I love how you had her give him homework, knowing that he'd be tearing his hair out (figuratively speaking) with the long wait. And Hurray! Edward's List to come!

You deserve every accolade you have received for this story. It's so originally and beautifully conceived and executed. I'll be sorry to see it end, but hope you'll keep writing for this site or else let us know where to purchase your books!

Lovely chapter as always. I'm very anxious for the next one. You know there are some things you've done differently with this story that I really like. And some of it I prefer over SMeyer's. Don't hurt me! *crouches under desk* But honestly you've had some really good ideas. I love the book she wrote for him to read; so perfect. And the idea of being bitten while making love and not being a medical experiment is spot on. (Sorry, Carlisle.) Any who, nicely done and keep it coming. 

AHHHHHHRRRRGGGGG ok i will be patient but i want to know what is on his list smirk

You STOPPED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

You said you know we'd hate this cliffhanger, so WHY? Why would you do this to ME?

Update Update Update ... oh please please please! I'm begging you here!

You are so good!!!!!!!! Loved every word! Can't wait to read more!

Love it!!! The entries are so sweet...I loved the "homework"!!!! :0)

Literally heart stopping.

Amazing!  I love the book Bella left for Edward.  Absolutely Beautiful.  So true, someone letting you know "I'm Okay" can really make all the difference.

Waiting, waiting, waiting........

What an amazing book! Sooo beautiful.

Poor Jasper. All the agony & torment he endured. Heart-breaking. He is a great brother!

I'm not so worried because I know she'll be fine! But I'm sooooo excited for them to be together as vampires! That sounds really silly haha.

I don't hate you for the cliffhanger...ok maybe a little, i loved the book! and i honestly was a little worried at the beginning when he didn't stop.

I can't wait for them to do the Edward's list.

first of all, an apology--I have been selfishly reading and enjoying this story for months and have never taken the time or effort to tell you that. I love it, and this chapter was the best yet--how inventive and unique and intriguing. thank you, thank you, thank you, and thank you for continuing.

“The family sat and stood around the bed, seven of the world's most powerful creatures made weak and vulnerable by the worry and anxiety we all felt for Bella.”  I like that statement. It paints a very stunning picture. 

 Poor Jasper…the weight he must have been carrying before telling Edward the morphine wasn’t working.  And to offer his help so selflessly, knowing the pain it would still cause him. 

 Bella’s book was beautiful.  I tear’d up at number 2, just as Edward did.  Beautifully written. 

“As the 27th hour came and went, Jasper started to struggle.  He'd put in a heroic day of absorbing her pain and expending his energy to calm her.  His torment captured my attention when he started chanting Bella needs you, Bella needs you over and over in his head….It took Emmett and Carlisle to make Jasper leave.  I heard his thought apologies and I realized like a punch in the gut that he was trying to make up for what had happened on Bella's eighteenth birthday….Because, feel me, I harbor no resentment towards you, Jasper, and neither does Bella.  Feel me.  You know it's true.  It's done and forgiven.”  Wow…that section was hard to read.  Tears were running down my face…for Jasper, for Edward, for Bella. 

Their family is just so full of selflessness.  Bella’s description’s fit them to a “T”.  Exactly what you get when you read about them. 

“‘Look how beautiful she's become, Edward-’.  ‘She's always been beautiful, Alice.”  I loved that line from the books…it fits perfectly.  Love that Edward veto’d the dress though!

“I sucked in a breath, wide-eyed and mouth agape, and waited, and waited.”  That is exactly how I am sitting right now…waiting and waiting and waiting!  I can’t wait to see your transformation of Bella become complete….and to see what they cross off next. 

Wow…That would have been a hilarious joke!  Once my heart started beating again, I would have laughed my ass off!  Glad to hear you won’t keep us on the ledge to long!  Great chapter.