I have loved every part of this story. You have portrayed a beutiful story of passion and the growth of love both physical and emotional.  You are a wonderful story teller. This was a very erotic and powerful story that drew me in and wouldn't let me go.

Thank you for sharing your tremendous gift of writing with those of us who love to read.

I love how you described Bella's shield, the glass room with Jasper on the outside. Very well done. I am so sad to see this story ending. Is there any hope for a sequel?

That was a perfect last chapter.  This has been one of my favorite fanfic's ever.  I hope you write something in the epilogue about the blood that Bella gave for Edward to drink after she was turned.

I loooove this story! It has been my favorite guilty pleasure! Please say that you'll publish an original story! It'll be a best-seller, I ensure you :-) With whatever you decide to do next, I wish you all the best... And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

This has been a wonderful story to read, in fact I reread it quite often it's so darn good.  I really do hope that one of your epilogues will be Edward getting the bag of Bella's blood.

Thank you for all the hard work and effort you've put into creating this wonderful piece. 

Happy birthday and thank you for the present!

I am so glad he finally got to "eat her alive", I had been waiting for that.  Once again you do not disappoint. 

I am going to miss this story when it is over.

The List was my first fanfic, you broke my "fanfic cherry" and I must say my first time was very satisfying.

First off HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! =) I wish you many, many, many more!

I really like what you've done with this story, where you've taken it and how you've brought it to this point. You're and exceptional writer. As I think back on the whole story and the time I was reading it, you really know what you're doing. You've captured the very essence of each of you're characters. Like SM i felt everything the characters where going through as they went through it. I'm not getting kinky her, lol, I mean more when it came to E&B sharing their love an emotions to each other. I was a sap from chapter 21 on haha. I've really enjoyed 'The List' to the full extend and potenial I fell you meant for me as a reader to feel.

And while I have you attention, what is going on with 'While you were gone'? I can't wait for the next chapter on that one! You're a really awesome writer and you should publish, seriously. See if you can get this published, why not, right? =) Enjoy you're Birthday (what's left) and CONGRATS on 'The List'!

I'll go and review on the chapters I did not so ww can hit 10K!

 

What happened to that little vial of blood Bella made for him?

Did I miss something?

lol sorry if I did. I just can't remember it to save my life.:P

Congrats!!!!  And very happy birthday...I hit 39 next year.  I'm sad to see this story come to an end...it was an incredible journey!!!

I am still waiting for Edward to drink the blood that she had drawn for him earielr in the story..  will that be in the next chapter?  Or did I somehow miss it?

Sorry to see the story coming to an end...it's great!

~Sapphire

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! Yay! I have been turning 28 for the last ten years, so your comment about being 29, just cracked me up!

I loved this chapter! It was just beautiful, but OH!!! The windrawl...I don't want this to end! I have made up my mind to go back & start reading again, but before I do that, I have a question that I need answered... will we read about the blood donated by Bella? I have been waiting so patiently for that moment.  I thought it was the best gift ever!

Again, this has been my favorite fan-fic and I have read my share...you are BRILLIANT & I hope to one day be buying a copy of you published work.

 

Much Love & Twilight, Lili

Happy Birthday! Again this is my favorite fic to date, it's like opening a gift with each new chapter! I'll be so sad when the story is done.