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Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
appreciated the change of cars, fits this bella so much better. good job.
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
that was ...... i haven't been touched by a story in so long in so many ways as this one chapter has touched me. the love the lust the overwhelming emotion, it was awesome. hats off to you laura cullen, you just made me cancel all my plans for the rest of this saturday so that i can finish this story!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
i like this Bellla. that was awesome!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
i'm speechless.................and very wet ;)
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
that was SEXY AS HELL!!! I don't want this to end. I passed up a shopping trip and have been in bed reading all saturday morning because i don't want this story to end. YOU ARE A GENIUS!!!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
best phone sex EVER!!!!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
My next boyfriend must have a piano and im going to learn to play!!!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was the hottest ever. i'm going to find every thing u have written & make it part of my collection. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i'm sppechless!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
OH. MY. GOD!
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
i re-read the masturbation scene 3 times wanting to see the words and thought of Edward as he came. no dice. but it was still so very hot. Edward likes 2 fisted hand jobs! who knew LOL
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
leaving the panties! nice touch. Bella is so naughty, I can relate to "this" bella. :)
Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
so hot!
Reviewer: thalyrocks (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
loved it made me feel like i was bella
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMG - Panty Change Altert!!!!!! HELLO......... :)
Yes #7 is supposed to be in the Volvo but HELL 10 times better in the Aston Martin. SWEET!!!
Hot Damn hun...fantastic job. K - this story really does need to be published to every male out there. ;) - Smiling wide.
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Your doing great!!! - OMG I want a Tuesday morning. Hmmmmmmmmm...smiling. ;) - Keep up the good work and don't worry after the last chapter we need one chapter to bring your blood pressure back down to normal even for a brief moment.
Reviewer: julia4287 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hi! I've read all of your chapters, but this is the first time I have review.
I absolutely loved this story.
You, as a writer, really did a fantastic job. You showed the emotional side of Bella and Edwards physical relationship as well as the more, um, naughty side too,
I am really glad that I read this, and hope you write more things like this for me to read!
Thanks.
Reviewer: laurathelittle (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
You are one naughty author. That is so not fair leaving us hanging there! Especially because he hasn't stopped drinking yet. Oh, I wonder if Carlise will have to come in and stop him. Just as a point of referance, you said the morphine would need to go in before the venom, but he's bitten her and there wasn't and injection first.
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow, so I definitely just spent the past day and a half reading up to this point instead of working on my thesis. Awesome story! I don't normally go for stories that are quite so NC17, but there is enough depth to the story that it isn't just about the sex. I really enjoyed Bella's (I think?) realization about what marriage is, but I think her sexual confidence came about a little quickly...(or maybe I'm just putting myself into Bella's shoes a bit too much!). Sometimes it seems like Edward is a little too much of a pansy (like when he was supposed to be the one dominating on their weekend away), but I guess that's just Edward. Anyway, I LOVED the story and can't wait for an update!!!
Reviewer: ColorMeBeautiful (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
no! is he killing her? cliff hangie!!!! did he stop?
or did it keep going? y must u torment me? Edward!!!!! bite ME!!! BRUISE ME!!!!!! please....oh.....edward....oh....."edward!!!!!"
"if i hear u scream my name like that a million times, it will never be enough!"
"then do it again!" i shout!
lol good job!
Reviewer: bellaLife (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I give this entire story a standing ovation! I never thought I would see Bella in a dominating role, but you pulled it off well.
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Omg This chapter is crazy i cant wait till Edwards turn. :)
Reviewer: BrooklymBrn4lyf (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This is mad goood.
Reviewer: Im His Bella (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ahhh! soo good!
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