Reviewer: princesspewo (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Girl you rocked! Instead of you getting a gift for your b-day you gave us one with this awesome chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
that was some hot vampire lovin....please please don't forget about the vial of blood that Bella gave to Carlisle in keeping for Edward!!! i don't remember what number that was on the list....but i have to know Edward's reaction to this little gift from Bella....and the sexy lovin they will both get from that as well!
Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Reading each chapter of this fic was like opening up my own customized, personalized, lovingly created birthday gift. Thank YOU!
Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Birthday to you sweetie, and many more filled with health and happiness!!
“Then everything went dark, still, and silent. I was floating, suspended, in merciful nothingness. Neither here nor there.”
“And then the world exploded around me in an orgy of sensory input.” I loved this! The quiet, her heart stopped and then awakening and the cacophony of sound.
Really liked how you showed Bella so disoriented in her mind. Not knowing the names of people and objects. ADHD behavior! Oh and when she realized who Edward was and she crashed into him. I just like the way you wrote all of her newborn awakenings and subsequent hunt.
Jasper, eyes so black, drained. Amazed that she’s doing so well. Love him, and wasn’t he awesome for what he did to help Bella!!
I reached up to touch it and oh! I gasped. "It's so soft." Hahaha!
“I leaned down and licked over it and grunted as I felt the contours of the letters of my name ridged under my tongue.” Her ink raised, ingenious!!
"Not that you ever made me feel that I didn't, and, really, not that I didn't feel like I belonged by you...but now...it's just...we fit. We're the same. We're equals, Edward. Finally, equals. I love that.” I love her sentiments! Yes Edward can relax and not worry about breaking her.
Lovely chapter!! Absolutely loved how you wrote this. Emotional and thrilling! Thank you for writing!!
Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I'm dreading when the curtain closes on this story. It's been such a constant for me at Twilighted. It's maybe the first story i read, and it's been here all of this time. I'm getting sad just thinking about it. It's been a great ride - the smexin', the change, and now the forevers.... Thanks for writing all of this wonderful stuff down, i will re-read it again.
Tara
Reviewer: pdd912 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
LOL! Can't wait to see how he reacts to those panties.
Reviewer: sox (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy birthday!!! Although I think the present was ours...lol... so biggggg thank you!!!
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I love this chapter. The sex. OHMYGOSH!!! The sex. :)
Reviewer: Elizabetha Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I like the way the writing flows, it's already made me smile a dozen times. Definately worth continuing to read and I'm only finished chapter 2. Please keep writing.
Lisa.
Reviewer: dance23 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
ahhh that was so good... im so sad its almost over
you should definetly do a sequal !!
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
this chapter was freaking awesome and HOT AS HELL!! I loved the growling and the biting and the hunting all mixed together. very vampire erotica. I loved it. great great job
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Oh my ... this has been wonderful.
The visual of Bella as she became aware ... of Edward as he stepped to help ... Jasper's concerns ... all wonderfully written
Reviewer: hogenfozer (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. It has been a pleasure to read! I am very sad it has come to an end, but I look forward to the epilogue...
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Isn't there still a blood bag hiding around somewhere? ;-)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Birthday!!! It was a great last regular chapter! It made my day a lot better after all the angst I've read.
Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
**wipes the tears away**
i can't believe this story is over guess i am just going to have to go back to the beginning and start again.
Thank you for the wonderful story
hope we get more work from you down the track
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This story is so amazing. I'm so sad it's over. :'( But I am very glad there is an epilogue. ^_^ Happy birthday =D *hug* =P Don't feel bad that the story is over :/ You can always write another =D Maybe not a sequel, but a totally different story. Anway, I just want to say thank you for writing this. It's beautiful, really.
Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
awesome chapter and happy birthday
Reviewer: angietwilightdawn (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I cannot beleive this story is almost over...say it isnt so. This my favorite story I keep up with. I cannot imagine coming back daily to check and see if there is an update. What in the world will I do now?
Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Birthday! But you gave US the present- wonderful! I'm so glad there is going to be an epilogue (hopefully 2?? hehe)....I don't want this story to end. We at least need a few from Edward's list :-) Thanks again - this was great.
Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy B-day!!!
This is the best story EVER!!! I have loved absoutely every single word. Bella and Edward were perfectly written. Their love was perfect and the sex scenes were beyond hot!
Thank you for this wonderful story!!!
Reviewer: pdd912 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Freaking hot!
Reviewer: zinner (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
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Happy Birthday!
As I wrote earlier, this was my first Twilighted story. There’s a special place in my heart for the first of anything – including this lovely tale of Edward and Bella; told in a format that Stephenie Meyers could only dream. I wonder if she's ever read your story? Has she contacted you - I'm sure there is much that you could share.
I’ll a little sad to see the story end and I look forward to reading the epilogue. I could see a continuation as Bella learns to function in her new world. There is much for her to yet discover, and a thousand different places for she and Edward to share their attraction. Did they actually complete all the items upon the list?.
Thank you for writing such an intriguing story and capturing my imagination in a way that was surprising and heartfelt.
As a fellow Virgo, I wish you a wonderful day.
Karen
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I don't know whether to clap or cry. What a wonderful way to end this story. It was just perfect! On the other hand, I've only got one more of those lovely emails telling me The List has been updated. Dammit.
I do wonder if all the items from The List will be checked off by the time the Epilogue's finished? And then what about Edward's list? *bangs head* Maybe you could write more than one epilogue? Inquiring minds and all that want to know. ;-)
Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
LOL!!!!! Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!! and OMG that was an awesome chapter!!! and very hot, i loved.... and I'm also sad that this is the last one... I'm going to miss reading and expecting for new chapter... you should write more stories!!! :)
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