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Reviews For The List
Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

OH MY GOD. (Hugs) Yeah, your amazing >< I loved all of it tbh. Really going to miss this, but you've ended it perfectly! And the 'Edwards List' Heeeellll yes! Thank-you for writing this. (:

Reviewer: EmelieL (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

OMG! I cant believe that this story is over!! :'( I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH!! <3333 Awesome epiclogue btw! Nearly cried at the end ^^ (A)

Really looking forward to Edward's List!! You are the best at Twilighted!! :D:D<33


Reviewer: Lilly22 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows


 Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your time, talent and creativity with all of us readers here at Twilighted!!!!!

 This is truly a masterpiece and is going down as one of my most favorite stories (not just 'fan') of all time!!

 I've laughed, cried, blushed, and longed for updates while reading this fic, so in case no one else has (which I doubt considering the astounding amount of reviews you have) I'll end my grateful post by simply saying...


Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

WOW. The cabin-destruction was fabulous. One of few truly memorable lemons I've read recently. And the gift of her blood was pitch perfect and very satisfying. I love these two. I will miss them muchly. Thank you so much for the gift of your writing.

Reviewer: NotTooOldForThis (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Thank you, Laura, for this wonderful story.  This is the HEA I have been waiting for.  I wondered how you were going to honor the blood donation - it was beautiful.

Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

Oh my that was so perfect.  Their desire for each other after hunting was too much to handle.  I guess they can scratch that off The List huh?  ;o)

Here's your review over at my site:  I'm so happy for you that you almost made it to 10000 here on Twilighted.  That is a feat in itself. 

I'll be so sad when I finally read the epilogue, but I know you own't disappoint Laura.  Thank you for taking us on this journey with you.

Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Dude! That was well worth the wait, I loved it, loved it, loved it. Gee I can't tell you enough it ended perfectly. Just perfect! Thanks so much once again for sharing your stories. And as always You Rock. Once again please keep me posted on your original work. Now that we have an actual title I can look it up. Also you mentioned that you have another book published but didn't mention a title. Hook it up so I can move on from your # 1 fanfic fan to your # 1 fan. LOL... We're not worthy, we're not worthy. Once again YOU ROCK!! God Bless and keep you writing.


Reviewer: cullen_gurl1924 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I'm like Edward drinking Bella's blood I don't want it to end. Amazing!!!

Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story. There are very few quality E/B stories that take off from a point in the Twilight universe and really mature the characters. Most just focus on the trianlge aspect of the series.. which is something I loathe. I enjoyed that this was an E/B story fully. Watching them as a couple deal with hurdles together. Know that they only want each other. Explore their physical relationship. Get married. Watch the change. It was a really nice take on their relationship that I'm sure Ill return to many times in the future.

My favorite part of the new chapter was probably the blood gift and the scavanger hunt type thing that she sent him on.  I had been waiting to see that for a long time. I also liked Edward's list and would love to see some of those in a subsequent story. Best of luck on your original work. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: annaciambellina (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Thank you so much, from my hearth! I can't belive it's finished...the List is the first fanfiction I had ever's special for me...

Than you.

Reviewer: AlexiV (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Fucking awesome.

Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

*sniff sniff*

I'm so sad...but also happy.  That was a wonderful fairytale ending.  Thank you for all the time and love and pervy goodness you put into this story & for sharing it with us.  I thought it was all so great, especially the hunting...Edward's submission to Bella's need and the sharing was darkly erotic.  The cabin smashing was delightfully amusing, and The Gift was just...perfect.


Good luck on your other ventures!

Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I'm so sad this has come to an end.  This is my favorite story of all, you are amazing, a very talented writer. I have to say the cabin wrecking was my favorite part. looking forward to a sequel. Best Wishes!

Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

That story was crazy great. The epiclogue was phenomenal and PERFECT!! I've enjoyed reading your writing and may have to look for you novels. You know I'll be following everything you write out here, lemony or not.


Reviewer: stinal102 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I would have a hard time picking a favorite.  I loved them all.  I think that Christmas and THE GIFT would have to be it.  I have really enjoyed reading this story.  You've given them so much more pleasure and happiness than the original.  (Though, with the original they should have a happy ever after.)  This, "The List", was much more heartwarming to read.  I am very happy that there are plans to be "Edward's List", I'll be watching for this.  I am glad that you are writing to get published.  I think that you are a very talented writer and thankyou from the bottom of my heart for this story.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

WOw! Just fucking wow! I have nothing to complain about and this such an achievement for itself, you can't imagine!!

Honestly, in one word this whole fic as perfect. Such a breath of fresh air! OK, perhaps this is not the best analogy since most of the time you were breathless by the end of each chapter but it is just brought us so much pleasure.

The List was the first intense smut like fic I read and I remember my shock and suprise. YOU got me hooked, now I am a complete perv, and proud of it, thank you very much.

I can't wait for the sequel and to get to know all that is inside that perfect perv mind of Edward (I mean, your perv mind in fact - still good!).

See you soon and thanks! You are incredible!






Reviewer: journey311 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

OMFG...What a ride.  I think from now on when I re-read the Twilight series, I'll just come read The List instead of Breaking Dawn. :) 

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Bravo. Wonderful story.

Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

wow just wow that was fabulous!! I just, i'm just gonna read that again! Great great! Idont know how to explain how much I love this story. It's just I'm gonna stop right here and reread this story, again, and again.

Reviewer: Knarra (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Wow.  This was one of the best stories I've read so far, and I've read A LOT!  I love your take on the characters and I am especially grateful for your story having both Bella and Edward's point of views.  The way you wrote Edward was spot on!  Please keep writing, and I'll be on the look out for Edward's List.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Katie (mnkymomma on the forums)

Reviewer: GinaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Best Story Ever! One i will read over and over again! :)

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Perfect!  I'm not sure I could pic a favortie, I'd been looking forward to these types of scenes.  But the month gifts and the storm were really perfect blend of giggles, ghnnnn's and drool crazed reading.  :D

Demolishing the cabin kinda made me wish my hubby and I were up for trying our best to replicate the scene (lol).

I have been imagining 'The Gift' since you initiated the prep for it.  Her waiting for him nude on the mountian couldn't have been more perfect.  His reaction was divine and all the thought put into making it happen just completed the realism for me.

Eminiently satisfying on so many levels!!!

Gonna miss this fic, but so glad I found this fic and took this journey you so generously shared with us!!!  Thanks for writing!!!

Reviewer: never fading scars (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

i liked it all i cant choose please dont make me :) :)  :) :P 

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

well what can i say, except i loved this story, and the whole thing was friggin awesome, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Loved the ending! It was very sweet and happy...yet, I am very sad to see it end :( I love this story so much, and you did a fantastic job with it!

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