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Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great JOb!

Reviewer: twitterbug (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

The blood drinking scene was fabulous, I love the way he enjoyed it like I would a finely-aged wine. Them tearing down the cabin during their lovemaking was also incredibly sexy. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the ride.

Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

this is one of the best epilogues EVER! packed full of emotion, erotica and a good ending, what more could anyone ask for! i really do hope you do a sequel involving edwards list, this was the first twilight fic i ever started reading. it was you that got me hooked :P thank you for writing such a great story, i loved every second of it

Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Now this has been one of my favorite stories here on Twilighted and although I hate to see it end, I have it on favorites :P!  Awesome job as always and a wonderful ending for our favorite vampires!



Reviewer: lanester (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

A brilliant end to a brilliant story.  This is definitely one of the fics that I will read over and over and over again.  Thank you for writing such a brilliant masterpiece and sharing it with us.



Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

amazing story I loved it a lot...I really hope you do the sequel.

Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Steamy Edward! Alice Interruptus! Fun story... :)

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great ending!

Reviewer: jerzygirl (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

This was an amazing chapter!  I love the way it was told. I felt like I was there with them experiencing this whole transformation together.  What an awesome idea to have her right a "book" of things to keep him occupied.

My heart broke at this line--"Then at 7:55 on September 14, Bella's heart exploded in one final clenching beat that made her body arch up through her chest as if she was a puppet pulled by a string.

I sucked in a breath, wide-eyed and mouth agape, and waited, and waited."

As I am sure everyone did! 

Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Awww.. your baby is almost finished! You should be so proud, this is one of the best stories out there in the UNstupid SMUTastic-ness category. ;)

Happy Birthday Chicca!

You know, you don't necessarily have to stop the story. There are lots of plots these naghty kids can continue on with. I can think of three really good ones off the top of my head.

1) Two years down the road, Bella has her bloodlust under control, and she wants to study human sexuality her first semester at Dartmouth. All the Cullen kids decide to join her in class and the hilarity ensues. You could even morph "The List" into "The Syllubus" and have them work through it. Think of all the possibilities!!

2) Duh! Edward's List! Let him come out of his shell a little more now that Bella is more "durable".. It's a bird, it's a plane, it's kinky Edward and Bella and lots of BDSM and role play!

3) Ten years down the road, after studying psychology and biology, Bella wants to teach. Kinky Bella teaching human sexuality focusing on the kinky stuff, driving all those horny college guys insane.. and Edward is her sexy TA all the girls fantasize about. Lets see what fantasies they can live out!

See? Lots of possibilities. Hell, use them all! :)

Author's Response:

Woooo--I really want to read numbers one and three!  Get to writing!  :)

Reviewer: Cynthia35 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Brilliant! and sweet and tender....and so sexy.

I Love this story.

Thank you!

Kisses from Argentina.

Reviewer: Buckeye Princess (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake


Reviewer: edwardbella1 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Happy Birthday to the absolute best writer on Twilighted!!

Your story...I can't tell you how much I love this story. I would look everyday to see if you'd updated and wa so thrilled when you had - knowing that I was in for a great treat.

This was a perfect chapter. I loved the enteries that Bella left for Edward - taking care of him even when she couldn't really "be" with him. That was so perfect.

And Bella and Edward finally getting some vampire loving in the woods?? Hell yes!!! Come on - who was Stephenie kidding? If I had the choice, I would choose Edward every time - yup, even over seeing my kid, sorry, Nessie, but he's fucking hot.

I was so relieved when I saw your author's note and had at least one epilogue to look forward to. Yay - the story isn't over yet!Please do more then pne and I'll be your best friend!!

Excellent - I loved it all, and I might have to start from the beginning and read it again...

Reviewer: crazychika2405 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

omg I have absolutely loved reading your story!!! This has been by far one of my favorites!! I can't wait to see what else you have for us to read!!!! I just love love love this story I have made serveral other friends who love this website check it out and they have all fallen in love with it! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: miapie (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

i loved it 

Reviewer: hookedontwi (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Love Edward's reaction to her scent lol

Reviewer: Zico1225 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

*stands and applauds loudly*

A Standing ovation for you lady! This is one of the most amazingly brilliant fics ever - in fact the Twigasm ladies need to induct you into the Twi fanfic hall of fame!  Bring on the epilogues (I am so not ready to watch your B&E ride (he he I said ride) off into the sunset yet.

Thank you for bringing this to us - you are a freaking superstar.

BTW - Happy birthday to you. Hope you had a great one Like you, I was 29 in August also!

Reviewer: hookedontwi (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Hey, so I'm way late to this party, but I love the concept... its so organic. Seems like something she'd totally do.

Your writing style is so fluid. I think I'm really going to enjoy this!

Author's Response:

Welcome to the party!  Hope you continue to enjoy!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sgk39 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I've read alot of twilight fan fiction... by far, this story is the best of the best.   Thank you SO MUCH for sharing it with us. 

I'm forever grateful.

Lots of Birthday love coming at ya' !!! :)


Reviewer: denivamp (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

it was fine i just read the wierd parts a lil faster.. Great job!!

Reviewer: cozyegg (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

I think one of the best parts of this chapter is the letter.  It's so....Edward.  Love it.

Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Love it, this is one of the best stories on this site!!

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

It was an awsome journey for a fantastic, amazing story!! I totally understand your separation anxiety, and I think all your grateful readers feel it too...

Definitely one of the best story I've read! Thank you so much!!

I'm looking forward for more of your work!! (And Happy Birthday from France!!)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans

Sorry - not a long review so I can go straight onto the next part of their weekend :)

P.S. This chapter rocks!!! I loved it :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

I think this was a fabulous chapter - the girlie day to Edward's out of control phone call! Well ALL of the text messages &phones calls have be awesome :)

Onto the next chapter for me... yippeee!!!!

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