While I have already reviewed I can't help but offer my assistance in making it to 10,000.
This chapter was superb, just like all the others. That is the reason why you are number one on most of the top 10 lists.
Please don't wait too long to update. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Another fantastic installment. I am so glad that you have put up more of this story. I love to read what you write. You know the characters so well. I am glad that you had this idea and am sharing it with us all. Thanks again!
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Tears in my eyes.... so tender and sweet....what a wonderful last day and beautiful way to be changed... I can't wait to see what she wrote for him, I'm sure more tears for me. You write so beautifully conveying Edwards love for her I was also thinking with him NO! Not yet!! I can see his point so much more clearly in the way you bring it to light..... beautiful!! Thank you.... I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
All I can say is thank you!!! I loved Breaking Dawn, but when it was over I just wanted MORE, MORE MORE!!! And you have given that to me in a way that is much more incredibly satisfying than I ever could have imagined. I love the changes you made to the story line and character development - I think they are quite realistic and compatible with the characters as SM wrote them.
And god damn, the sex is hot.
I am absolutely PANTING in anticipation of the rest of story. :)
Reviewer: reesessweetie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
omg!!! this is the worst ending for this chapter, in the sense that it's the biggest cliff hanger EVER!!! ahh!! can't wait for the next chapter! i wanna see how edward deals with the changes, especially his thoughts and feelings as he's reading her notes for him. please, please update soon!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
very nice... very very nice...
so much love and adoration. and to fulfill so much from the list in one chapter!
love the ending... a little suspense in the sensuality!
can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Awesome chapter...the fufilled a lot of things on the list!!
I was cracking up when E was spanking B with The List!!! Too funny!
I am so excited to see what these two will do when she is a vamp herself!!
Such a beautiful chapter...thanks for sharing!!
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
What a cliff hanger!! Now I'm going, "What's going to happen? Is he going to let go and focus or give in more to his instinct!!" *raises and eyebrow*
Awesome story. Love the list, hmmm... Wonder what else can be added now...*evil grin* I'll have to wait and see.
Thanks!
Reviewer: wildcatlizzie (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I started reading this last night, and there are so many things that I need to get done, but all I want to do is keep reading this. This story has been so amazing and funny and hot up to this point, but I *really* need to get my paper written. :)
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
this story = awesome sauce. I hope the rest of the list gets worked on, after Edward controls himself and stops biting her, that is...
Reviewer: hcm126 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
i really loved this chapter, and I'm glad that she and Edward got to have some sexy times before she was changed, and like, right before too. Thanks for a great chapter, and I love this story so much!!
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Well worth the wait. I bet Carlise is going to be pissed. Hope you update soon, so I can find out what happens next.
Reviewer: GGervasi (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Such great writing! I always laugh, and then cry. I love it!
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Glad there wasnt so much sex I cant handle it ( in a good way lol )
Reviewer: moviegal (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Love this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Please post it soon.....
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Beautiful. I loved that they spent their last day with her as a human doing things like repeating their wedding vows. So sweet. And, of course, this chapter was HOT, too!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was unbelievably intense and so loving!
Reviewer: amp23 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
so good! I love how he bit her & I love the "cliffhanger" - I assume he will stop before he kills her. And the part in leather with the stool - felt a little like I was reading a chapter of the Dominant or the Submissive!
Her gift to him was so incredibly thoughtful - I can't wait to read what she wrote to him and to read how she experiences the change. The SM version is so vivid in my mind - I am so curious for your description!
Reviewer: Rogue (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great 'bite' moment!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hot, Hot, Hot!!! can't wait to read how good there sex will be after she is changed. Thanks so much for the update. Hmm, got to go find my husband now.
Reviewer: twiluv140 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Excellent chapter! Can't wait to read the transformation. I wish Bella's transformation had been this good in Breaking Dawn.
Reviewer: hahaEdward (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Nice to have you back again! Love the ending...that is the best way to go if you have the choice. Good luck with the awards - you've got my vote.
Reviewer: Queenmelyr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Another speachless momment.. THANK YOU.. its so real and natrual,first time memories...
Reviewer: Queenmelyr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Another speachless momment.. Thank you- it is just so real.. first time memories.
Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh please for the love of Edward, update soon!
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