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Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I can't wait for what comes next!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Haha. I cant wait until Bella finds number 36. 'What?? I didn't put that?? .....EDWARD.' HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
you are absolutely awesome !!
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh shit!! Edward needs to stop!!! Aww I can't wait til she is a vamp or if she will ever become one!!! Edward needs to realize it is BELLA!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Awwwwww... its so sweet!!!!
Reviewer: VampireCat3 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! This chapter was amazing as always but UPDATE SOON!!
Reviewer: acseisks (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
wait. did he just bite her? rlly?!?!? if thats true. then YES! finally!! oh god finally
omg u better update fast!!!! i bet edward is going to feel guilty or something.
aw poor edward
but YES!! finally. i've been waiting for this!!!
Reviewer: MaxGal (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wow! Thanks, hot, hot wet Edward!! & some self-love! Yum!!
Reviewer: yummo_Pattinson (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh wow that was awesome I hate the clifhanger but just makes the next one if there will be another even better!!! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: azure_horizon (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
*is dead*
I am so proud of dear Edward... He's did so well :D I prefer the idea of him biting her to the way SM had him change her... Her way was soo oimpersonal. Good work :D
Reviewer: msutton1977 (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Where is this listed in the forum?
Author's Response: Go to the forum page and scroll down to Fan Fiction. Click on Post-Eclipse, then click on The List. Thanks!
Reviewer: msutton1977 (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Tell me you're going to update this soon!! Love it!
Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I wasn't even going to review because I'm sure you get SO many... Fucking hell that was hot! You are giving me everything in the twilight books I wanted but knew SM couldn't write it... I can't wait to read the rest :) Thank you for making my husband's & my sex life MUCH better. I'm sure a lot of your readers would agree!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I am very lucky to have so many devoted readers who review. But I read EVERY ONE! And love them all too! So thanks for reviewing. I'm so glad you (and your hubs) are enjoying!
Reviewer: jenstampin (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ALICE, RUN!!!
HE'S SUCKING HER DRY!!!
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I wondered if she would ask to be changed while they made love. I think the general concensus is that would be the way to go so I was glad for that. Thanks for the list at the end I had forgotten some things. I love how one scene contained about five things from the list. Nice to know if you plan it right you can weave multiple fantasies together. Great chapter.
Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Love love love it =) The idea of the sex/orgasm/bite has always pwned me...thanks for that!
Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
oh, fucking god that was hot as hell !
Reviewer: AlmaM1231 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
You kept us waiting a long time for a new chapter. But I forgive you. :) It was worth the wait. ;)
I truly enjoy this story. Yes, it's sexy as hell but it's also very sweet and intimate. I love the interaction between Bella & Edward. How they make sure each others needs are met and satisfied. How they're so open with each other and trusting. And especially how they're so freakin' kinky and horny all the time! Ah, newlyweds! LOL
Something I also enjoy in this story, this chapter is no exception, is how the Cullens try their best to make Bella comfortable. I thought it was so thoughtful of them to try to get her to enjoy her last human days as much as possible. And how they all contributed ideas on things Bella should put on her bucket list showed how close and united this family really is. Makes me wish the Cullens were my family! :)
What else? Oh yeah, I voted for you for the Bellie Awards. I wish you the best of luck! I really, really enjoy your writing. You're awesome! Thanks for having the guts to share your writing with us all. It's much appreciated.
I don't know if I've reviewed this story before today (I USED to be really, really bad about reviewing until recently). But I promise to review as much as possible from now on. Another Author & an interview by psymom helped me see how important reviews are for the Authors. Oh, and sorry if this review is super long. Yeah, I tend to do that. It's hard for me to stop writing. LOL You see? I can't stop! :D
Thanks again! I <3 this story! :)
-Alma Rebelde (Rebellious Soul)
Author's Response: I LOVE LOVE LOVE LONG REVIEWS, so never apologize for that! Thanks for reviewing and for all the positive thoughts!
Reviewer: LeHeureBleu (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
W.O.W. that was so sad and so loving and so INCREDIBLY hot at the same time. thanks!! i can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Saxon23 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh Lord , new to this.
What an amazing story!1
I love the differnet points of view - seeing into Emmetts mind is delightful! mnay writers use Bpov and Epov however this is the firt i have read that includs the others...maybe after this story has ran its natural course you could do some "outtakes" of the other Cullen pov's.
You certainly captued Emmett as I think of him.
Not going to pretend, I love the smut however I love the fact that it has a place in a great story. I know SM owns the charcters howevr i love that you have remembered that they are teenagers, and behave as such!
Anyway, looking forward to the next chaper/chapters.
Dont ever stop writing!
sax
Reviewer: RAH08 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was great! I cannot believe she is going to be changed soon! Although we all cannot wait for that to happen, YAY!! Great job!
Reviewer: Bellas Humanity (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
wow this is utterly fantastic. I'm on the edge of my seat, please please please hurry and update soon! You're writing is impeccable and I love every second of reading it.
Reviewer: Krinets23 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
This was absolutely one of your best chapters, if not the best! It made me stop lurking and finally write a review, lol! I laughed, I cried, and my heart broke for the two of them! I loved Stephanie Meyer's version of 'the change', but I loved your's more! I loved that they have such a stong emotional connection through it and I have to say.. I would chose your way of being changed over a bloody birth/death anyday! They didn't give her the morphine before he bit her though!! I think I stopped breathing when he read the notebook. I can't wait to read more about it! Powerful chapter!
p.s. As always, you write the best dirty little scenes ever! :)
p.p.s. Hope you are having fun at TwiCon!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Sooo goood!
Reviewer: sonecrackle (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Sooo goood!
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