Reviewer: missfoy (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love it that Edward realizes Bella's strengths in this chapter. Well played. :)
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
This chapter was phenomenal. Definitely one of the best, if not the best, Bella change chapters in fanfiction.
Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I have to say that was beyond amazing........ absolutly loved it
Reviewer: WakingSky (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
So I have to tell you that I check in every other day to see if the next chapter has posted. Tonight, when I saw that ch.25 was here I almost exploded myself!!! This is the best storyline! Thank you, thank you and PLEASE don't make us wait long!!!
Reviewer: lia47 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love Bella's words to Edward through her change that was a wonderful thing
and Jasper being able to help her is awesome, I totally can't wait until she wakes up and why can't the story continue with Edward's list? I don't want it to end :( Love your writing! and please hurry!
Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
As always amazing x
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
It was perfect. And Bella's missive to Edward was wonderful. I'm so glad Jasper was able to tell them that the morphine didn't work, so that he and Edward could try to do as much as they could to help. And I'm so glad Edward didn't let Alice put Bella in an evening gown!! I thought that was so weird in BD when SM did it.
Reviewer: jaaykayy (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
im dying along with bella.
hurry ! update !!
Reviewer: eje (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
so, what happened to the two deleated photos???
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love the idea of Bella leaving something for Edward to read during each hour of her transformation, to me it's just so like her to try and sooth him while she's going through something so painful.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: esce (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
just finished the latest chapter...looking forward to more - have really enjoyed the story and characters
thanks so much for a great read
Reviewer: Angela Black (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
You just keep getting better and better! ANd yes, me and many others hate you at this moment for the cliff hanger, but we all forgive you because you are SO DAMN GREAT! Can't wait!!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Love this story. I like the notebook idea and all her entries and her giving him homework. He does not seem as uptight as in other stories during the change and is able to leave and help Jasper out for a bit and make Alice give her real clothes. Cant wait for more as always.
Reviewer: Rosat (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
God this is a GREAT story!!!!
Reviewer: Pattz_aimant (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Damn it Laura! Ugh another cliffhanger.. I have enjoyed 'The List' ever since day one. I was thrilled when you continued with 'the goodbyes'. I have been blubbering not stop with this chapter. Laura, please don't neglet 'The List' and keep writing! I did vote for this story in the for an award. Thank you Laura for providing us with good lemony smut!
Reviewer: Pattz_aimant (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Damn it Laura! Ugh another cliffhanger.. I have enjoyed 'The List' ever since day one. I was thrilled when you continued with 'the goodbyes'. I have been blubbering not stop with this chapter. Laura, please don't neglet 'The List' and keep writing! I did vote for this story in the for an award. Thank you Laura for providing us with good lemony smut!
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love Bella's gift. What a great idea! Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: MandieMarmalade (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
Reviewer: D T L RP (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
This is excellent!!!
WOW
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Oh my goooooood!!!
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
OMG! I love this chappy and I love the idea of the book she left him, is so sweet! I bet it was hard to resist the temptation of him killing her.. I'm glad you didn't though.
Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Absolutley still Oh My God!!!
Reviewer: avianne (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
hey!!!,
new to this site, and your story was recommended by my co-members in a pro robsten board!!!!... just want to know that you are a life saver....yessssss, a life saver for me, as i am bound in my house all day for my kids,.... with no one to talk to....but hey. who needs someone to talk to when i have your stories to read!!!!
i was literally screaming and gigling on every chapter, and damn... i had a chapter wherein i have to take a break reading like four times, to you know!!!.... very great story!!! thank you so much for sharing!!!! please keep writing... so i can keep breathing!!!! love yah!!!!
Reviewer: MsTwiSwe (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Still OH MY GOD!!!
Reviewer: MandieMarmalade (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was so beautiful I can't wait to see how everything ends!
Submit a Review
| 
