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Reviewer: mmy4est (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love the way you add the extra touches... going through Bella's photo album, being sad that none of the Cullens had one, and realizing that is why Alice and Rose placed so much importance on creating one for Renesmee. You really are an incredible writer, but even better, you have great ideas that tie the stories together.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Well damn, girl. I need a fan.
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY BIRTHDAY !! I CANT BELIEVE IT HAS ALMOST COME TO AN END :( PLEASE TELL ME YOU WILL CONTINUE
Reviewer: julierose (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Please keep writing!!!!!
Even if you have to end this story, can you continue writing about them as vampires??? You are SUCH a talented writer!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
the gift from the pack was so cute... and im just itching to find out what bellas little project was, lol and her good by to charlie made me think of when i moved away from home, it tucked at my heart strings
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Reviewer: lexifisher (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
OH MY!!!!!! I WOULD BUY ONE OF YOUR BOOKS IN A HEARTBEAT. WILL MISS THIS STORY WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED. THANK YOU FOR THE STORY.
Reviewer: emily_brown (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Wow!!! There are not enough words to describe this story. After every chapter I needed a cold shower. Took me 3 days to read it, and staying up those long hours were definitely worth this story. I can't wait for the epilogue. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: izabo69 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
he's too freakin hot!!!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I can't stand that this is coming to an end!! wwwahhhh!!! Now that they can have no-holds-barred HOT FUCKIN SEX!!! Holy shit...couldn't even wait to get his pants off...hot. Mumbling now, now, now, in, in, in....major wetness. Pounding it home...GGAAHHH!!!! I love it Love it Love it
Reviewer: Bella-Nympha (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
God, I want you to know that I thank the day I decided to follow the link to this story in the Bellie Awards Nominated List Webpage.</P><p>Because I really believe you're a WRITER. And If you're publishing a novel I want to read it. You are capable of the most perv chapters I've ever read in a fanfiction -seriously, I can´t picture the last punishment in my mind-. But the whole issue of the book Bella writes to Edward to read and distract during her change is absolutely perfect. Adoration, Love, Tenderness... are hugely described in your words. It's the real demmonstration that this story is not just a list of sex fantasies fulfilled. Appart from that, all these fantasies have made my nights.</p><p>This is a fanfiction to reread and feast. Thank you. Would you mind if I try to translate it into my language, so my Twilight forum friends could enjoy it themselves too? They would love it.</p><P>
Reviewer: MyCullen893 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! and can there please be a chapter where we see what happens with the entries.....i really wanna see what he wrote for his hw!!! It was such a great chapter by the way. I loved it...and i INSIST that you write more stories. Thanx a million. Your chapters always find a way to make my day. ;)
Reviewer: dellatwi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
it was my b day on friday Iam am 29 really lol I love this chapter its amazing soo sad to see it end though good job thanks
Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
omg omg omg, i absolutely loved it!!! i really liked your little changes from the original way the book went, i think it was really good. still kept with the essence of the original. and i love love love love, the dresses and jewelery, omg, im just at aww, lol
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Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i totally love that edward added to the list. and i like his own little list, lol
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Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
That was amazing. I loved it. Every chapter drew me in.. It was absolutely incredible. I don't want this story to ever end. lol
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
awesome chapter, i love this story :)
cant wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
this was AMAZING.. I cried so hard.. just amazing.
Reviewer: Lauren2Pink (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I have been putting off reading this for MONTHS even though it is at the top of all the top 10 lists on the site... I was so convinced that surely pure smut would not be THAT entertaining... Damn! I was so wrong!!!! I am totally hooked and really wishing my hubby was not napping with our 2 year old right now.... THANKS!!
Reviewer: TwilightSherry (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I'm super happy you will be writing an epilogue. But, this chapter was wonderful.
I really enjoyed her description of the change...especially this about Jasper - "I felt you. I was trapped...in...it was like a room of fire. And I saw you. It was like you were outside of the glass room I was in and you sucked the fire out of my room and pulled it into yours. And then because the roar of the flames was gone I could hear Edward. You gave him to me." - I don't think I've ever read Jasper helping her through the change before and that was brilliant. Especially to here her descirbe it.
You beautifully described the whole waking up and her experiencing everything for the first time. I always love that part in the vamp vics. It seems like it would be hard to do, and yet everyone does it different, which I love, the subtle differences of everyone's perspectives of what that would be like.
The hunt was great and the 1st time vamp sex awesome. I love how she finally knows the restraint he had to have with her and that he doesn't have to have it anymore.
The convo at the end declaring their love for her/their new lives was the perfect ending. They love each other forever and now they are equally able to show it.
Awesome story. Great job. Thanx for sharing.
Reviewer: Roxtar28 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
SO AWESOME.. Thats all I can say. WOW!! YAY.. Im excited to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: williams65 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Excellant Story, I have throughly enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing!!!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
IF U CAN WALK THROUGH MUD U CAN FUCK THROUGH BLOOD! U GO GIRL!!!!! IF I COULD IWOULD GIVE THIS ONE A 20 FOR THE GREAT SYLE AND DETAIL!=P
Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
First of all i hope you had a great birthday :)
Anyway, this has to be the best fanfic EVER! The ending was awesome and i am looking forward to the epilogues hugely (by the way i think about 30 epilogues would be sufficient). I am going to miss reading this so much! xD
Thankyou for writing it!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
HA HA GOT TO LOVE EM~! HE IS MY FAV. O WOULD LOVE TO HAVE A BIG BROTHER LIKE THAT GREAT CHAPTER!
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