Reviewer: Lata525 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I have read alot of stories on Bella's transformation-this has to be the best. The foresight she had to write a book to distract Edward and voice her opinions was a brilliant idea. The continuing reassurances were helping him during this time. This story is phenomenal. The way you have described this difficult time in the Twilight saga was perfect. I can't wait to see how she will be when she first wakes up. Please don't leave us hanging for too long. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Nicole Sigman (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I am new to reading your story. Quite frankly, I am new to reading any fan fic (Yours is only the second that I have read). I really like it a lot. I catch myself trying to sneak online at work to "just get a chapter in" (you know, as a reward for all of the work that I have gotten done.) Thank you for writing this it is keeping me highly amused.
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
AMAZING!!!!
I love this story.
Thank you for giving your time and energy to keep me enthralled with this story.
Can we get a rating of 10+ on the scale?
Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
soo good i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
soo good i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
YAY!! Fantastic chapter! Wonderful! Beautiful! Everything it should have been. Bella writing that book for Edward was effing BRILLIANT. I loved it!
Can I rave enough that you post the next chapter really really soon?
Really, that was outstanding. I am so glad I read this tonight. What a way to go!
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
"I'm okay and I love you"....I LOVE that. Seriously, I've read dozens of transformation scenes and of COURSE yours was one of the most beautiful. I love your Bella and Edward - I love the way they are together....it's like Stephanie Meyer's Bella and Edward perfected. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad some of it is already written!!!!
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Thank you for the most beautiful chapter so far. This is excellent, thank you so much for this story! I have checked every day to see it posted! I will check every day for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Kay Cannon (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Aw! Laura, I loved it. I really liked bella's binder. Only she could make him smile in such a hard time. And I really liked when he laid with her to calm her and when you counted down the heart beats. But one of the things I think I liked most was being wise enough to utilize jasper to calm her. I'm actually surprised SM didn't think of that. Yay for being 10 pages into the next chapter. I can't wait!
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Bella's gift was beautiful. I loved that she gave him homework... and 2 hours to work on "his list". I want to see his list now!
Oh, and sweet Jasper just broke my heart taking on all that pain.
I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
My fav entry was the part about the family IDK why but I thought that was so sweeeeeeet.
10 pages already----I'm glad!
Reviewer: EmmaBerry (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
great story! U better keep writing this story until bella's a vampire and gives her blood to Edward! :)
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
sigh..............awesome again..................as usual............you never disappoint.................... :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Beautiful chapter! I loved the idea of the book Edward had to read! Your writing is great as always. On a side note I wanted to give congrats on how many reviews you have. It's the most I've ever seen on fanfic. Thank you for sharing your story!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I've read a number of "transformation" stories, but yours just feels so true. Of course Bella would want Edward to bite her while making love! Of course Edward would stop Alice from dressing Bella in satin! Oh, but I did not anticipate Bella's journal for Edward. That was amazing. As much as I love seeing an update, I hate that this story will be done soon. I'm glad you had fun at Twi-Con, I'm gonna have to start saving my money now for next year.
Reviewer: Sophie22 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
You Are Amazing!
but pplleaassee dont leave us all hanging for soo long im desperate for another chapter and cant wait to see Edwards list :)
xx
Reviewer: branflake (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
OMG LOVE THE BELLA JORNAL!!!! PLEASE HURRY!!!! AHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
This is exactly how I would have imagined Bella's change. WOW!!!!!! Great Job- can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Great chapter! Do we get to see Edward's list?? :)
Reviewer: fruitcakegirl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
AAARRRGGHHH!! How could you leave it there?! You're too cruel.
Reviewer: hoping4more (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Of course Jasper would "feel" that it wasn't working! Thank you for making sense! Such a good chapter, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Awesome as usual! I can't wait to read about Bella waking up and her reactions... and Edwards... and the families. You have perfect taste when it comes to writing your version of Bella and Edwards relationship. It's what makes your story so wonderful! You always include those little details that makes your chapters so wonderful to read. I hope you include Bella's first hunt..and a few other experiences!
Keep up the awesome writing! I can't wait for more,
Sarah
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Did I ever tell you that I love this story & you and your writing? Well, I DO!!! Can't wait for more, Thank you so much!!!!!!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
All of your updates are perfection. This was truly amazing.
Reviewer: renda1girl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
i am loving the story! I have been rereading my favorite chapters while you were away.
Jasper maybe my favorite so I enjoyed reading this chapter even more.
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