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Reviewer: cygnet715 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
my guess is... inner thigh, where her second mark from Edward is located, or maybe on the opposite leg, cause that one's still tender? Either way, really great new plot addition.
Reviewer: trishd (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I absolutely loved the end of this chapter....perfection. This was fuck hot and I am looking forward to Edward and Bella taking a hunting trip. Hooh -rah!!!!
Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love the way he turned her. Pefect as Edward couldn't think too much. Your cliff hangers are going to kill me....
Reviewer: TeresaMarie (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I have been reading this for the past few hours. AMAZING! i am on the edge of my seat and cant wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Well her last days as a human were definitely packed with fun stuff! I can't wait to see what was in her book for him and what happens when she wakes up!
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I have been waiting for #8 since she first wrote the list...THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Reviewer: JCullen23 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Try not to take too long with the next chapter!! You ended this one with a craving for more information....
Reviewer: cygnet715 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow. I've read a lot of fanfic, and I gotta say, this definitely is on my top ten list. Thank you! It's wonderful. (I don't know if you're done with writing the chapters for this series, but if you're not, definitely keep going! I know I'm on to the next chapter!)
Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was grrrreeeaaat! What a way to end the chapter, I will check more frequently in anticipation. As always you ROCK!!
P.S. loved the way you emphasized the "love making" scenes, although I enjoy the hardcore raunch as well. It definately fit the purpose. All hail my favorite writter, because once again it needs to be said..... YOU ROCK!!!
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OH. MY. God.
PLEASE
CONTINUE
THIS
STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
So sad, yet so happy.... Loose ends being wrapped up.... wanting to go but not wanting to go.... my heart is heavy yet happy at the same time. How the hell do you do that?????
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Ohhhhh. what a honeymoon!! Why wasn't mine like that??? I want a refund!
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You know what is crazy? I have been DYING for the honeymoon, but when that part came up, I stopped, had lunch, cleaned, and then continued reading. Was I stalling? Was I nervous? I don't know. After so much build up, I think I just needed a moment, just like B&E.
You are a very gifted writer!
Reviewer: Rainbow (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ok, so I am pretty new to all of this. Saw the movie last year and have just read all four books on holiday. Now I liked BD, but only in as much as it was all I had. As an adult woman I thought the whole Renesmee thing was a bit mental, the change was just ridiculous and I was SORELY disappointed in their (lack of) sexy times although I'm not sure what else I could have expected given the teen audience. My one overriding feeling was... what if I could create my own ending... what if someone else out there could... and then I discovered FF for the very first time (who knew!) and this is literally one of the first things I have read - A.W.E.S.O.M.E. !! I've read it all up to this point in the last few days - unfortunately I am away from my husband this week, but let me tell you, you have taken me RIGHT back to how I felt when we first met at the age of 20. And I can also relate to so much of your tender writing about marriage, which only happended for us 10 years after we first got together. Of course, there are a few gaps that I'm looking forward to addressing REAL soon...
I love the balance of tenderness, family loyalty, humour (Emmett - HILARIOUS) and of course the HOT sex. The sex is written with real understanding of emotions and physical need. I love how in canon it is, any deviations I totally get. The intelligence of your writing and obvious immense consideration of plot direction takes the content away from pure smut to really something worthy of a novel in its own right. Of course he would change her like this, nothing else makes sense. I kind of wonder if you are SM in FF disguise writing what she always wanted to but her audience wouldn't allow... are you?
So these are the things I have REALLY loved, so far anyway (please more than 2 chapters left...please...):
- The growling. oh. my. god.
- The ripping of clothes, I want that!
- The fabulous descriptions of his oral on her, does that make me selfish? don't.care.
- Her wedding gifts for him - inspirational, jesus I bet you thought you'd struck gold when you came up with that?! I have visions of you dancing in the aisles whilst you shop ha ha!
- The characterisation of Alice and Emmett - just love it ;0)
- The internal Ed-dialogue, GENIUS
The only thing you seemed to have missed (forget the morphine - who cares, and yeah if you only have one opportunity for his cum before you change - it's gotta be right inside you), which I have only seen one person in the reviews pick up on, WHAT ABOUT HIS BALLS???? There's this massive void that they don't even seem to have TOUCHED on yet, well maybe just about but definitely not really... ;o) Seriously this needs addressing sharpish and I think there is some major catching up to do!
That's all I gotta say :) Apart from I never thought I would be reading hot 17yo vampire porn and literally obsessing over it ha ha ha
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Arrrggghhh. That is me growling. Is the fucking honeymoon here, yet?????
(great chapter, as usual) (I just have no patience, or self-control for that matter)
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I did not mind the change of cars at all. There were many parts of the books that I felt didn't quite fit or that I did not like. Feel free to change away!!
It is amazing how much their relationship has evolved and grown. The intimacy is amazing, both physically and emotionally.
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Fucking her mouth.
OMG This was so hot, I couldn't even believe it. Your smut just gets better every chapter. I also liked it when she teased Edward and pretended she was going to keep the panties. LOL! He got so mad.
40) Watch Edward pleasure himself
YES! YES! PLEASE YES! That's my favourite now. Officially. That probably would hae been my #1!
Oh right, and thanks for the Wankward at the end there/ Very nice, I always appreciate it.
Reviewer: greenyellowjello (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow.
This is such a frickin' amazing story.
Are you going to be continuing it???
I'm a sucker for blood and I think you handled all the bloodlust scenes perfectly!
great job!
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I flippin love this story my husband does too although he doent know it lol thx
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Edward Cullen. wet. in the shower. spanking. me.
I. THINK. I. JUST. CAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Saxann (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hi,
thank you so much for this story, it's amazing! I must confess, you took up all my fantasies, but put them into words so much better than I ever could.
I spent every free minute with this story in the last few days and I loved it!
I hope to read more!
Thank you.
Saxann
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
You go Bella, dirty talking Edward is HOT!!!
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
The symphony did me in. Wow. Crap. How can this shit keep getting hotter and hotter? Holy fuckballs.
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Such growth. Such honesty. I am so glad they finally talked about everything. I was worried when Edward slipped back into his darkness, thank goodess he had evolved enough to let Bella help him find his way out.
Reviewer: Hopelessaddict (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
That was fucking HOT. OMFG. Where the hell is my wine and toy????
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