It was an honor to read The List, a truly awesome romantic exploration tale. I truly loved watching your Edward and Bella evolve as items from The List were crossed off. I also love how you depicted Alice and Emmett as side characters who were more like their canon personalities and less like how most fan fics portray them.

The moment in this chapter that I was dying to see was Edward receiving Bella's blood as a gift. That was fantastic. It fulfilled all my questions about how would it be delivered, how he would react and whether would it change anything between Bella and him. Bravo! 

I also loved Edward and Bella's destruction of the old cottage during sex and the family cheering them on. Bella shooing them away and wanting to continue having sex with her husband was a riot too. 

I can't wait to read the sequel. I am so happy that you are also getting back to While You Were Gone. I truly enjoy that tale as well. Have fun writing as I will have reading what you submit. Thanks again for updating!

Wonderful! Perfect ending! Can't wait for Edward's List! Great job!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

I know it is soon, but please don't leave us. I will read anything you write.

Thank you for this lovely story and all the time you had to have dedicated to it.

 

I think... I think i'm going to have to take my husband to a meadow somewhere. Holy crap.

What a love story!  This was better than Stephanie's version---way better!

The Bella that you created was 10 times more enjoyable.  Her insight and thoughtfulness, her total sacrifice and the depth of E/B's love were so moving in this story. 

I'll definitely be putting you on my "favorite author" list. 

Loved the Cullen crest part of the story and the inside meaning of the locket (something that I'd not thought of) and the picture album with pictures of Charlie---very touching.

Great job---well done, Laura.

Alice absolutlely cracks me up.
Loved Edward's reaction to Bella when he came in from hunting. What girl wouldn't?

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! i wish it didnt have to end!!!! im gonna have to reread it all the way threw!!!!! it was soooooooooo good!!! i love u !!!!!! lol

Thank God for detachable shower heads. Whew. Not sure why i'm so late to this particular party, but i'm glad I've started reading.

I'm too sad to review. I know it had to come to an end at some point, but I'm still sad that it's over :( I am happy, however, that you will be returning to your other story :)

So I think my favourite part had to be the destruction of the cabin. And the blood, definitely the blood scene (although I was trying not to think too hard about drinking a glass of blood, ick).

Thank you for writing this story again.

SO SAD ITS OVER - CANT WAIT FOR EDWARDS LIST - I LOVE YOUR OTHER STORY WHILE YOU WERE GONE!

Blood drinking scene! It was just amazing. I was waiting for this. It was pretty hot, but pretty sweet, and soemthing about his confusion was beautiful and adorable. :D

Epiclogue, indeed!  I love that title.  And I LOVED this ending!  Of course I'm sad to see it go, but I thought you rounded it off magnificently.  Good luck with your original novels, and I do hope to be reading about Edward's list at some point in the future!  Thanks for an amazing ride, it was a fantastic story.

a-frickin-mazing!!!!

i nreally enjoyed that.. lost count of how many smokes i went through in this chaptder alone, nevermind the whole story!!!

im so glad you are considering a sequel, it would be great even if it was something you just posted once in a while when an idea came to you.

you askedfor a review on favourite bits of this chapter and i must say i LOVED the destruction of the cabin haha, i really enjoyed that bit i thought it was about time they brought down a building or caused some damage.. is aaaaallll smutty goodness hehehe

thanks for giving us such a great fic :D