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Reviewer: Rosat (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Perfect ending!!!

Loved the presentation of her blood, classy.

I could totally visulize him kneeling there taking it in.


Reviewer: Trouble08 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

I know it is soon, but please don't leave us. I will read anything you write.

Thank you for this lovely story and all the time you had to have dedicated to it.


Reviewer: jadedandboring (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

Tge panties as a punishment is absolutely hilarious.

Reviewer: jadedandboring (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

I think... I think i'm going to have to take my husband to a meadow somewhere. Holy crap.

Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows have loved, loved, LOVED this fic!  It was so superbly written!  PLEASE let me know when your original work gets published so I can go buy it!!!  Thank you so very much for all of your hard work on this.  It is the best EVER!

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

What a love story!  This was better than Stephanie's version---way better!

The Bella that you created was 10 times more enjoyable.  Her insight and thoughtfulness, her total sacrifice and the depth of E/B's love were so moving in this story. 

I'll definitely be putting you on my "favorite author" list. 

Loved the Cullen crest part of the story and the inside meaning of the locket (something that I'd not thought of) and the picture album with pictures of Charlie---very touching.

Great job---well done, Laura.

Reviewer: Mi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

ohhhh, I'm going to miss this story. they are so cute and hot... I really hope that you can continue writing Edward's list... I bet that his list is way more hot... LOL

I loved the whole story from beginning to end... you are great... keep writing other stuff, pleaseeee!!!!!!  :D

Reviewer: jadedandboring (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Alice absolutlely cracks me up.
Loved Edward's reaction to Bella when he came in from hunting. What girl wouldn't?

Reviewer: monmal (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

*wipes tears away*

I can't believe it's over! The epilogue was beyond perfection. Even though I loved every part of it, I must say that when Bella gives Edward the gift of her blood...ummmm wow. Yeah. LOVE it.Super hot.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do the sequel.... I will be anxiously awaiting!!! :)

Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! i wish it didnt have to end!!!! im gonna have to reread it all the way threw!!!!! it was soooooooooo good!!! i love u !!!!!! lol

Reviewer: Moonjenn (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Thumbs up!! I felt it stayed very true to the flow of Stephenie's writing, which I love. I snickered here in my office at some of the lines. "being with two..." and the scene at Newton's - go Bella!!

On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: jadedandboring (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Thank God for detachable shower heads. Whew. Not sure why i'm so late to this particular party, but i'm glad I've started reading.

Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great ending! Your story was one of the first I ever read on here and its sad to see it come to an end. I loved how they destroyed the house & the reactions from the family afterwards. Anyways thank you for sharing this story with us! I hope to see a sequel soon!

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I'm too sad to review. I know it had to come to an end at some point, but I'm still sad that it's over :( I am happy, however, that you will be returning to your other story :)

So I think my favourite part had to be the destruction of the cabin. And the blood, definitely the blood scene (although I was trying not to think too hard about drinking a glass of blood, ick).

Thank you for writing this story again.

Reviewer: justagirl1237 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I really loved this story :) Yeah, it was naughty but even without that, I would have loved it. My favorite part was actually during her change when she kept telling him she was okay. I get teary eyed just thinking about it. Hope to read more of your stories in the future! Excellent work.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows


Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

This whole thing -- story and chapter - was incredible!  I love that they destroyed the cabin and that they got applause for it.  That was so funny.  And I loved how you had Edward finally drink Bella's blood.  I'd been wondering about what happened with that, but figured that you had a plan, and what a plan it was!!

Thank you so much for this story.  I enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Blood drinking scene! It was just amazing. I was waiting for this. It was pretty hot, but pretty sweet, and soemthing about his confusion was beautiful and adorable. :D

Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

OMG! I love it! I'm so happy you finally made Bella give Edward the blood! But you say it's the end? NO! What about numbers 39, 40, 45, 46 on the list..It hasn't been done...I don't want this to end..:( TY for such an amazing story...If anything, add 39, 40, 45, & 46 to Edward's list. lol

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Epiclogue, indeed!  I love that title.  And I LOVED this ending!  Of course I'm sad to see it go, but I thought you rounded it off magnificently.  Good luck with your original novels, and I do hope to be reading about Edward's list at some point in the future!  Thanks for an amazing ride, it was a fantastic story.

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Love, love, love it!  This was an amazing story. And I look forward to reading Edward's list when you write it too!  Sorry to see it end, but it was oh so good getting there!

Reviewer: crazymexican (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows


i nreally enjoyed that.. lost count of how many smokes i went through in this chaptder alone, nevermind the whole story!!!

im so glad you are considering a sequel, it would be great even if it was something you just posted once in a while when an idea came to you.

you askedfor a review on favourite bits of this chapter and i must say i LOVED the destruction of the cabin haha, i really enjoyed that bit i thought it was about time they brought down a building or caused some damage.. is aaaaallll smutty goodness hehehe

thanks for giving us such a great fic :D

Reviewer: dazzeled (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Ok, so, from week one my favorite moment was without a doubt the killing of the cabin. From three weeks I'm not too sure because there were a lot of moments I enjoyed but I think it was a tie between Emmett and Rose's gifts' or the unvailing of Edward's list. Although, it would have made me much happier if I knew what was actually on the list. Finally, from Christmas night my favorite moment was when Edward finally got Bella's blood. I was starting to worry that you would't write about when Bella gave Edward her blood, but I'm really glad that you did. I'm sooo sad to see this story come to a close, I really enjoyed reading it. I'm still hoping that the epilouge will finally help you reach 10,000 reviews, because you really deserve them, so I wish you the best of luck. 8-)

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Wonderful - I love the blood part

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

*standing ovation*

Well done, Laura! This ending was simply magnificent and perfect! I loved every second of it!!!!

I am also very excited about a possible sequel to this story, but until then I thank you over and over for sharing your talent with us to give us The List!!

Good luck on your publishing endeavors!

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