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Reviewer: LCCullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Feels Like Home was the song my husband and I played during the unity candle lighting at our wedding. It's such a beautiful song. Not many people have heard of it.
Reviewer: lalajones (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I just wanted to say that I love this story so much! it's ones of my top 10 favorites on this site. Also, I just wanted to share with you guys this blog i recently came across! it's really awesome and I just figured since this site is so great and so many of you guys like it, I would share another page I found interesting! It's a cooking and recipes site on a budget but covers more than just food! it's really great check it out! AND KEEP POSTING ON THIS STORY!!
Go to www.poorhappy.wordpress.com
Lala
Reviewer: penelopepm (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
THAT WAS F***ING HOT!!!! I NEED MORE ... SO HIT THE NEXT BUTTON JAMES!!
Reviewer: lbb83 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
LOVE IT !!!! you are an amazing author ! thank you for keeping bella and edward in my life it is amazing !!!!!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I am a lousy reviewer. How helpful is "I LOVED ALL OF IT!!"
You really have a way of being touching, sensitive, and emotional, while having another side that is primal, hot, and hotttt. I was so happy with the Charlie stuff. I would love to see an "update" at some point where she sees him for the first time, in person. And I'd really love to see an "update" (or I guess another Outtake, to be correct) of #40, please. Pretty please. With sugar (LOTS of sugar) on top.
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gorgeous. Clever. Hot. Fantastic! More!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wow, this chapter really, really touched me. I think tears are about to flow in the coming chapter(s). I can just feel it. bravo.
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Jacob. Fucker. my favorite line! Great chapter all around, and I mean ALL around (the lab table). xx
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OMFG!!!! Loving the VERY sexy EPOV! Wish I could rate higher than a 10!!! Oh and the Jasper POV with Alice was a VERY wonderful suprise!!!!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
OMG, we got EPOV!!!! YEAH! And BTW, this is fucking hot! Great writing!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Again, loving this! Very proud of Edward!!!!!!!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love how u still kept the personalities and humor of the characters! Im hooked now! Must get to next chapter! xox
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just started reading! LOVE THIS! Really like how to write sexy yet still steal a few laughs right in. I see that Bella is going to be GREAT! Still so shy! Again LOVE THIS!!!!
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Dear Laura,
I truly loved this whole story with each additional chapter. I read it as a completed story so there was no waiting in between. It became truly addicting for me. NOt being a writer, I found this story so captivating that I would just love to try it for myself.
The fact that you wrote about their after honeymoon and later marriage of 5 yrs and 50 yrs. really was so amazing. I loved especially the 5 yr anniversary with both her locating and finding the remanents of Edwards childhood home but also the renovations and Edwards receiving the gift & his renewed memories of this home. The scene where they dress in the style of 1910s & had a true courting experience was so sweet and romantic. Ahhh
I so want the story to never end, which it doesn't really. But updates would be so special.
THanks for such a good read. I'll check out your blog and book as well.
Katherine
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Dear Laura,
I truly loved this whole story with each additional chapter. I read it as a completed story so there was no waiting in between. It became truly addicting for me. NOt being a writer, I found this story so captivating that I would just love to try it for myself.
The fact that you wrote about their after honeymoon and later marriage of 5 yrs and 50 yrs. really was so amazing. I loved especially the 5 yr anniversary with both her locating and finding the remanents of Edwards childhood home but also the renovations and Edwards receiving the gift & his renewed memories of this home. The scene where they dress in the style of 1910s & had a true courting experience was so sweet and romantic. Ahhh
I so want the story to never end, which it doesn't really. But updates would be so special.
THanks for such a good read. I'll check out your blog and book as well.
Katherine
Reviewer: june22 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Another great chapter
Reviewer: june22 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Another great chapter
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk wasn't a problem for me at all. Years ago I had a boyfriend who taught me about the normalacy of love making during that time of the month. 1) no need for condoms, etc. 2) orgasms helped relieve cramps wonderfully 3) it does seem to arouse some men!! It didn't seem yucky after a while. I thanked him for teaching me that piece of information but our relationship didn't last.
Again...hot texts and phone sex plus some great teasing!
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That was so fucking HOT on the piano!! Oh my!! And the dominating the night before by Bella. I thought that Edward would give in to sucking on her instead of using his fingers on her clit but I'm sure that is to "cum"..Nice work for someone who is sick!! wow.
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That was so fucking HOT on the piano!! Oh my!! And the dominating the night before by Bella. I thought that Edward would give in to sucking on her instead of using his fingers on her clit but I'm sure that is to "cum"..Nice work for someone who is sick!! wow.
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I have only two words for this story "HOLY COW'!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Sweet Jesus. I think that was the hottest scene I have EVER EVER EVER read on any fan fic. I honestly can't think of any - including tearing his couch apart or the piano - that can compare. Even Icy may have met her match, and I think she rocks! Just as Edward had to fly to the other end of the suite, so must I. NOW.
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Pantpantpantpant!! ;)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Reaction, initial: Awkward, kinda ick. Reaction, now: HOLY HELL, GO BELLA!!! :-)
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I'd like to place my order now;
I'll have a number 5 with a side order of a number 11 with a number 24 for desert! ;)
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