Reviewer: tayz13 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
First and foremost THANK YOU for sharing such a beautiful and exciting story with all of us. I got so sad when I read your Authors Note at the beginning, it seems like all my favs are ending at the same time. I hope you have a wonderful birthday and thank you again for sharing your work with me.
Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
that was really good. I LOVED it. I could totally picturing all of that happening. Every little fantasy I could picture as well. Just amazing. Great job.
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Well, Happy Birthday to you! You have given us a wonderful gift, so thank you for that.
This story was fantastic, and so well written. I loved every chapter of it. I am sad that it is over, but I do see how you can't just keep carrying it on forever and ever.
I do hope, however, that the epilogue contains a few more things from the list??
Well done. Well done.
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
beautiful!!! you are a spectacular writer! your smut is...gah, enough to kill me, but your plot lines and all the rest of the story are just captivating. i love bella trying to figure things out, and forgetting everyone was in the room lol. i'll be very sad to see this end...i squeal and text my friend everytime you update!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This story was just so amazing! I feel like you really captured the beauty of their love and the smokn' hotness of their sexy times. You are a very gifted writer, thank you for sharing this with us.
Reviewer: twilight gypsy (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Thank you so much for this beautiful and sexy story. Bella and Edward would never have really abstained from any kind of activity, with him being a vampire and able to kill her...you did what SM would not or could not do...you gave them the real story.
And thank you.
My mother thanks you, my father thanks you, my sister thanks you, and...I thank you.
Reviewer: darkndirty (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Great final chapter to a wonderful story. This is my very first review after weeks in lurkdom. :) I really want an epilogue with Edward and Bella's blood. :) Happy birthday.
Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Birthday!!!! So happy for the new chapter but so so so very sad about it ending!!!! Say it ain't so!!!!! Can't wait until the epilogue. Are you going to be doing little one shots as extras to this story. like what edward wrote as his homework and so on? I hope so!!!!! I want it!!!! LOL If not just write them for me and email them to me onyx8514@aol.com lol
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This story has been nothing short of absolutely fantastic! Happy birthday as well!
<3
Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Sigh.....
I knew it had to end eventually....I will miss your writing of this story, but I certainly hope you will find some more inspiration and prehaps try writing another??
I tell you with every review. You are so very talented & very clever!
The closure I have found with this story is just absolutely perfect! Please continue your writing career. I will re-read this story again & again! Your writing makes me happy!
Thank you! & Happy Birthday to you!
Your fan always,
Jamie
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy belated birthday Laura! This story is by far the one story that has kept me waiting for more. I never once lost hope that you'd finish this story, and now that you almost have, it's like I've experienced the whole thing with you.
Weird, I know. But that's how I feel.
Just wanted to be clear, this chapter was amazing. You had Bella wake up a vampire the way I would have, if my story wasn't more centered around love than the change.
You are an amazing author, and should you ever publish an original fiction novel, I'll buy twenty copies. Pinkie promise! Can't wait for the epilogue. :)
Reviewer: julained (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I loved it and look forward to the epilogue and anything else you write! Thank you for an amazing story!
Reviewer: hotmama (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This chapter was perfect. I loved how she woke up and then "reconnected" with Edward - that was so passionate and sweet.. You said you were going to do one epilogue - please tell me it involves the blood Bella banked for Edward. I have been dying to see what she (i.e. YOU) decide to do with that. Please tell me it involves and epic lemon...
Reviewer: hotmama (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This chapter was perfect. I loved how she woke up and then "reconnected" with Edward - that was so passionate and sweet..
You said you were going to do one epilogue - please tell me it involves the blood Bella banked for Edward. I have been dying to see what she (i.e. YOU) decide to do with that. Please tell me it involves and epic lemon...
Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This is a very emotionally satisfying resolution. Edward is a truly strong and confident man to enjoy his wife's strength and power.
I am looking forward to the epilogue.
Your writing has taken me to a beautiful place during these very ugly times.
Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This is a very emotionally satisfying resolution. Edward is a truly strong and confident man to enjoy his wife's strength and power.
I am looking forward to the epilogue.
Your writing has taken me to a beautiful place during these very ugly times.
Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Well first off, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! I even have a song for u...AHEM! *clears throat while holding your double chocolate cake in hand* HAVE A HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! HAVE A HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY! YOU'RE THE BEST WRITER ON TWILIGHTED AND ALL YOUR FANS LOVE YOU! *stops singing* Did u like it? lol! I can't believe this story is almost @ its end..I NEVER want it to finish..I'm just so excited to see their life AFTER Bella's change..You should write The List 2...lol But hey for your epilogue DO NOT FORGET TO HAVE BELLA GIVE EDWARD THE BLOOD SHE SAVED FOR HIM! I want to hear his thoughts and reactions! lol You are truly talented and u should pursue a writing career. Who know u may even meet SM and cut a deal with her to write the erotic aftercap of her books lol Enjoy your bday and plz hurry! *huggles*
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
So wonderful...perfect...excellent...I love your story...thank you thank you thank you - It was incredibly satisfying!!! Your version is exactly how I like to imagine the whole thing - PERFECT! I will miss your story.
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Love love love love!!!! For the epilogue, at least give us a peek at Edward's list. And LOTS of lemons. I love the lemons!
Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Jesus ghetto christ I love your story and I'm so sad to see it end I can't even put it into words !
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I am so impressed with your writing skills! Great job and wonderful perspectiveon the change and after! Thanks for the lemony freshness!
Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Beautifully done! I'm happy you're doing an epilogue. I can't wait to see where you really end things. I hope you reach 10,000 reviews. You deserve it!!!
Holly
Reviewer: mom2bells1 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Excellent chapter!! I LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewer: chelsweb (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I hope it's a long epilogue. I don't want this to be over
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Here's a shout-out of birthday love and a virtual hug---you rock for updating so quickly, after leaving us with such a cliffhanger!! You Rock!! I have loved this story from day 1--it has been amazing, and I am sorry that it is coming to a close.
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