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Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Excellent - I love the idea of the book - this transformation is so much more satisfying than I could have imagined.  And Jasper's influence - I am so glad you thought of that - brilliant!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Love this story!!!  Can't wait to read the next update!!  Great writing.

Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Thanks for updating! Can't wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Very intense chapter!!

Please, continue!!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Very loving and fitting to have the family stopping in on her.  The book to Edward was ingenious. 

Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

brill chapter, cant wait for more :) x

Reviewer: crazyfanmom (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

BEAUTIFUL! Hurry hurry hurry!

Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

awww!!! too cute!!!! <3

hurry up and get the next chapter up this story continues to amaze me!

OMG after the story is done, can you PLEASE actually write that part where edward kills her???? as an outtake or something?!?! hahaa ahhhh i wanna read it actually!!!!

Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Dude, you should have. That's just the kind of thing that I would love :) But I'm pretty sure that not everyone would appreciate your humor.  Anywho, I absolutely loved this chapter. And the way you had Bella write to Edward is absolutely brilliant! I adore how human you make her; how potent and real the emotions are.  I just have to complain about one thing...poor Jazz. He always gets the short end of the stick, and I somehow get the feeling that he is the one with the story worth telling.  I feel sorry for him having to take everyone's crap around him, I would go absolutely insane if I were in his postition.

Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Aaaahh! This was perfect as ever. I really loved the entries that Bella made for Edward. As it is your thoughts written down, glorious. You are a genius.



Reviewer: starla_1979 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I agree with everyone who has said that this is how Bella should have been turned!  You also addressed one thing that bothered me in BD.  Jasper should have been able to tell that Bella was still suffering and when she tried to cover it up from Edward.  Ah well, I guess that was a minor detail to SM.  I love your Jasper by the way, not only here but in your earlier chapter when Bella expresses her gratitude toward him.  That was lovely.  I was sent 5 emails telling me you updated this story (not sure why) but I have read this chapter 4 times already!  Can't wait for the next one.  Homestretch already.  I never want it to end :-)

Reviewer: trishd (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Wonderfully done!  I loved the "assignments" that Bella gave Edward, and what she said regarding the Cullens.  Beautiful.

Reviewer: Bonsai (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

1. you should write your little joke as an'd be funny in a horrbile way, but wiould still like to read it...just once...cause noone writes that!

2. you better..and i mean damn better be writing a sequel called "Edward's List" oh oh oh yes yes yes please please please

3. ok done begging

4. love your story!


6. ok, really done now

7. bye

Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

This chapter was amazing. You have quite the imagination. I really like the story line about the notebook for Edward. It was great!

Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Loved this chapter!!! I loved the journal she gave him with those entries. I can't wait to hear from Bella once she wakes. I'm sad it's coming to an end but it's been an amazing ride!!!!

Reviewer: luckycharms (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I have enjoyed this story from chapter one but I have to say this chapter was my favorite. The idea you wrote with the diary and Edward reading a chapter an hour was outstanding. Then the entries you imagined, both funny and heart touching were creative and completely amazing. You have a true talent, thank you for sharing that with us.

Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Wow, what a wonderful chapter. I love how she wrote "I;m okay and I love you" after every entry.

Can we see Edwards List?? ;)

Reviewer: jadevolturi (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

UGH!!!!! You kept us waiting for like two weeks and give us another cliff-hanger!!!!!!!! I loved it, but how could you do this to us?????? Please, please, please, please, PLEASE get the other chapter up as soon as you can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lc1831 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Of all the fanfiction stories I've read where Bella becomes a vampire, this has to be my favorite change and I truly believe it was her book to Edward that made the experience seem so much more positive and less heartwrenching/angst ridden. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

OMG!!!!!!!!! This was another great chapter, but yes you are right, I DO hate you from leaving it at this. But I understand the need you felt to stop. As always I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter to come. Hurry Please!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: _Tamy23 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

OMFG...i cried my eys out here! Sooo beautiful! Edward's words to Jasper...uau...amazing...


ONE QUESTION: Is "Chose Me. Love Me. Want Me" from grey's Anatomy? LOVE IT!



Can't wait to see Edward's list!

Author's Response:

No!  But when I was reading the posted chapter this morning I did hear Meredith's voice when I read that line!  Although I think she had "Pick me" in her dialogue there.  Good catch!

Reviewer: cullensangel213 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Holy Mother of God! You have no idea how much I love this story. No words can truly describe it. You are an amazing author. My heart is filled with so much romance and passion in every chapter. Its unbelievable. I find myself reading over details again and again just to make sure I didn't miss anything. Total props to you for the length of each chapter too...there might be a cliffhanger at the end...but I will never stop waiting for the next chapter. I never want this story to end. I've been reading a lot of fanfic, but I definitely feel one of the biggest connections with this version of Edward & Bella. I'm in total dream land when I'm reading it. Their relationship I'm pretty sure is every girls biggest dream. Although Edward is the ultimate dream guy, Bella is what every girl hopes to be a, honest, passionate, and loving. So THANK you for letting me with your writing create this other fantasy world while I'm reading to escape the stresses of life. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! ;-)

Reviewer: dmc123 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

OMG- that chapter was just so frickin' sweet!  I loved the notebook idea.  Can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up. 

Oh- and can't wait to tune in to twigasm!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Thank you so much for the promise of a short wait. I really just want to send you flowers for that. @--^---- That's the best I can do...sorry.

But this is probably going to be a review to make you very happy...maybe thoughtful.

I think this is the best chapter. It was beautiful. I have tears in my eyes right now from the book that Bella wrote for Edward. The insight, the love was so so much more than I could have ever imagined it. What you put on paper was truly perfection. And Jasper...just WOW I don't really have many words to describe his self sacrifice. Being overly sensitive to the way other people feel myself, he has always been one of my favorites, maybe even my very favorite, so the pain was portrayed so well. And the reasoning. Plus, I always thought that Edward and Carlisle should know that the morphine did not work because her strength through it went unnoticed in the original. I know that her strength goes along with her sparing them the knowledge, but still, I wanted them to know. I truly loved it. Hands down...favorite chapter.

PS your trickster idea would have been awesome!

Reviewer: Liskiss (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

"Bella was a beautiful, loving, pure lady."


all I could think when I read this was "Bella was a classy broad."  LOL!


Amazing story!  Thanks for this!

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