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Reviewer: Lisa1070 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Im so sad that its almost over. I cant wait to read about edwards reaction to Bellas blood that she had carlisle take from her, to give to Edward.
Reviewer: bmw24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Wow, just when I had resigned myself to a long wait for Chapter 26, here it is! I loved this chapter as much as the rest of the story, especially the description of the sensory differences and the sluggishness of Bella's brain to catch up with her new state of existence....almost like it was a left-over human weakness that I didn't expect....thought she would wake up sharp and perfect as the rest of her new abilities seem to be. I look forward to the epilogue, although, like you, I'm sad there has to be an eventual end! Awesome work.....I would give this more than a '10' if I could!
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
A great end to a great fic, bring on the epilogues!!!!
Nina xx
Reviewer: Tayci (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I think you need to write about twenty-seven epilogues, 'kay?
This is my absolute favorite fan-fic. You've really captured the characters and this is a perfect alterantive to the mess that is BD. Not to mention, it's the hottest smut out there. I'm very eager to see how you play out the scene where Bella gives Edward her blood. So update soon! lol
And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
ILL NEVER LOOK AT A PIANO THE SAME AGAIN, AND I KNOW HOW TO PLAY ONE! LOL WOW!
Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I think that Bella's book, list and homework would be the perfect gift for two lovers. Maybe you should publish iit in a form for any committed couple to use. Sprinkle examples from other couples in there for guidance. Think about all of the couples that are now separated by military deployment.
I even know professionals who took jobs in other states to keep thier family financially afloat.
Thank you once again for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: CullenLovin226 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
OH. MY. GOD!!! What ever will I do without you and this story??? I am SO in LOVE with the way you played out the conclusion to this story. That being said, I am also so sad to know it's done=( You have written such a beautiful version of thier experiences leading up to her change! The finale to that change could not have gone better in my mind! Other than an epilogue, will there be any sort of sequel to this story?? Maybe some random chapters from time to time just to tell us what our favorite vamp loverbirds are up to??? I would love to beg you to continue writing, but I know this is "your baby" and an author just knows when it's done! To be honest with you, you could write and re-write this story forever, and truth be told I would still keep reading with wreckless abandon!!! You truly put to words all I wanted, and needed to read and feel from this love story=) I love The Saga, and ALL of these characters, but this was definately the "something more" that we all so badly longed for. Thank you again Miss LauraCullen!!!! Forever a fan, Theresa
Reviewer: mmy4est (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I fucking LOVE your story!!!
You are answering so many questions I've had, especially about the blood and all. And it's nice to see Esme show up as other than "motherly" (whatever the hell that means).
thank you!
Reviewer: Sophie22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Thank you Thank you Thank you
AMAZING :D
and have a great birthday :)
x
Reviewer: Ashamaley (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY =]...i love this story so much it is brilliant...thank you for writing it you are very tallented.
I hope you have had a wonderful birthday =]
x
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I CANT BREATH!
Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I wish my honeymoon went that good. DAYUM!!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
great part
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
IT WOULDNT BE BELLA AND EDWARD WITH OUT EDWARD BROODING A LIL! LOL
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I DIDNT RATE THE FIRST 2 CHAPTERS DID REALIZE WE COULD BUT THEY GET 10'S TO!
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I hope we get to know about some of the other itmes on the list. I especially would like to know about the blood donation reveal.
Reviewer: TiffaniMM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This was a great story! I love that you kept the story somewhat familiar but gave us THE BEST insight to their sex lives. You didn't just write smut (the sex scenes), you wrote about 2 pple in love and what they do together when they are in love. Thanks so much for sharing this with us! LOVED IT! Oh, and I thought the journal for Edward to read while Bella was changing was brilliant!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
MMMMMM, I SWEAR, THANK U FOR WRITING THIS! i WANTED MORE IN THE SAGA BUT SINCE TEENS WERE READING WE COULD NOT HAVE IT. SO THANK U FOR FILLING THAT WANT AND "NEED! LOL THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING AND NAUGHTY! =)
Reviewer: Titania (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
WWWWOOOOOOWWWW! Holy freaking awesome Batman!! Well worth following this story to the end!
Reviewer: melbel (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
omg i love it its awesome i dont want to end :( deffinately hanging out for the epilouge.thank you so much :)
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OMG,OMG,OMG!! YES!!!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I AM LOVING THIS SO FAR!!!!! WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY!
Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
okay officially hate you.. You are too good. I was balling like a baby. absolutely AMAZING.
Reviewer: jbess (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I've had such a great time reading. I love the idea of having Jasper help with the change.
Happy birthday!!
Reviewer: panda-marnie-um (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
bella hunting = wow!
amazing story! i love seeing that it's your story thats been updated!
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