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Reviewer: jamiejackson42 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! well i'm sorry we didn't get to explore his list a little. The only thing i would have added to this chapter is rain!!

I can't imagine what it feels like to end a story on here that you've had forever it feels like a loss as a reader and I am so greatful that you can keep me reading Twilight like this. Thanks

Reviewer: Kay Cannon (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

*tear* I can't believe this is more or less the end...

But, before I get into that, HAPPY B-DAY! *bubble friendly Edward hugs*

About this chapter...I of course loved it. I actually wondered if you'd call out the tat and am so glad you did. I like that they bit each other and they had some hardy love making against the tree. It feels like they've come full circle. And I like that you tied in some canon w/ B growling at E and Jasper's reaction to her. I'm guessing there was some forshadowing about her shield in there. Yay for that. I always like to see what ficers decide to do w/ Bella's power since we didn't get to see it's potential play out in BD.

I can't wait to see what the epilogues about!

Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday Girl!! I'm giving you a virtual hug and a box of chocolates, All your favorite kinds so you'll always know just what your going to get! I've enjoyed this story so much, thank-you. Hope you have your own Stephanie dream someday soon. Waiting for the epilogue. (Does it really have to end?)

Reviewer: kejones (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I'll read it over and over, even after it's finished. Seriously, the best "guilty pleasure" fic out there!

Reviewer: amwillis (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday!  I'm a crappy review writer, but I love this story.  I have been following it for quite a while and love it (even though I don't write reviews...I suck).  I don't know what else to say.  That's probably why I don't write reviews.  Anyways.. can't wait to read your epi!


Reviewer: EmpressOperaDiva (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Sending Birthday Love!!! LOL... Don't be sad ... This story is amazing! You have brought me to a beautiful place full of such love and acceptance. Be happy knowing that anytime any one of us feels like we can revisit this story in its completion and it will make us feel all the same emotions. This has been an amazing journey for Edward and Bella and it's been nice to see where you would have taken things since Renesme seems to not exist in this tale. Thank you for "The List" It's been quite an amazing time and I so look forward to your epilogue! 


All my best,


Reviewer: nmm267 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Amazing!  Loved the chapter - it was so sweet and hot at the same time!  I'm so sad that the story is ending  :o(  Will you start another?

Oh yeah, and Happy birthday!

Reviewer: deborah (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy birthday! :D

This chapter was, rawrrr, hot!

Reviewer: JaneVolturi (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

happy birthday! and i hope u'll include that 'edward's list' in the epilogue or something ;]

Reviewer: kaylad_1982 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

So how many times can I say thank you for all of your time and hard work that you have put into this story. I loved it so much and you are truely gifted to be able to write like this.  The way put things into words is so real and perfect. I hope to read more of your work soon untill than I am going to reread this store. Ah siily me can not get enough of Edward and Bella. Thank you again!

Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Awsome, Awsome, Awsome!!! the whole hunting thing and then the slammin sex after. Finally the release that Edwards been waitng for and Bella couldn't have possibly fathomed. Besides call me childish but I just love happy endings!! Very much looking forward to the epilogue and getting that future glimpse. You did and outstanding job with this story. I hope you continue writing whether it be fanfic here or otherwise. You have a gift!!

Speaking of gifts that makes me think of birthdays and I would be remiss after all you've given me to not give one of my own so here goes...

HAPPY, HAPPY, HAPPY, BIRTHDAY!!! Much love for all the many hours of hard work you have put into this creation of yours. Now here's the thing. Close your eyes. Carefully bite your (whatever body part you feel is appropriate) while thinking of Edward. Imagine the burn... and tell yourself you will never turn 40. You get to stay 39 FOREVER!

Reviewer: Slim2None (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy birthday!  And you gave US a present - how totally generous of you!

This chapter was utter perfection.  I will be reading and rereading it for a long time.  Loved the little moment with Jasper, very touching.  And I LOVED Edward's reaction to seeing her hunt.  Whoa! 

I'm going to be going through withdrawals from this story, as well.  I so loved these characters!

Thanks again, so much, for sharing your talent with us. 

I'll await the Epilogue with equal parts longing and sadness.


Reviewer: Luv912 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

im so sad that the story is finished! i love it soooo much!i hold on the epilogue;)) but honestly this story was so good and im so glad i got to read it:)))

Reviewer: jenniferjunniper (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Great story!! I have enjoyed reading the entire thing.  You are a great writer, and should have been the original author.  While Stephanie Meyer may have created these characters, you gave them life.  Great Job!!

Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Absolutely Fantabulous!!! and Happy Birthday, too! I'm sorry this story's coming to an end, but it sure has been a delightful ride.  Thank you thank you, and I'm looking forward to whatever your next fanfic endeavor may be!

Reviewer: leiram (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

loveit its woderful.................

Reviewer: Bad Kitty (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS!!!! The whole story has been a blast to read and really can't believe we're almost at the end :(  Hope you have a new fic lurking in that clever mind of yours!!!

Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday To You!!!!!  Hey your only 29 twice.  Me I'm only at 30 (and HOLDING) and I even have a 26 year old daughter.  We are as old as we want to be!     Oh, by the way  This story FREAKING rocks!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

argggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh: Birthday love, good wishes and lots of thanks for this wonderful story. In a way, I'mglad it's finishing just because it'll mean I get away from my computer every once in a while...although I suppose I could just reread from the very start all over again..Aw, crap!

Yah for this though, and can't wait for anything you decide to have a go at.


Reviewer: Tressame (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday!! My 29th was last week ;)

My cat died yesterday and I am heartbroken, but this chapter helped me forget how sad I am for a few moments - isn't that what good stories are for?

I thought you did a great job illustrating how Bella doesn't have to be either the worst newborn ever - or the best. And the tree scene was hot!

Author's Response:

So sorry about your cat--I know how traumatic the loss of a beloved pet can be.  Happy belated birthday!  And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lauraleeor (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

this story has been so good-it is one I go back and read often. Thanks for the ride!!!

Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Oh my gosh! You are totally amazing.

This is the best story i've read on this website.


Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

i love how this has turned into a real story not just a lust fest. its great, thank you.

Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Bravo! You fuckin rock!!!

Reviewer: pdd912 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music

Another hot chapter. 

There is one thing I wanted to say, though.  I've read a lot of fanfic with Bella's virginity/hymen as a part of the story.  (Makes sense, since she's a virgin.)  But what bothers me is that so many girls and women do not know what a hymen (virginity) really is.  They seem to think that it's a barrier or a piece of tissue that is on the inside of the vagina, something that must be "popped."  But that is not the truth. 

The hymen is a ring of tissue that SURROUNDS the opening of the vagina.  It's what makes it so difficult to use a tampon in the beginning (with many hymens being lost or partially perforated from the use of the tampons) and it's what makes it so difficult to actually penetrate the vagina the first time one has sex.  The "popping" of the cherry is actually the tearing or ripping of this ring of tissue, allowing the penis to penetrate.


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