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Reviewer: phyll1245 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I'm going to miss this E&B. It was one of the best adult stories, next to WIDE AWAKE. Will miss you.

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I have to admit, I am really really sad that the story is almost over.

This was a great chapter though! And she finally got sex up against a tree! :)

Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! just know that we all love you and hope you have a wonderful B-day! Here's to staying "29" forever!

Reviewer: LoveTwilight132 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

THis is the most amazing story !! I love it !!! 

There should be 2 (at least) epilogues in my mind !!!

THank you for providing hours of super reading !!!!!

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Poor Jasper.  I hope he is okay.

Reviewer: emme cullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Are you published? If not, why the fuck not? This is better than any of the crap I've read off the shelves.  Keep 'em coming. pun intended.

Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

wow.. thats all I can say.

Reviewer: scouty (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake


Reviewer: illnevertell (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I have loved every last word of this story. Since I started reading it 3 days ago I have watched the reviews grow by the hundreds and it was absolutely amazing to see. It is truly a phenomenon in its own right. I have been reading fan fiction for 6 years and I have never seen anything like it! I am really looking forward to the epilogue. Congratultions  on writing such an extrodinary story. I actually like this version better than the original. ( I know BLASPHEMY!!!) It is true none the less though. I have no doubt that by the time the epilogue is done you will have hit the 10k reviews goal. I can't wait to see that!


Reviewer: Seren Dipity (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday and thank you for this more than beautiful story that I enjoyed reading!

That chapter was the best Happily Ever After I ever read! I love your story:)

Happy Birthday again and THANK YOU:)


Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

You know... you could write a sequel to this story using Edward's list... just thought I would mention that since you said you were feeling separation anxiety. And since he so dutifully sat down and wrote his list as homework! Hehe. I know I would love to read it! I love this version of Edward and Bella. 

I have enjoyed this story so much and am so sad it is ending. 

Thanks for writing,


Reviewer: WakingSky (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Wow.  LOVE it and it was so worth waiting for!  I already feel the anxiety of no more new chapters! :(  Please, let the epilogue include Edward's list.  Such a sexy way to end it!!!

Question this version, can he read her mind?  Happy Birthday!!  Great job and loved every minute of it.

Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

awesome job with that one. Too good. 

Reviewer: envyme (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake


Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Im going to have good dreams tonight because of this chapter.. Too good.

Reviewer: camri (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

An absolutely incredible story. Thank you! I'm so sad it's over. I'm sure my husband will be too :)

Reviewer: Twilight_Muse (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I will give you a virtual hug. Happy 29th B-day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Well Happy Birthday to you!!! Another incredible chapter!!! HOLY HALE!!! YAY for an epi!!! So sad it's ending....they've come full circle and it was perfect! Loved it. Every minute. Every word. Thank you for sharing it!

Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

So Beautiful!

I could fel her reactions to everything! and to see Edward letting loose- awesome!

but please! one of your epilopgues MUST MUST MUST be edward's list!

I'm just saying....


thanks you for a wonderful story. I will miss not seeing the update email and squeeing over it!

Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

omg.. that was the best. I LOVED it. everything was perfect and cute and romantic and just *sigh* and then Alice.. hahaha.. that had me laughin pretty good. And her knowing about the notebook. GAH I love it. I really hope you keep writing. This is all too good.

Reviewer: violet2009 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Laura, that was beautiful! The last 2 chapters had me bawling!! I LOVE the way you write in Bella's POV and the binder for Edward- genius! I don't want the story to end either! Any way we can convince you to write a sequel?? :) I just love your writing!! Can't wait for the epilogue...update soon! :)

Reviewer: tayz13 (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

First and foremost THANK YOU for sharing such a beautiful and exciting story with all of us.  I got so sad when I read your Authors Note at the beginning, it seems like  all my favs are ending at the same time.  I hope you have a wonderful birthday and thank you again for sharing your work with me.



Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

that was really good. I LOVED it. I could totally picturing all of that happening. Every little fantasy I could picture as well. Just amazing. Great job.

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Well, Happy Birthday to you! You have given us a wonderful gift, so thank you for that.

This story was fantastic, and so well written. I loved every chapter of it. I am sad that it is over, but I do see how you can't just keep carrying it on forever and ever.

I do hope, however, that the epilogue contains a few more things from the list?? 

Well done. Well done.

Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

beautiful!!! you are a spectacular writer! your smut is...gah, enough to kill me, but your plot lines and all the rest of the story are just captivating. i love bella trying to figure things out, and forgetting everyone was in the room lol. i'll be very sad to see this end...i squeal and text my friend everytime you update!

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