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Reviewer: Mary Less (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

You are an AMAZING writer!

Reviewer: ZoeyWinters (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

This is such a great story so far!!!! Out of the hundreds of fan fictions I've read of Twilight, this has got to be the best!! If it proves how well this story is written, I almost never cry over stories but Edward's feelings through this was enough to make me start!

Reviewer: fanofbones (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

That was wonderful and lol at the idea of the cold water. Brillant!!

I loved it.


Reviewer: mani12191 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Oh dear LORD. It took me a few days to read this but my god, it was so worth it. This is such a great fic and I'm lovin all the lemons and NC-17 going on :p Can't wait til you update again! And I hope this goes on for a longer time cause I could keep reading about this damn list for ages lmao.

Reviewer: Mona Lisa (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

ugh everything was perfect, per usual. I am so unbelievably excited for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Mona Lisa (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

OMG NEW CHAPTER. haven't read it yet, just excited!!!!! ahhh my flat mates think I'm crazyyy. time to read!! 

Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Holy shit holy shit holy shit holy shit!!!!!!  That was such a perfectly cruel place to stop omg omg omg!!!  I'm fucking going bonkers at the moment, I'm sorry, but I am!

This chapter was so wonderful.  All the things that they wanted her to do before her change.  The bucket list was a little much, but it made perfect sense.  I can see where Edward would get offended though.

Oh man, I can't even imagine what that book she made for him is going to say.  You're totally going to have me crying aren't you?!  Well take your time, and don't you worry about making us wait.  It's always worth it, and when I get an email that you've updated, all my frustration from waiting quickly melts away. 

You're just wonderful, and I'm so glad I have a story like this to read.  Thank you for your great talent and for sharing it with us. 

Man, the women on my site really need to be reading this.  Just that they don't really like Twilighted much, and you have to be a member to read.  If you do decide (I know you don't have tons of time), you are a member at Freedom Fan Fiction Writers ( so you could post at any time.  I'll gladly help in any way I can also.  Let me know :)

Author's Response:

Hey Carolyn--SO glad you enjoyed!  Thanks for reviewing!  The story is also on for those who don't like Twilighted.  I haven't posted on your site just because I've been traveling a lot and it's hard for me to keep up with both Twilighted and as it is--I'm afraid I won't be able to keep up with a third.  But it's on my list, so to speak.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Damn, this chapter was all kinds of hot! Looking forward to the change & hearing some of what Bella wrote.

Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Good freaking God..... Just when I think it can't possibly get any hotter...


Poor Edward, I do feel for him. I'm anxiously looking forward to what happens next. I'm curious what Bella left for him to read.

Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

It took me several chapters to get used to slutty bella and raunchy edward...but I'm loving them both now!!!

Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

this is the best story i have read on

this chapter was awesome

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

dunn dunn dunnnnn


Reviewer: LilleLilo (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Whoa. This is my very first review. I have been so caught up in reading all chapters the last two days, that I didn't want to stop and reveiw. Perhaps I should have, but now I have time.

I am truly enjoying your story. All the things I wished the books had, but know they would never have because of the target group (and author). Being 31 y.o single woman I love to be able to close my eyes and picture all the great fantasies you present in the story. Awsome. Thank you so much! I will be looking forward to your coming chapters. You've gotten yourself a new fan :-)

Reviewer: kiveli (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

I love Edward and Bella in this story..they're more cofident.more relax with their sexuality and finally acting like normal teenagers...Can't wait to read more...Thanks for the great story!!!

Reviewer: debbieg (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

I have been reading this story for awhile.. I really enjoyed it.  Is there going to be more?  If not it was soo good.. Thank you for shareing the love of the List.. I really enjoyed it..   thanks for sharing your story..   Debbei

Reviewer: lovinrob (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

That was beautiful :)

Reviewer: Xiggy C (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

I just started reading the story a few days ago, and I was really hoping that there was another chapter to go along with this one! I'm excited for the next update! This is really good, and I really can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

oh my god! it's finally happened! and what a way for it to happen!!!!!!! the book Bella wrote for Edward was so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! loved it!

Reviewer: lovinrob (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Fuck, you owe me a whole new underwear draw full of new panties !!

Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Wonderful chapter.  I am going to be so sad to see this story end.  Any thoughts of a sequel?

Reviewer: RobLover90 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

This was my first ff ever, and I absolutely LOVE it!

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

I have to congradulate you on a fantastic story

long may your writing continue


Reviewer: lovinrob (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

Holy mother of god, this story is FUCKHOT !!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: chaos_ever_after (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Ok I wasn't going to review until I was completely done reading the whole story, but I have to include something now.

THAT'S MY WEDDING DRESS!!! your inspiration for Bella's "honeymoon dress" is my actual wedding dress...mine's in the color Pool :)

And my ring's Aquamarine, and that necklace would match so well...too bad it is WAY too expensive :P

and now I've got my eyes on that corset too

Just wanted to let you know...since I'm reviewing earlier than expected, I might as well tell all. ;)

My husband and I are both in the military and we've been separated for 2 months, since he got sent back to the States.  (yes we're married, but the ceremony for our families and everything isn't until next year)

This is the first time we've been separated like this since we started seeing eachother two years's been difficult on both of us.  I remembered one of my old favorite fanfic sites "" for Ron/Hermione stories, so I started to search for a Twilight-featured site, like that.  It didn't take too long, and I'm so thankful that I found this site.

We both read the books at the same time and Bella and Edward's relationship reminds us a lot of ours...not to mention we both love vampires ;)

Anyways, so I found your list as one of the most read/ it HAD to be good.

And you are freaking AMAZING!  Honestly, the story is so fantastic and you stay with the characters so's like you're SM's NC-17-rated other half or something.

Well, after I found your story, I thought my husband might enjoy it too...since he's having a hard time being away from me for so long.  So, I copy all the chapters after I read them, and I send them to his work e-mail ;)

He loves them too!  

You've definitely given us ideas to use in our new house once I get back to the States.  Amazingly, we've started our own lists based off Bella's.

Thanks for being totally freaking awesome!

Author's Response:

OMG!  I can't believe the dress I picked it your dress!  That is so awesome!  Thanks for sharing your story about your husband and it's incredible that you forwarded the chaps to him and he's enjoying too.  Hang in there--I'm not military but I work for the Navy and my uncle's in the Army, so I'm familiar with what people go through during a deployment--hang in there and I hope you have friends and family to help you through!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Taty_1973 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Jesus... this story keeps getting better and better. I love your characterization of E & B and the way you decided to go for the bite... soo romantic *happy sigh*. I can't wait to read more!


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