Reviewer: aeerdna (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I love this story! I love the way you kept stephanies characters exactly how she "made them"...how she wanted them to be. I love this stories sexyness! I have one big plea: I'd like to see them open the bottle with Bella's blood and how both of them react to it. You're a wonderful writer!
Reviewer: edward_freak_29 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
IT WAS STILL A TEN! AND THIS IS BETTER THAT WE GOT TO SEE THE INTERACTION, I LIKED TI!
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
WOW - hot meadow making out :) Awesome stuff... imagine Edward making you scream with delight by just "rubbing" you the right way - and through clothes as well!!! Hot stuff :)
Onto the next chapter - oh so yummy!!!
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
As they say - don't bet against Alice!!! LOL
Love how Edward could smell Bella - that just cracks me up :)
Great chapter... onto the next... ;)
Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hehehe - finally got to this story! I have had it stored away to get too & now I finally have.... yeah for me :)
Reviewing each chapter is a great idea - just to keep YOU in check of what we think - LOL... love it already - onto the next chapter now!!!
Reviewer: leerleer (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Laura can't wait for the epilogue. This was freakin great
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wonderful!!
Reviewer: melbourne-cullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
happy belated birthday!
great chapter! :D
Reviewer: izabo69 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
you have a gift!!!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Well that was just great im so sad that it over but happy thats shes finally changed. i cant wait to read the epiloque oh and happy belated birthday i hope u had a great one :)
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Happy Birthday Mrs. Laura Cullen. I absolutely worship you for this. You are amazing, truly amazing! A million 'thank yous' would never be quite enough. But regardless, I thank you.
Reviewer: Corinne 22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Mmmmm....juicy, juicy lemon...Did I mention juicy?? :)
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Happy Birthday. HUGS. Great chapter. So sad its coming to an end but i guess all good things must come to an end sometime.
Reviewer: izabo69 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Unbelievable I cant go to bed now .... I need to know what he's going to do now???
Reviewer: Corinne 22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
You know what? I think I would have wanted number 17 too, if I was Bella. Wow, how sick does that make me?
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
happy birthday! and thanks for a great story.
Reviewer: smily81 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
great chapter!
Reviewer: shelbymay (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
=) I LOVED IT!!!!!!! The Book was amazing and was a great idea!!
Reviewer: Corinne 22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Well..I wonder how many of us have done that little shower trick.... :)
Reviewer: ColorMeBeautiful (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
did you forget "the list"? The whole reason for this? They have to do it in the thunderstorm!!!!! I need to see that!!! Please....this chapter was way more 'realer' (if thats a word) than stephanies version of her change....but i loved it.
Reviewer: n-c-masen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
WOW!!!!!
Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
omg, that was the sweetest way ever to be changed, and her gift to her i could really tell (through your writing) that it calmed edward, i didnt have to be jasper to feel it, lol. and its so cute that he went along with everything that she said and told him to do. i know this is edward we are talking about here, but there a millions of men out there that wouldnt have done that. makes me love him even more.
Reviewer: kap319 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Fantastic!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
happy birthday, and really? all we are to get is an epilogue. It should be very long, I would hope the list would be completed and the added to for a sequal??
Reviewer: bella3592 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
This is just simply the BEST fan fiction I have ever read. You understand the characters to a tee and wrote the story beautifully. I doubt SM herself could have done better. I applaud your talents as a writer and you passion as a Twilight fan. Thanks for feeding my obsession just that much more. :)
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