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Reviewer: emily_brown (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake


Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Wow!!! There are not enough words to describe this story. After every chapter I needed a cold shower. Took me 3 days to read it, and staying up those long hours were definitely worth this story. I can't wait for the epilogue. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: izabo69 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

he's too freakin hot!!!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I can't stand that this is coming to an end!! wwwahhhh!!! Now that they can have no-holds-barred HOT FUCKIN SEX!!! Holy shit...couldn't even wait to get his pants Mumbling now, now, now, in, in, in....major wetness. Pounding it home...GGAAHHH!!!!  I love it Love it Love it

Reviewer: Bella-Nympha (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

God, I want you to know that I thank the day I decided to follow the link to this story in the Bellie Awards Nominated List Webpage.</P><p>Because I really believe you're a WRITER. And If you're publishing a novel I want to read it. You are capable of the most perv chapters I've ever read in a fanfiction -seriously, I can´t picture the last punishment in my mind-. But the whole issue of the book Bella writes to Edward to read and distract during her change is absolutely perfect. Adoration, Love, Tenderness... are hugely described in your words. It's the real demmonstration that this story is not just a list of sex fantasies fulfilled. Appart from that, all these fantasies have made my nights.</p><p>This is a fanfiction to reread and feast. Thank you. Would you mind if I try to translate it into my language, so my Twilight forum friends could enjoy it themselves too? They would love it.</p><P>

Reviewer: MyCullen893 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! and can there please be a chapter where we see what happens with the entries.....i really wanna see what he wrote for his hw!!! It was such a great chapter by the way. I loved it...and i INSIST that you write more stories. Thanx a million. Your chapters always find a way to make my day. ;)

Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

it was my b day on friday Iam am 29 really lol I love this chapter its amazing soo sad to see it end though good job thanks

Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

omg omg omg, i absolutely loved it!!! i really liked your little changes from the original way the book went, i think it was really good. still kept with the essence of the original. and i love love love love, the dresses and jewelery, omg, im just at aww, lol


Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

i totally love that edward added to the list. and i like his own little list, lol


Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

That was amazing. I loved it. Every chapter drew me in.. It was absolutely incredible. I don't want this story to ever end. lol

Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

awesome chapter, i love this story :)
cant wait to

Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

this was AMAZING.. I cried so hard.. just amazing.

Reviewer: Lauren2Pink (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

I have been putting off reading this for MONTHS even though it is at the top of all the top 10 lists on the site... I was so convinced that surely pure smut would not be THAT entertaining... Damn! I was so wrong!!!! I am totally hooked and really wishing my hubby was not napping with our 2 year old right now.... THANKS!! 

Reviewer: TwilightSherry (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I'm super happy you will be writing an epilogue.  But, this chapter was wonderful.

I really enjoyed her description of the change...especially this about Jasper - "I felt you. I was was like a room of fire. And I saw you. It was like you were outside of the glass room I was in and you sucked the fire out of my room and pulled it into yours. And then because the roar of the flames was gone I could hear Edward. You gave him to me." - I don't think I've ever read Jasper helping her through the change before and that was brilliant.  Especially to here her descirbe it.

You beautifully described the whole waking up and her experiencing everything for the first time.  I always love that part in the vamp vics.  It seems like it would be hard to do, and yet everyone does it different, which I love, the subtle differences of everyone's perspectives of what that would be like.

The hunt was great and the 1st time vamp sex awesome. I love how she finally knows the restraint he had to have with her and that he doesn't have to have it anymore.

The convo at the end declaring their love for her/their new lives was the perfect ending. They love each other forever and now they are equally able to show it.

Awesome story.  Great job.  Thanx for sharing.

Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

SO AWESOME.. Thats all I can say. WOW!! YAY.. Im excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: williams65 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Excellant Story, I have throughly enjoyed it.  Keep up the great writing!!!

Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing


Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

First of all i hope you had a great birthday :)

Anyway, this has to be the best fanfic EVER! The ending was awesome and i am looking forward to the epilogues hugely (by the way i think about 30 epilogues would be sufficient). I am going to miss reading this so much! xD

Thankyou for writing it!

Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters


Reviewer: Lisa1070 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Im so sad that its almost over. I cant wait to read about edwards reaction to Bellas blood that she had carlisle take from her, to give to Edward.

Reviewer: bmw24 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Wow, just when I had resigned myself to a long wait for Chapter 26, here it is! I loved this chapter as much as the rest of the story, especially the description of the sensory differences and the sluggishness of Bella's brain to catch up with her new state of existence....almost like it was a left-over human weakness that I didn't expect....thought she would wake up sharp and perfect as the rest of her new abilities seem to be. I look forward to the epilogue, although, like you, I'm sad there has to be an eventual end! Awesome work.....I would give this more than a '10' if I could!

Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

A great end to a great fic, bring on the epilogues!!!!

Nina xx

Reviewer: Tayci (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I think you need to write about twenty-seven epilogues, 'kay?

This is my absolute favorite fan-fic. You've really captured the characters and this is a perfect alterantive to the mess that is BD. Not to mention, it's the hottest smut out there. I'm very eager to see how you play out the scene where Bella gives Edward her blood. So update soon! lol


Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music


Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I think that Bella's book, list and homework would be the perfect gift for two lovers.  Maybe you should publish iit in a form for any committed couple to use. Sprinkle examples from other couples in there for guidance. Think about all of the couples that are now separated by military deployment. 

I even know professionals who took jobs in other states to keep thier family financially afloat.

Thank you once again for sharing your talent with us.


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