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Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
...talk about put all other car sex to shame!!!
Hot, once again...if that's just in the car...can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
it's all good! adds to the suspense. Thanks again!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
AAArrrgghhhhh!!! Blown me away!!! Lucky both of them, aren't they lucky you're so inventive!!!!
Wooowwwwww!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
...magic, what a funny, por Edward! Clever Bella,nice to hear how it is for Alice & Jasper!!! Great stuff again! Thanks
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
....getting very brazen aren't we!!!
"Ask and you shall receive", thats my motto!!! Thanks!!!
Roll on the games!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
ok...that was freaking "a maze ing"!!!!! If only every guy would let a girl do that...that was hot azzzzz!!!!
U r a genius!!! How cool was that, I can't stop giggling...and hyperventilating!!!! LOLOLOLOLOL
Thanks!!!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Damn Alice, I was interested in what Bella would have said...
...great stuff with the "smell"...her smelling different...nice work...sorry I'm a read and run...to the next chp type person...thanks for the chp!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
What a different train of creative thought this is from all the other fan fic that's out there...good on you!!! Loving a cold shower, what a funny. Rather than him wrapping her in blankets, why not just use an electric blanket! If he is stone, the blanket will heat him up too!
Looking forward to readng the rest, thanks!
Reviewer: Teens (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Must say have just discovered the Twilight Saga (what planet have I been on) and subsequently this web site - This is the first fanfiction I've read - fantastic, really enjoyed it - I read it in one sitting - now I'm absolutely shattered - must sleep.....
Reviewer: vegetaria (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
hey,
i've read your first chapter and ich have to say that the beginning of the story is really really good
looking forward to read the next chap.
lg
Reviewer: Marguerite Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I am enthralled, I'm going to try to review each chapter for you. it was a little silly that Alice showed up in Bella's room at 6 in the morning.. but I still like the story so far.
Reviewer: Marguerite Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I like this, so far. It kind of nice to see the Bella/Edward thing from a less PG point of view.
Reviewer: sealvester (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
great story overall, umm lemons!
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
great story. I love how u used the Mason's house, as it is a part of edwards story, into your story. Noone has ever takin that fanfiction route b4. the list was fun and they obviously thought so too...eehheh
Reviewer: LCCullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Feels Like Home was the song my husband and I played during the unity candle lighting at our wedding. It's such a beautiful song. Not many people have heard of it.
Reviewer: lalajones (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
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Reviewer: penelopepm (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
THAT WAS F***ING HOT!!!! I NEED MORE ... SO HIT THE NEXT BUTTON JAMES!!
Reviewer: lbb83 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
LOVE IT !!!! you are an amazing author ! thank you for keeping bella and edward in my life it is amazing !!!!!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I am a lousy reviewer. How helpful is "I LOVED ALL OF IT!!"
You really have a way of being touching, sensitive, and emotional, while having another side that is primal, hot, and hotttt. I was so happy with the Charlie stuff. I would love to see an "update" at some point where she sees him for the first time, in person. And I'd really love to see an "update" (or I guess another Outtake, to be correct) of #40, please. Pretty please. With sugar (LOTS of sugar) on top.
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gorgeous. Clever. Hot. Fantastic! More!!
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wow, this chapter really, really touched me. I think tears are about to flow in the coming chapter(s). I can just feel it. bravo.
Reviewer: jaishea (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Jacob. Fucker. my favorite line! Great chapter all around, and I mean ALL around (the lab table). xx
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OMFG!!!! Loving the VERY sexy EPOV! Wish I could rate higher than a 10!!! Oh and the Jasper POV with Alice was a VERY wonderful suprise!!!!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
OMG, we got EPOV!!!! YEAH! And BTW, this is fucking hot! Great writing!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Again, loving this! Very proud of Edward!!!!!!!
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