Reviewer: lmkf (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
happy birthday and thanks for thr awesome chapter
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I have really enjoyed this story because it was very well rounded. You had a bit of everything init.
What I would like to know , see, is what reaction Edward has when he is finally handed Bella's blood as a gift from her. Will Jacob get to see her?
Reviewer: darceny (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
*happy sigh* This story was so much fun. Sweet...and hot.
Reviewer: cha0s (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
sorry if this is a double post but happy happy birthday from all of us to you we wish it was our birthday so we could party too, hey. love the story and how you put your own spin on bella as a newborn with her not being able to put all the right words with the right thoughts and such, love that it was kind of like she was seeing it all for the first time. really like how you had bella express to jasper that she didn't feel calm and collected and felt off the charts and scattered, that one always one of the things that bothered me in the books and i like how you addressed that. can't wait to hear you on twigasm with those wonderfully dirty h00rs. love that podcast and can't wait for the newest episode. keep it up you rock and pwn me
Reviewer: jessica_1_22 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
You are so amazing!!! I love the way you write. I'm so sad it's over, but I'm so glad there's going to be an epilogue. I can't wait. I love this story and these characters so much. I think you did an excellent job interpreting the transformation. You're just so amazing. I hope that you have en excellent birthday, you totally deserve it. I'ss be waiting for the epilogue, very impatiently! :)
Reviewer: Riley99 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Firstly, happy birthday! Secondly....I am so sad to see this ending, but so happy to have read a masterpiece such as this. I really hope we get to read about Edward drinking Bella's blood that she saved for him. That one scene has stuck with me the most throughout the series. Amazing job!!! Fantastic!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see some of Edward's homework. Have a great birthday.
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy birthday! ;)
A great chapter!
Reviewer: crystal16 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
(((hug))) :O) This was a great chapter! Please don't leave out the tasting of her blood - I have been waiting for that part!
Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
great chapter. i cant wait for the epilogue! i would also love to see edwards homework. update soon!!!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This is the perfect ending to a story that is beyond wonderful. The list is such a great idea. I've even incorporated an informal list in my life that includes all kinds of stuff to do with hubby. I look forward to the epilogue!
Reviewer: goddess (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Wonderful chapter. I have truly enjoyed your story.
Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
per-fucking-fection! I absolutely love it! I seriously don't know what to do with myself now that this is over. I can't begin to imagine what you must be feeling Laura. I seriously just want to give you a huge hug in support and thanks. This story is so remarkable. Your writing is inspiring. This is a really great piece of work and you should be proud. I can't tell you how many story endings have disappointed me. But, you knocked this out of the park. Thank God! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us. I can't wait for the epi.
Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Well first off, Happy Birthday! Of course, since I am reading this at 2 am, I guess I should say, Happy Belated Birthday!
Fantastic chapter as always. There are so many things on their lists that we have not yet seen, are you sure you couldn't run this out a little longer? I so enjoy this deliciously lemony story! And Edward, maybe you can write a sequel, because I am dying to hear the kinky stuff he has dreamt up.
So I suppose I will have to wait for his the epilogue now and hope that it covers everything I am dreaming about. I am sure you will make it happen. It's just all the thoughts of what is on the more than 2 pages of Edward's list, well that keeps me up at night...in a good way, of course!
Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
happy 29th birthday ; ).... you are awesome and amazing and i am sooo sad this story is coming to a close.... but i loved every minute of it and i am soooo happy how its ending. you rock!!! i cant wait to read the epilogue and any other story you might write in the future!!!! much love always
-b
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LAURA!
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Okay I just have to say...that was everything that Bella's change in BD should have been, including the hot post hunting sex! So thank you, thank you, thank you that was awesome! Oh and Happy Birthday.
Reviewer: mortangel (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I like your feral Bella!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
soooooooo good!!! Yours is the first fanfic I ever read, and I just love it to pieces. I always love when you update. I know all stories come to an end, but this one is really really special to me(that sounds so cheeeeezy lol) I hate that it has ended, but I recommend it to EVERYONE. Can't wait to read the epilogue(s) or see what you do next!!! Thank you for the amazing read.
Reviewer: little_white_lie (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy (late) Birthday!
That was a really amazing chapter, I'm sad to see the story end.
Reviewer: Suiko (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Wow! That was hot! I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to Bella's blood that she "saved" for him. I am sad to see this story almost at an end, but I have enjoyed it immensely. I can't wait to see what you decide to write next. And I hope that your birthday was wonderful. =) Cheers!
Suiko
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK MY WORLD GIRL! THAT WAS PURE GREATNESS! THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY!
Reviewer: tcassata (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
What is on Edward's list? I have to know.. I'll beg just like Bella... please, please, please.
That is the best story ever. Just like SM's version, but with all the sex that was missing!
Reviewer: laurathelittle (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
It was fabulous. Now you'll just have to go though and have little mini stories about finishing all of the list. yay smut.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
i was so happy to see this on my update list. i came into the story far later than everyone else, but it quickly became one of my very favourites. i'll be so sorry to see it over, but to prolong it unnecessarily would be doing it and yourself a disservice. i enjoyed every word and can't wait to read the epilogue. thanks so much. really. x
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