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Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love how u still kept the personalities and humor of the characters! Im hooked now! Must get to next chapter! xox
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just started reading! LOVE THIS! Really like how to write sexy yet still steal a few laughs right in. I see that Bella is going to be GREAT! Still so shy! Again LOVE THIS!!!!
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Dear Laura,
I truly loved this whole story with each additional chapter. I read it as a completed story so there was no waiting in between. It became truly addicting for me. NOt being a writer, I found this story so captivating that I would just love to try it for myself.
The fact that you wrote about their after honeymoon and later marriage of 5 yrs and 50 yrs. really was so amazing. I loved especially the 5 yr anniversary with both her locating and finding the remanents of Edwards childhood home but also the renovations and Edwards receiving the gift & his renewed memories of this home. The scene where they dress in the style of 1910s & had a true courting experience was so sweet and romantic. Ahhh
I so want the story to never end, which it doesn't really. But updates would be so special.
THanks for such a good read. I'll check out your blog and book as well.
Katherine
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Dear Laura,
I truly loved this whole story with each additional chapter. I read it as a completed story so there was no waiting in between. It became truly addicting for me. NOt being a writer, I found this story so captivating that I would just love to try it for myself.
The fact that you wrote about their after honeymoon and later marriage of 5 yrs and 50 yrs. really was so amazing. I loved especially the 5 yr anniversary with both her locating and finding the remanents of Edwards childhood home but also the renovations and Edwards receiving the gift & his renewed memories of this home. The scene where they dress in the style of 1910s & had a true courting experience was so sweet and romantic. Ahhh
I so want the story to never end, which it doesn't really. But updates would be so special.
THanks for such a good read. I'll check out your blog and book as well.
Katherine
Reviewer: june22 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Another great chapter
Reviewer: june22 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Another great chapter
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood talk wasn't a problem for me at all. Years ago I had a boyfriend who taught me about the normalacy of love making during that time of the month. 1) no need for condoms, etc. 2) orgasms helped relieve cramps wonderfully 3) it does seem to arouse some men!! It didn't seem yucky after a while. I thanked him for teaching me that piece of information but our relationship didn't last.
Again...hot texts and phone sex plus some great teasing!
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That was so fucking HOT on the piano!! Oh my!! And the dominating the night before by Bella. I thought that Edward would give in to sucking on her instead of using his fingers on her clit but I'm sure that is to "cum"..Nice work for someone who is sick!! wow.
Reviewer: FrenchKatie (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
That was so fucking HOT on the piano!! Oh my!! And the dominating the night before by Bella. I thought that Edward would give in to sucking on her instead of using his fingers on her clit but I'm sure that is to "cum"..Nice work for someone who is sick!! wow.
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I have only two words for this story "HOLY COW'!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Sweet Jesus. I think that was the hottest scene I have EVER EVER EVER read on any fan fic. I honestly can't think of any - including tearing his couch apart or the piano - that can compare. Even Icy may have met her match, and I think she rocks! Just as Edward had to fly to the other end of the suite, so must I. NOW.
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Pantpantpantpant!! ;)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Reaction, initial: Awkward, kinda ick. Reaction, now: HOLY HELL, GO BELLA!!! :-)
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I'd like to place my order now;
I'll have a number 5 with a side order of a number 11 with a number 24 for desert! ;)
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Ohh Momma! Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter. "Can I have another please"?
Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Oooooooooooooo soooooooooo HOTTTTTTTTTT....lol ;)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Uggh! It's almost 2am and I do NOT want to stop reading! Unbelievably exciting, thrilling, sexy as can be. And the thunderstorm?! Absolutely ace!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
YAAAAAY.
(Sorry you kind of take away the thinking part of my brain, so my reviews tend to lack sentence structure. Take it as a compliment.)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Aww, Chasteward!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
hee hee hee ha ha ha sigh sigh sigh pant pant pant ... and I'm spent. ;-)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
That is the first fic I've read with Alice/Jazz action... good times, I feel like a little voyeur now (all of a sudden - ha!)... This is so much fun, and Edward's shower scene -- what is there to say?! Other than I wish I was there!! Can't wait to see what he has in store for Bella now!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Nice list, and NICE MOVE, BELLA!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OK, if you can draw that kind of (ahem) response from a make-out session and some friction, I can only imagine how this is gonna get once some clothes start coming off. This will be a fun ride, I can tell already! (And I think I need a cigarette.) Thanks! :-)
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Yummmmm, he is intoxicating.
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Looking forward to this adventure! I like the cold tile + cold Edward idea. Hmmmmm
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