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Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

i need a cold shower.

bravo laura, bravo!


-stands to the side applauding-

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I wondered how you'd fit Bella's blood donation in.  I loved the scavenger hunt and the Christmas gifts.  I actually loved the entire chapter... the entire story!  Great job!  I look forward to reading your future projects.

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Northern Lights

A few lights for you...a gift in exchange for the GIFT that you have given us...

This was so full of so many things...

Had to laugh at the girls' hunt...and the destruction of the cabin!  And then the CLAPPING...that was great...and funny!

LOVED her crest...I want one!

And then the gift of her blood...all of the feelings that he went through...

The scavenger hunt was perfect...kept him away from her long enough to let some things settle...and some things build!

Yep, you are on my author's alert so that when Edward and Bella start working on HIS list I'll have front row seats...

Thanks, sweets...this was a pleasure and a JOY!

Thanks for sharing...


Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I have been waiting for The. Gift. since I knew it would be given.  You totally did not disappoint.  It was more perfect than I imagined. 

I love how you made Edward a teenager and an ageless, old soul in this story.  He grew so much, and so did Bella, as she learned how to show him LOVE. 


Beautiful, beautiful work.


Best of wishes with your novel!  Paranormal romances are THE hot ticket item these days! :)  Your skills are undoubted and I'm sure that the knowledge that you already have a large reading public will help in persuading a quality agent to represent you. :)


Wish I could give more than ten stars, because you deserve at least twenty.


Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

For a long story basically all smut you delivered new and exciting scenes in every chapter. This one with the blood and the breaking of the cabin, well it was just fantastic and everything the ending should be.


Good luck with your real novels and I look forward to Edward's List. : )

Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

I think I would have left the panties under his pillow. You know he would still find them, even though he doesn't sleep... :D

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I loved that he drank her blood and enjoyed every drop.  Wow.  I loved that they wrecked a house and that everyone was there to applaud.  I loved so many things.  Thanks for writing this fun story!

Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

WONDERFUL!!! i loved it all! i thought the cabin falling down and the round of applause was priceless! the part when edward drank her blood had me holding my breath. i like that they sat down and went through her binder and all of his "homework" it was all a great ending to a truly wonderful story that was also totally fuckhot! i'll definitely be reading this again...and i'd love to see edward's list! oh, and a million! fantastic! congratulations!

Reviewer: jagoodman (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

congrats on finishing your story. breaking the cabin was great- i love that everyone was there clapping when it fell. The pictures of Charlie were very sweet. the endin worked well and you gave us closure but there is always room for more. thanks!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

PERFECT ending.


I absolutely ADORED it.

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Thank you!  I have truly enjoyed this story.  I am thrilled that you are going to do a sequel.  I love your version of the twilight characters, especially tattoo getting and blood donating Bella.  Wow! All I can say is Thanks again.  It has been a great ride.  :)

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

That was truly beautiful. I am stunned and broken and elated all at once. Thank you. Your gift in writing is as tremendous as Bella's favorite squeeze toy.



Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I can't believe its over! - am so glad you are thinking of a sequel,but I do have to say that the epilogue was one of the best I ever read!!!

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

i loved the whole story! it was amazing, but i did notice that there were a couple of things that were not completed on bella list, so therefore you have to do a sequal =] xxx

Reviewer: sweek539 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Wow. I can't believe this is all over. The story that opened my eyes and mind to a world of fanfic that I didn't want to give a chance. I was VERY hesitant to read any stories that involved Edward & Bella... I'm not sure why. I just was. But when I read the summary of this story, I was intrigued. And, after reading the very first chapter, I was hooked. So, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU, LAURA!! You brought me back to my creativty, and for that, I will be forever grateful! This story is beautiful... a truly, fantastic piece of work that I think Stephanie Meyers would be damn proud to read. You captured the characters she created flawlessly. It never once felt like I was reading a fanfic. Instead, I felt as though I were reading snippets that had been left out of Stephanie's books. Congratulations on your story. You deserve EVERY BIT of praise for your work. Thank you for devoting your time and effort to The List. It has been a great experience reading your work.


Your Truly,


Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great JOb!

Reviewer: twitterbug (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

The blood drinking scene was fabulous, I love the way he enjoyed it like I would a finely-aged wine. Them tearing down the cabin during their lovemaking was also incredibly sexy. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the ride.

Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

this is one of the best epilogues EVER! packed full of emotion, erotica and a good ending, what more could anyone ask for! i really do hope you do a sequel involving edwards list, this was the first twilight fic i ever started reading. it was you that got me hooked :P thank you for writing such a great story, i loved every second of it

Reviewer: marti1013 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Now this has been one of my favorite stories here on Twilighted and although I hate to see it end, I have it on favorites :P!  Awesome job as always and a wonderful ending for our favorite vampires!



Reviewer: lanester (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

A brilliant end to a brilliant story.  This is definitely one of the fics that I will read over and over and over again.  Thank you for writing such a brilliant masterpiece and sharing it with us.



Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

amazing story I loved it a lot...I really hope you do the sequel.

Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Steamy Edward! Alice Interruptus! Fun story... :)

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great ending!

Reviewer: jerzygirl (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

This was an amazing chapter!  I love the way it was told. I felt like I was there with them experiencing this whole transformation together.  What an awesome idea to have her right a "book" of things to keep him occupied.

My heart broke at this line--"Then at 7:55 on September 14, Bella's heart exploded in one final clenching beat that made her body arch up through her chest as if she was a puppet pulled by a string.

I sucked in a breath, wide-eyed and mouth agape, and waited, and waited."

As I am sure everyone did! 

Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Awww.. your baby is almost finished! You should be so proud, this is one of the best stories out there in the UNstupid SMUTastic-ness category. ;)

Happy Birthday Chicca!

You know, you don't necessarily have to stop the story. There are lots of plots these naghty kids can continue on with. I can think of three really good ones off the top of my head.

1) Two years down the road, Bella has her bloodlust under control, and she wants to study human sexuality her first semester at Dartmouth. All the Cullen kids decide to join her in class and the hilarity ensues. You could even morph "The List" into "The Syllubus" and have them work through it. Think of all the possibilities!!

2) Duh! Edward's List! Let him come out of his shell a little more now that Bella is more "durable".. It's a bird, it's a plane, it's kinky Edward and Bella and lots of BDSM and role play!

3) Ten years down the road, after studying psychology and biology, Bella wants to teach. Kinky Bella teaching human sexuality focusing on the kinky stuff, driving all those horny college guys insane.. and Edward is her sexy TA all the girls fantasize about. Lets see what fantasies they can live out!

See? Lots of possibilities. Hell, use them all! :)

Author's Response:

Woooo--I really want to read numbers one and three!  Get to writing!  :)

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