Wonderful chapter.  I am going to be so sad to see this story end.  Any thoughts of a sequel?

I have to congradulate you on a fantastic story

long may your writing continue

 

Ok I wasn't going to review until I was completely done reading the whole story, but I have to include something now.

THAT'S MY WEDDING DRESS!!! your inspiration for Bella's "honeymoon dress" is my actual wedding dress...mine's in the color Pool :)

And my ring's Aquamarine, and that necklace would match so well...too bad it is WAY too expensive :P

and now I've got my eyes on that corset too

Just wanted to let you know...since I'm reviewing earlier than expected, I might as well tell all. ;)

My husband and I are both in the military and we've been separated for 2 months, since he got sent back to the States.  (yes we're married, but the ceremony for our families and everything isn't until next year)

This is the first time we've been separated like this since we started seeing eachother two years ago...it's been difficult on both of us.  I remembered one of my old favorite fanfic sites "checkmated.com" for Ron/Hermione stories, so I started to search for a Twilight-featured site, like that.  It didn't take too long, and I'm so thankful that I found this site.

We both read the books at the same time and Bella and Edward's relationship reminds us a lot of ours...not to mention we both love vampires ;)

Anyways, so I found your list as one of the most read/reviewed...so it HAD to be good.

And you are freaking AMAZING!  Honestly, the story is so fantastic and you stay with the characters so well...it's like you're SM's NC-17-rated other half or something.

Well, after I found your story, I thought my husband might enjoy it too...since he's having a hard time being away from me for so long.  So, I copy all the chapters after I read them, and I send them to his work e-mail ;)

He loves them too!  

You've definitely given us ideas to use in our new house once I get back to the States.  Amazingly, we've started our own lists based off Bella's.

Thanks for being totally freaking awesome!

Author's Response:

OMG!  I can't believe the dress I picked it your dress!  That is so awesome!  Thanks for sharing your story about your husband and it's incredible that you forwarded the chaps to him and he's enjoying too.  Hang in there--I'm not military but I work for the Navy and my uncle's in the Army, so I'm familiar with what people go through during a deployment--hang in there and I hope you have friends and family to help you through!  Thanks for reviewing!

The sense of deperation at the end was overwhelming! You did a wonderful job writing that last scene! Amazing work!! If the last few days of my life are as hot as Bella's I will be the luckiest woman ever hahahaha! No TwiCon for me *tears* Good luck at the contest though for your one shot and I'll be sure to go vote for the August 5th contest. Love your story and I have so much respect that you don't just fall off the map and leave your story unfinished even when your life gets crazy! We appreciate it! Here's hoping for 10,000! <3

Loving it so far.  God that's right he can smell her as clear as day.  Can't wait to see how things go.  :)

I can't believe I didn't get to read this till now!  I was recouping from my own Comic-Con adventure and reread ch 21-22...I got 'distracted' and never for a chance to reread ch 23 and now this newest one.

Damn!  The description on Edward in leather and basically fulfulling #34, 35, 37 and 38 all at once:  well (again) DAMN, GIRL!  That was just to freakin' much! 

This whole freakin' chapter was rather EPIC if you ask me!  Lordie, and the 'teeth licking-thing'...UNG!

So besides the sexin' (again, EPIC), the elements to added:  everyone participating in the last days of Bella's human experiences was really knd of sweet and helped to move the story along, in addition to giving both the Bella and Edward characters a chance to REALLY process/share their feelings about their love, life and this big step.  I think that's something MAJOR:  in the 'Breakng Dawn' that was one of the missteps and missed opportunities of the book.  By having Bella get pregnant and the whole focus of that time after their honeymoon being on the pregnancy, that processing of emotions, etc. was lost.  So brava for providing that here!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oooh, evil cliffie!  LOL, I love the story though, even if you're torturing me right now!

The notebook for Edward to read during the transformation (like the tatoo, etc.) has made this an unbelievably emotional journey.  Tears are flowing and you're amazing.  I've also complained about the constant sex in other fanfics because it loses its bang (get it? bang?).  However, you have constant lemons, and they are done so beautifully, sensitively and originally that I never tire of them.  You are the master.

Aaaahhhh, so very erotic.  I know that's the w ay I would want him to turn me as well!!!!  Great job!

 

i cannot believe how big a cliffhanger that was..:O

 

i hate u 4 always leaving a cliffhanger but luv u 4 making this story :)

you really, REALLY need to update, I cried and my stomach is in a knot. I feel terrible but at the same time so good. I love your story, and I know I'm a complete drama queen right now and I know you think I'm being overly dramatic and if I ever see this review again I'll think 'what was I thinking?'... believe me, it's happened before... but I'm completely consumed by your story, and I just really can't wait for an update. so please hurry ! love it !

Oh, my God, I am seriously crying. That was a fantastic chapter.

I LOVE the gift Bella gave Edward - now she can be "with him" while she's changing. PLEASE tell me that we are going to get to see what she's written.

I love your Bella - she's perfect - and we all know that Edward is, too!!

Thanks for a great story - I eagerly await the next chapter!

umm HOT!!! Love this stoy :-)