Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love Bella's book. What a darling DISTRACTION for him. :)
Many kudos to Jasper! A real American hero.
I'm glad that Edward stood for not Barbie-fying Bella. Whew!
Another stunning chapter. I was thinking of this story this morning and hoping to see more of it soon!
Reviewer: Alis (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Wow! Bella's book was amazing. Also, the pulse countdown? My own heart was racing!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: RebeccaKay (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
That was beautiful..
Really and truly.
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hey Laura, REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. Just how will he enjoy that blood of hers? hmmmm....
love, Richelle
Author's Response: Yay Richelle! Next chapter should be up any time now...been in the queue for over two days! Hope y'all like it!
Reviewer: tootsiepop91 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I have been reading your story for a week now and I'm all done. Is anymore to come? It's killing me! Lol, I check it a couple of times a day to see if chapter 25 has been posted yet. I am in love with The List!!! Rating 10X100000!!! Lol
Reviewer: Liza_ (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
really dont understand how you manage to make it so erotic and yet still...romantic and sweet somehow. Naughty edward and bella are such entertaining incarnations, but they're still in character somehow. stunningggg!
Reviewer: leerleer (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hey Laura are we getting another chapter? I would love to see how Bella turns out.
Reviewer: Liza_ (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Last two lines! absolutely brilliant! you have me seriously giggling :P
Reviewer: MandieMarmalade (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Such a wonderful honeymoon! just glorious!
Reviewer: ramona (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my God. This is what Breaking Dawn should have been. Please keep writing.
ramona
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wonderfully done Laura!! Loved how Bella had to come to Edward's aid. Awesome and love the conversation next to the fire. Can't wait to hear what Bella's revenage is going to be on Emmett for his teasing. HA!! Also can't wait to see what Edward's big surprise is. Love the enternity ring and love where the tatoo is on Bella's body - PERFECT!!! :)
Bravo again on a very sweet and touching Part 2 with a touch of lemon. Also my girls and I love LEMONS!!! and it's been voted hands down you have the most of them. ;)
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMFG Laura - BRAVO on an excellent Part 1 - dear god help me; we still got 2 parts of this weekend. I'm gonna be spent as well and good thing I washed all my panties. Gonna be changing alot fer sure.
Again - DAMN GOOD JOB girl!!!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I always thought phone sex would be awkward but I like the way that they did it. Hahahahahha, I gotta love Emmett for that! Always gotta give her crap! Great chapter hun!
Reviewer: biankajollen (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
WHY ARE YOU WAITING SO LONG TO UPDATE?
its ridiculous. i check out this page EVERYDAY and nothing.
grrrrr. LOL. i love this story.
update soon?
Author's Response: Um, cuz this isn't the only thing I do in life? :)
And, yay me, I submitted the new chapter two days ago...it's waiting in the validation line...!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
sigh................patiently waiting............sigh....pen in hand waiting to chekc off my "list" LOL
Reviewer: charlottecake (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
CRIKEY!
Reviewer: Emilie_Tatum (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
WHEN? WHEN? WHEN? I love the story, but please don't make us wait over a month again! PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: MandieMarmalade (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
such a beautiful chapter! -sniffles-
Reviewer: SnowyHedwig (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You so totally own me... just like Bella owned Edward in that chapter. Seriously, I loved how you managed to throw so many items from her list in there, yet it flowed so naturally! Great work, looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Oh my Overthinking Edward. Love him. ;) - Great job Laura. I'm getting impatient but I know it'll be a real treat once the weekend chapter is ahead. YAY!!! :)
Reviewer: SnowyHedwig (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Nice, very nice! Loved the whole image of Edward carrying Bella to the piano, and then of him following her up the stairs... just... very nice!
And he was just so - ugh - amazing in the shower... "I want to do it." Yup. Definitely hot. You rock!
Reviewer: Brina328 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
please please more
Reviewer: pickela0 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Amazing!!
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I came back to read that last again. I just think it's so perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: MandieMarmalade (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
So hot! Damn I keep loving Edward more and more..
ella grasping onto a tree branch in the woods, her hair wild in the breeze. She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker. <-- That killed me GO EDWARD Damn I love him more and more..
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