Okay, so I'm behind on the band-wagon.  I'm not sure that you read these reviews anymore, but I imagine that doesn't matter.  I was supposed to be doing other things, but once you get pulled into a  story you can't let it go until those characters are out of your head.  Anyone who reads and writes knows what I am talking about... 

I wanted to tell you, that though i am usually not a Bella/Edward fan... I liked this.  The list made some of the changes to the original story that had always bothered me.  I had always wondered where her spine was, I had always wondered where the lust was and while I understand what SM did it had always bothered me that Bella had problems with people giving to her at all.  

The impact that this has had on me personally is another matter entirely.  It made me think about where my passion is. You see, my "match" is a person that I could never have.  Not because someone else has them, or because they are too young or old, or anything like that.  NO... he lives in Denmark.  I knew him for only 4 months and knew that I could spend the rest of my life knowing him and it wouldn't be enough.  You have re-inspired me to believe that something can happen that will make it possible.  That people can give and take and work on things--which hasn't been my experience. 

I know that often people don't think that a story about what amounts to a lot of lemons will mean anything but it wasn't that it was sex, it was that the sex meant something.  It was powerful enough to show their love, I only wish that I had enocuntered that... it would have been amazing if that had been my first experience... 

But on a less personal level i enjoyed your writing for the fact that I never focused on the words.  I felt.  I moved.  I watched.  the story unfolded before and the magic of your written voice carried me to a world where the time had no meaning to it.  Thank you. I needed that respite. I hope that you do keep writing.  Not just because it is great writing but also because I read everything you wrote about writing and it sounds to be a part of you.  

This will go on my favorites a the first Edward/Bella story.  I like your Bella. and thank you for leaving Bells to Jacob.  

I'm going to keep reading, then I'm going to go and write because finally my characters will have room to speak to me... Congratulations on the success that I know will be yours. 

Truly, 

Lys 

aka. Stkrwildme

 

holy cow I think I could mark some of those of my list now! 

BREATHE BREATHE BREATHE whew - need a cold shower!

well, this is my first review of a fanfic, and I must say I enjoyed it. Your vocabulary is excellent, and I'm hoping the rest of the chapters are just as good. I've found a few good NC17 fanfics, I'm hoping this ones in the same league. Since its rated so highliy on Twilighted, I'm betting it is :)

Thank you.

i love thsi story i'll read the rest on fanfiction.net cause it's easyer on the eyes!! love, love, love it!!!

i love it , rushed through my days to read it at night .

Thanks !

wish my husband were home...

love those 2 together... cant wait to read more...

wow !! im at a loss for words

i love it , i read this before going to bed last night , and i couldnt sleep all night thinking about it !!

i love it , so dirty !!

The blood takes the cake.

The treasure hunt was perfect.

I love the green thong hidden in the Vanquish.

Edward adding #36 was genius. I can't wait for Bella's reaction.

Great chapter as always.