'mine fucke'r haha thats good and funny, well done x

Hi Laura,

GREAT chapter and well worth the wait.  I wasn't sure I'd like Edward as a leather vampire but boy was I wrong!  gah!  Makes me want to go out and read about the Brotherhood books you talked about.  Do you happen to have a picture of this get up, like you did for Bella's cowgirl outfit?

Edward's spanking her WITH the list and what he said while he spanked her was brilliant!  heehee  I also love how comfortable he is with her now and can just tell her (during role playing) to 'get on her knees'.  You are the master, Laura.

I really loved her gift to him and what she wrote in the forward, 'until I come back to you'.  Just brought tears to my eyes.  Also sniffled a bit at his internal dialogue when it was time to change her and he wasn't ready.  Very bittersweet.  I'm so glad she was changed this way, during their most loving, intimate act and SO much better than fountains of blood, like in the book!  haha

You keep adding to the list.  Does that mean your story will go on a bit longer than you thought?  (please, please, please!!)

love, Richelle

OMG! I need more!

This update was amazing and I can't wait to read what happens next. Please, please, please update soon!

Rating : 10

it was so good.  it made me smile, laugh and cry.  only the great stories can do that.  thank you!

your characters have come so far - what a journey, for all of us!

OMG!  This story is so awesome.  My husband and I have made our own lists, which has been so fun having something to refer back to and exciting to see how creative we can get.  I don't really know how to explain this, but this story has also helped me "come out of my shell" in the bedroom too with certain things.  I guess I should say thank you for helping spice up my sex life!  HAHA...Please keep writing :)

Such a sweet, yet incredibly hot chapter!

This was great and i loved it. Cannot wait for more to come.

I'll preface my review by saying that I'm a new reader--just started chapter 1 last night. Though I'd heard of this story before, I was really motivated to read after hearing about it several times at Twi-Con. And now, my review!:

Wow. THIS is the fanfic I've been looking for since I first started Googling around for Twific last year (after putting "Twilight" down after my first read-through and declaring, "OMG, I just HAVE to read about them banging!" Patience is not my forte, LOL). It's just amazing: canon--well, "improved-upon canon", IMHO--sexy as hell, funny, intelligent (yet not pretentious), thoughtful, sentimental, touching, and realistic. All at the same time. How do you do it? Reading this was so immensely satisfying, and I just want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this with all of us. I imagine (and know from limited personal experience within other fandoms) that writing fics is not easy, especially stories of this length. So, seriously, THANK YOU for your hard work and dedication. It is so appreciated. The chapters kept getting better and better; the end of 24 was just *perfect*. I can't wait to see how you'll end this, and again, thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Author's Response:

Reviews like yours are why I'm still writing this story!  Thanks so much!

omg.... in serious need for more!!!! this shyt is addictive!!!!! good job!!!

WOW!!!  This update was amazing and not just the sexual intimacy between Bella and Edward but the love and communication between the entire family.  I love the fact that he bit her when they were making love, it was erotic and romantic to me.

And the way the family join in to make Bella last human days enjoyable was wonderful, as well as the way Carlisle and the boys tried to make Edward more accepting of what he had to do to make Bella his forever.

BTW, Domward was hott and fantastic.

Update soon.

WOW!  Oh My God!  What about the morhpine?  I guess I'll have to wait to find out.  Please hurry to post more!

OK, you totally got me! I laughed out loud several times and hit my desk, but I hit it the hardest when I realized this was the last chapter posted and I had to wait for the change! And the vampire sex!

Can I post a link here? This is the song I always hear when I think of Bella's lullaby, and having the orchestra play it was so wonderful, and I HATED the lulaby in the movie! and when I hear you describe it, I think of this.

it's called Playing Love, by Ennio Morricone from the movie 1900

Thanks for the wonderful story. I loved Breaking Dawn, but other possibilities are interesting!

Morganlizard