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Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was really a great chapter! I love the idea of him changing her while making love. That fits them perfectly. I know he's drinking her blood, but he'll stop.
Reviewer: LoveInTheLies (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Absolutely loved this chapter. I thought it would be a little weird to have Edward change Bella while they were making love, but I think you pulled it off perfectly .. him trying to hold out and delay the inevitable -- I loved that glimpse into his mind. Well done :)
I have a question, though, about the list -- particularly #17 ... will you be revisiting this since Edward hasn't actually found out about this (to my knowledge)? I would love to hear about this from his POV, but I would assume he has to to wait until after her change to indulge in that ...
Can't wait for the next! :)
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Laura,
Congrats on 7500 reviews!
Quick review here and I'll send a longer review later. GREAT chapter, I loved the way she wanted to be changed AND that he followed her wishes. But I was so very, very sad by his internal monologue: "Not yet. Not yet! No!" That just about made me cry.
love, Richelle
Reviewer: Edwardspet (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Love the long chapter! Great descriptions of the good stuff, as always!
Reviewer: mrsjwright (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
YAY!! I can't wait until the next chapter. I am glad that you let him bite her this way. I always felt that this would be the only way that he could stop. Also that she got a chance to say goodbye in this story. but of course you know your story is completely Edwardtastic!
Reviewer: dramaqueen0024 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ahhh sooo guuud ur freeeaking amazingg
Reviewer: summerc79 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ur writing is amazing!
U kept all the characters so true to what SM created, yet u made them evolve in a way that is so natural...
This is by far one of the best fanfics out there. Impossible to start reading once you start.
Thank you and I can wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: chocolatelover (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
okay great chapter. and i seriously cant wait to see what he does when she gives him that vial of her blood after she is changed.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AAHHHH! You cannot leave me like this. How will it go on? O my...
Reviewer: Animal_Freak (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG he doesn't eat her does he!!?? Hehe that sounded to so wrong. Lol. Please update sooner than you did for this chapter. Sorry if that sounded demanding but come on, this is the most FREAKIN AWESOME STORY EVER!!! I love it and I check it everyday to see if you have updated it so please don't let it be as long. I don't like waiting.
J
Love ya and keep them chapters coming honey!!!
Catlin. XoXoX
Reviewer: Got Blood (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow, I just absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see how vampire Bella turns out!
Reviewer: Rene (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Two words: Thank you! This was so worth the wait. You are an amazing writer.
Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Laura.
I am speechless. This is superb. I love your work, and will miss this when it is finished.
The final moments are upon us.
Reviewer: SunnyKitten (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Glad you are back and were able to update. This is the best chapter yet! I adore this story and can't wait to find out wht happens during and after Bella's change. I have one question: did they give Bella morphine? Perhaps I missed it in my haste to find out what would happen.
Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
i absolutly loved this chapter. so very well done. wasn't Bella supposed to be given morphine though before Edward bit her? looking forward to reading her words to Edward in her notebook . Good Job.
Reviewer: dazzling_facade (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. Just...wow. Loved the leather, was waiting for that number with bated breath :) And the way you ended the chapter? Perfect. It's the way it should have been. I really like what you have done with the binder so far. Thanks for posting a link to vote, I gladly voted for you. This is easily my favorite fanfic; I love your style and finesse. Your next chapter is always emphatically anticipated!
Reviewer: LONEWOLF (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
beautiful... i have so enjoyed this story - edward had to forgo the morphine to please bella and bite her during (yoiu know) - will carlise run it brandishing a filled needle? curious.... thanks so much for all your hard work on the story!
Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Laura-Great chapter as always. I will see you at Twicon. I'm in the top ten too! Can't wait to meet you. See you at the sports bar!
Author's Response: Awesome Stacey! Congrats! See you there!
Reviewer: blondie2294 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! update soon!! (I am now having insane cravings for an ice cream sunday. thanks a lot.)
Reviewer: Queenmelyr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
wow.. at a loss for words.
Reviewer: trulyprue (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was AWSOME!! Go LC!! Go LC!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG This chapter was WONDERFUL!!! He finally bit her and doing so while they made love was just perfect! I love the idea of her being able to talk to him through the book while she's "under" and I can't wait to read the words of love she has written! Great chapter! Great story!
Reviewer: insanityrules (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. That's all I can say. I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter because it is KILLING me to wait. Incredible. So good. Wow.
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
“He leaned down and kissed me and I noted that he pressed his right hand firmly into the side of my neck. Through the pressure of his touch I began to feel my pulse thrum against his palm. Then I realized that was why he was touching me that way. I willed down my impulse to tear up. I didn't begrudge Edward his last encounters with my humanity.” The start of this chapter is so touching. Bella saying her goodbye’s, Edward not wanting her to change. I love how Bella keeps assuring Edward this is what she wants. She wants him forever. So lovely!
All the family helping her (or themselves) to say goodbye to her human side. All the food, movies bowling, Edward taking the dare to eat pancakes!
Oops the bucket list! But she got dominating Edward, spanks and she touched his teeth. I loved how you made them ‘sensitive.’ Oh and the sex was hot…clothes ripped off, tied to the stool. Licking his teeth!! RAWR!!
"It does help, so thanks. I'm just...it's just that I've spent two years finding every way imaginable to avoid biting her, and now that's what I'm supposed to do. It's...weird.” It is going against everything he’s been doing. Even with Jasper’s assurance that Bella is feeling no hesitation.
"Eat. Fast," I ground out.“ LOL Oh the ice cream sundae…Yumm!
"Ed...ward. Unngh. When...when it's time. Oh. I want...I want it to be like...like this. I want you to...bite me, Edward. I want...oh God...you to bite me when you come." Gods! This is awesome!
"You can start reading...after. There's a page for every hour. That's important, Edward. No reading ahead. This way I'll be able to talk to you while...I'm out, uh, under, whatever." She knows how hard it’s going to be for Edward while she changes. I loved this! Brilliant idea bb!
And so he bites her… I think this has been one of the best chapters! Nicely done! Thanks bb!
Author's Response: I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE LONG REVIEWS LIKE THIS THAT SPECIFY PASSAGES YOU LIKED! THANKS!
Reviewer: Urs (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Amazing chapter!
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