Reviewer: jess007 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You get me to use my hand held shower head and You Make Me Cry too. Awesome stuff. ;) - lol!!
Wow - you have a very cool prespective on things. Switching things around and their familiar but yet so refreshingly new it like reading a whole different version of Breaking Dawn. Wonderful Job Laura!! Keep it up hun. Gosh gonna cry when this one is done. Glad it's saved in my favorites so I can reread and reread when I want. ;) - Thank you dear for writing something so smuttly yet so emotional and touching. Wow!!
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Loved it bb!! Of course I don't hate you for the cliffie darlin'...but you know...it's not like it will hurt my feelin's if the chappie comes out soon!! hahaha....LOL
I lovedy, love, love, loved the journal entries for Edward!! Pure genius bb!!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Beautiful, simply Beautiful. What a wonderful idea for her to write the book & give him homework to keep him occupied & focused on the future. She knows him so well. You've exemplified Bella is truly Edward's other half. This made me cry & long for a love like theirs. sigh.
I SINCERELY HOPE there will be an "Edward's List" story coming after this??
The possibilities...ooohhhh, the possibilities!! ;+)
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
oh you had me crying like a little baby with the whole Jasper deal and then bella wrote about the whole family, I was crying like a little baby. lol I can't wait for more. I thought the book idea was fantastic. Edward is just the guy who for the ENTIRE time that bella was out would be worrying so to have him doing something to distract him was an excellent idea. keep up the amazing work. thanks bye
Reviewer: BiteMeHarder (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I must say, your description of the bite and the transformation itself in these past 2 chapters have been the most enjoyable fan fic chapters I've ever read. You captured the moment and emotions so beautifully.
Can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: stephieleigh (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
All I can say is this is HOT!! HOT!! HOT!!
Reviewer: Hil1020 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
amazing.
Reviewer: corapet (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
better that new dawn
fantastic, i really loved it, i hope this is not the end
cora
Reviewer: stephieleigh (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wow!! Great start! I always felt frustrated for Bella when I read the books!! It's nice that she's taking matters into her own hands! Go Bella!! I'm enjoying it so far!!
Reviewer: asp23 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
this is good......it makes bella seem normal lol because in the real books she always seems so innocent :)
Reviewer: VampireCat3 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I hate you for this cliffhanger!
But I love you for this chapter and will love you for the next one!
Reviewer: chelsweb (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
These cliffhangers are killing me!!! Please please please hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens :)
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Ooooooo, Edward's payback. Oh man....
Reviewer: scribhneoir cailin (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I esp. liked the bit 'It was almost like being with two...' Dirty minx!
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
How exciting! I can't imagine the anguish she's going through, but I'm sure you'll explain it in detail.
Reviewer: hisbrandofheroine (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I have to tell you...this story is amazing! I have to tear myself away to real life when I really just want to continue reading. Your writing style is incredible, and I love every bit of what I've read so far. You've captured the Edward and Bella I know in my head...Bravo!
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
OMG, can I just say how much I love Jasper right now, and Bella knows Edward so well, and I love the book idea....just love it!
Reviewer: robsbella4ever (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
No worries necessary Laura - you did a fantasitc job!!! :) - SMILES All Around. ;) You got me crying when Carisle and Charlie were doing their toast and even Emmett's was sooo cute.
I also like your change up pertaining to Jacob. Also love his wedding present. He's such adorable pup. ;)
Love Bella's wedding gifts to Edward - those are pricelss (wish Stephenie M. had orignally thought of them. Their perect; especially Bella's heart beat on his ipod.
Also love the box he keeps mentos of all their times together from a couple chapters ago too.
The description of the wedding was marvelous!! Very truly was. Like the excuse to get to the cabin by car for the guests. Also love Emmett's like surprise. Only Emmett!!! hehehe
I want a wedding like Bella's and her wedding dress as well. WOW!!!
Think maybe the costume department should take a look at the website for their ideas for Breaking Dawn. Can you imagine how Rob's going to look at the alter. Oh my..hmmmmm....smiling wide.
Anway back to your story, LOL, you got Renee pegged down too because when she talked to Bella - I pictured Renee from the movie. GOOD JOB!!
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I love the change journal as much as the List itself, since Bella knew that those days would be the absolute hardest for Edward. He gets so lost and caught up in his apocolyptic thoughts that she knew this was a way to keep him focused with his eye on the prize and alleviate some guilt. I would LOVE to get a peek at Edward's list - maybe in an epilogue or outtake??? Now that he is less inhibited, that list could contain a whole lot of naughty and kinky. Bring on the change woman, because I have loved every chapter of this fic and can't wait for phase 2!!!
Reviewer: CullenTX (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I started reading at 6 am today - didn't get any of my work done. Goog thing Twilighted isn't blocked from work! LOL! Then forgot to eat lunch, heated up leftovers for the kids so I could finish up the story! You have me hooked! What a story. The notebook had me crying and wishing SM had included this in BD. What a powerful chapter.
Keep writing! I can't wait for a final chapter and then I will read it all over again. BRAVO!
Reviewer: quiet17 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
i rreeeaalllyyy loved this chapter. I sorta wish bella had been able to give edward a book of reassurances in breaking dawn... XD and i Can NOT wait to see edwards list. all of it. righttt? hahaha ;p edward is god. and you rock !!! :)
Reviewer: WolfLover (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
WOW...I cried happy and sad tears through this whole chapter! It is so beautifully written!! I am very excited for the next one.
Please say that you will also give us a glimpse of Edwards list that Bella requested him to write down.
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Wow...that was amazing. I cried so much during that chapter! "I'm ok and I love you"...so perfect. Beautiful. Heartwrenching.
Reviewer: Riley99 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I am soo in love with this fic. It's so in depth, and hot, and sexy, yet utterly Bella and Edward. I absolutely can not wait until the next chapter. Fantastic job!
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