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Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow, so I definitely just spent the past day and a half reading up to this point instead of working on my thesis. Awesome story! I don't normally go for stories that are quite so NC17, but there is enough depth to the story that it isn't just about the sex. I really enjoyed Bella's (I think?) realization about what marriage is, but I think her sexual confidence came about a little quickly...(or maybe I'm just putting myself into Bella's shoes a bit too much!). Sometimes it seems like Edward is a little too much of a pansy (like when he was supposed to be the one dominating on their weekend away), but I guess that's just Edward. Anyway, I LOVED the story and can't wait for an update!!!
Reviewer: ColorMeBeautiful (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
no! is he killing her? cliff hangie!!!! did he stop?
or did it keep going? y must u torment me? Edward!!!!! bite ME!!! BRUISE ME!!!!!! please....oh.....edward....oh....."edward!!!!!"
"if i hear u scream my name like that a million times, it will never be enough!"
"then do it again!" i shout!
lol good job!
Reviewer: bellaLife (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I give this entire story a standing ovation! I never thought I would see Bella in a dominating role, but you pulled it off well.
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Omg This chapter is crazy i cant wait till Edwards turn. :)
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This is mad goood.
Reviewer: Im His Bella (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ahhh! soo good!
Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love this story, the list idea is cool. And I love the idea of a notebook for Edward to read so he doesn't just freak out the whole time, which of course, we know is exactly what he would do. Great writing, some of the best lemons ever in this story. I read this story over and over, it's good.
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
#10 - PANTY CHANGE ALERT!!! - OMFG - that was amazing. Sweet dreams to all of us who read this before we slumber. Awwwwwwwwwwwwww... Sweet chapter. Guys have to read this as a manual. You don't always need to have full intercourse to get the best orgasm ever. Just the most simplist of touches can do it completely too.
Very good writing - WOW!!! - Panting here - got to learn to breathe again. LOL ;) - Love #10.
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
For the moment all my eyes could see was my glistening cock sliding in and out of Bella's beautiful red lips.
I definately just realized that Bella spends this entire scene staring at Edward's balls. I giggled.
Author's Response: LOL
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
omg that was terrifying!!!! I mean, the smut was unbelievably hot, as per usual, but i always freak out during bella change scenes. I dont know why, she's always fine, lol! it was also sad :'( it's always sadder from edward's point of view.
Gotta say, List-wise, I'm REALLY looking forward to numbers 39 and 40. and now she can actually sneak up on him and spy on him without him knowing!!!!!! ACTUAL voyeurism. oh man...
Reviewer: dinie (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow! Anticipating the next chapter is all I can think about, so....
Reviewer: hbarbie (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I just started reading this last week and I have to say it is some of the best Twilight fanfiction I've read. I'm not really into the AH or AU. But I do think you've done a great job with showing a different outcome after their marriage. I also think you write extremely well. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and sorely regretting the end of such a captivating story. It's also given me some ideas in my personal life. *wink*
Reviewer: HerMyatt (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
AHH! I LOVE THIS STORY! You're an amazing writter :D.
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Omg. I swear u like one of the best writers EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
absolutely perfect. thank you.
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love how this started!!!!!
Reviewer: JoseeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Given that I have read your story twice and that I'm about to start re-re-reading it for a third time, I think it's time for me to come out of lurkdom and leave you an awesome review.
First, thank you for writing such an awesome story! Not only do you have a beautiful writing style, but your lemons are just made of awesome! Just like Bella, I'm ruining panties at an incredible rate here (that is when I'm wearing them... tee hee hee!!)!
Anyway, keep up the good work! I really don't want this story to end EVER!! Oh! And though I haven't started a list of my own, I'm contemplating the idea more and more every day, and I know for a fact I'll cave in very soon! :P
Congrats again on such an awesome story!
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
The imagines in my head - OMG!!! Awesome.. Oh is Bella in TROUBLE!!!! hehehehe. Love it. Heck if he wasn't such a worried wort he wouldn't have to take care of himself in the shower. I know, I know he's worried he'll hurt her but damn!!! Can't wait to see how he'll punish her? OH BOY!!! Only gonna get better.
Reviewer: jbess (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Loving the List!! It was great to meet you at TwiCon too.
Reviewer: dinie (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Here I am on chapter 20 and this is my first review. I'm so sorry. It's just such a great story that I can't even stop to take a minute to show my appreciation. This is fucktabulous! I am constantly laughing out loud and not the least bit embarrassed that my husband thinks I'm losing it. The Jacob/Mine/Fucker fantasy was just too much...and I can't say how happy that little line makes me. Girl, you really are a wacky chick! And I mean that in the nicest way. You truly need to start writing humorous romance novels. I haven't said that to any other author, and lord knows I've read enough. Honestly, all the illicit sex would normally turn me off, but you make it so outrageously fun. Thank you so much for sharing your story.
Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Man, you can write a story! But you need one more chapter on the first days after the change! Don't leave us hanging!
Reviewer: WakingSky (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Please, please - another chapter!!!!
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This chapter so deserves a review. it was so cute. and who'd have thought? Bella the dominant. Amazing.
Wonderfully written can't wait to read the rest :)
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
You flippin' made me cry...damn it! Chest and throat tightening...the thing.
Hot as always...and I love how Edward bit her...HOT...the way vampire sex should be.
Can't wait for another update!
Reviewer: hatesHEA (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I love NIN's "Closer', that song is killer, and fit the moment well
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