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Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Love it, this is one of the best stories on this site!!

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

It was an awsome journey for a fantastic, amazing story!! I totally understand your separation anxiety, and I think all your grateful readers feel it too...

Definitely one of the best story I've read! Thank you so much!!

I'm looking forward for more of your work!! (And Happy Birthday from France!!)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans

Sorry - not a long review so I can go straight onto the next part of their weekend :)

P.S. This chapter rocks!!! I loved it :)

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

I think this was a fabulous chapter - the girlie day to Edward's out of control phone call! Well ALL of the text messages &phones calls have be awesome :)

Onto the next chapter for me... yippeee!!!!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters

All I can say is - GET ME A PHONE WITH EDWARD ON THE OTHER END....NOW!!!!

Haha - straight onto the next chapter once again....yeah for me :)

Reviewer: nikkijoy (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I just had a thought, when does Edward get the blood Bella had taken for him, I really wanted to read about that part!!

Reviewer: nikkijoy (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

That was absolutely brilliant!! Just how BD should have gone. You should be so proud of yourself. I loved every bit of this story and im going to read the whole thing strait through again when its finished. Again, wonderful job!!

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

That was phenomenal.  I think this falls under the category of Better than Cannon.  I loved seeing Edward's side of her first hunt.  The whole thing is so well written and descriptive.  I can really see it clearly.  It just feels right.  Natural.  The way it should be.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Fantastic story! Looking forward to the epilogue. I hope you had a great birthday. My 39th was 8/15...it sucked. Next year will be better :)

Reviewer: Angel of Music (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Hands down the best fanfic I have read so far. Loved everything about it. It was true to character, hot, sexy, emotianal, beautiful. Please, please don't stop. Need more. MORE!

Reviewer: edwards twilight girl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

i like it so far not too bad cant wait to read the est

Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

OMG its soooo fabulous, hehe its such a cool story and u no theres still the list, so if u can keep thinkin of things to put on there and then theres Edwards list u won't have to stop with this story for quite a while, eheheh

Anyway i have loved this story from start 2 not finish yet lol

Gem

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music

Ok - so when is Edward able to do this to Bella? I know he said he has to wait but come on.... she needs it just as much as he is getting it? Doesn't she?!?!? LOL

Another hot & steamy chapter - I bet Alice is thoroughly enjoying her visions now :) hahaha... luckily for me - straight onto the next chapter WOOHOO!!!!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control

WOW - Don't even have words for this chapter - other than HOT HOT HOT!!!!

Love the Dom Bella... how did she get the power to hold back? I didn't think Edward wold be able to control himself either!!! AWESOME chapter...

 

Luckily for me - straight onto the next one... phew - need a cold shower now :) LOL

Reviewer: ctobias81 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I have to tell you I LOVE your story.  No wonder you have received so many reviews!  Fabulous writing.  I must say though I am disappointed that you didn't address number 17 on the list.  I thought for sure it would be one you were going to get around to after the change.

Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Wow.  Really loved it.  But what about, the gift?  Don't think we have forgotten. 



Author's Response:

Neither have I!

Reviewer: EdwardNBella (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Simply Amazing Chapter!!!!!  HOTT is all I can say!  Thank You!

Reviewer: denivamp (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

omg........ *runs to BF*

Reviewer: jamdowner (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Brilliant!!!

Reviewer: denivamp (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

loved jazz POV!! very funny, very good job on E POV too!!!

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Laura,  I've been too sad about reaching the end of your epic love story to write a real review, until now.  <wipes a tear away>

I really loved how Bella's wedding ring helped bring her back to Edward. 

That was fun how they crossed a couple things off their lists without even thinking about it.  How sweet that you brought them full circle by having their first time up against a tree, like in the meadow.  Lovely- his appreciating her tatoo even more now that it's in 3-d.

The best part for me was the RELIEF Edward finally has, now that she's changed.  He so wanted her to stay human but we all know how happy he's going to be now that she's durable and he can keep her forever.

Excellent chapter, as always.

love, Richelle

 

Reviewer: dells (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Excellent chapter!!!, as always. Your story has been a fantastic read from beginning to end.

I'm very sad to see it come to an end, although I know it had to end sometime. I, too, will miss it very much.

I've tried to occupy myself by reading other Edporn fics while waiting for your next chapters to post, but no one writes Edporn like you do, and although I did find and read several that were really good, they just didn't compare to The List, which should easily go down in Twilight fanfic history as the best Edward porn ever written. :)

After completely glutting myself on Edward porn for months, and realizing that I'd already found the best one out there, I looked for something completely fresh and new and came across these two incredibly creative stories by Annamorphos that I hope you might enjoy now that you will need to take your mind off missing your own story:

The Dead of Night,

http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=3150&textsize=0&chapter=1

and Solstice.

http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=4067&textsize=1&chapter=1

Both are very well written and introduce new supernatural familys that are very unique and extremely mysterious, resulting in stories that keep you wanting to learn more and more about them with each tantalizing new discovery about them.

Neither has any smut in them, but are plenty intriguing enough that I don't miss the lack of smut, and there is still just a bit of chemistry between some characters to make me hope for a splash of lemon eventually as she finishes her"dish"

I hope you enjoy them, and if you do, perhaps give them a shout out in your last A/N? I truly feel that their low review counts are just a matter of underexposure because most ppl only read the "top tens" and "most reviewed" and simply haven't used the browsing feature yet to discover them.

Again, THANK YOU so much for your fantastic story, and I will be waiting impatiently, but a little sadly as well, for the last update notice for The List.

dells



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and for the story recs--I'm always looking for new stories so I'll put these on my to-read list!  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games

Oh this is getting SOOOO good!!!!

But I have to get to bed - so more reading tomorrow - I shall just dream of what is to come!!! LOL...

Reviewer: denivamp (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

i love it, so amazing! your a great writer!!!!!

Reviewer: denivamp (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

absolutely amazing!!!!!

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