Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
An absolutely perfect ending to a wonderful story! Amazing!!
I hope the sequel happens! :)
Thankyou so much for writing this, it has truly been a pleasure to read!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
ok, one more time you made me cry... happy tears..
thank you so much for the best story in the world!
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I'm so impressed by the quality and depth of your writing it is inspiring!
I loved how you broke this down into some sections. Bella's develoopment and finding herself after her tramsformation are always intriguing to read. Your version defintely brings back the "Newborn" craziness and just how bad the bloodlust really is for her. Three weeks definitely saw a huge improvement in her growing into her new self and truly finding her control more in check so she can more easily interact with other vampires and very soon even Charlie and Jacob. Her Christmas idea was simply amazing and thoughtful of her. I loved how you wrote about Edwards wanting to prolong his enjoyment of tasting Bella's blood and how it affected him simply through the gesture implied by her giving it to him. Very well thought through and written. Your abilities and writing skills are natural in nature and so detailed. I envy your skills and can only hope mine once they come to life have some feeling and thought to them.
I have two ideas in the works, one is more likely then the other. One is seeming to far fetched for bring it writng so it sits in my head. The other I have seen variations on, but nothing quite as I'm seeing it develop.
I have you favorited so I will be looking forward to the next story very intently. Until then congrats on your novel to be forthcoming. I will definitely be among your new fanbase.
Should you wish to keep in touch through Twilighted I would glady keep in touch and be a supporter to you.
Thanks again from another grateful fan!
~Sara
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
One Week: holy frickin' crow! And Rosalie saying that the wolf blood tasted as good as it smelled!
Three Weeks: Alice & Jasper's gift.
C Night: Bella's gift..I completely forgot about her donated blood! When she mentioned The. Gift. I was a big confused until she mentioned it. Nice touch for the ending.
Wonderful story! I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more (even if it is in the future).
Reviewer: Isabel16 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
OMG, this story always makes me cry. You are an amazing writer. GREAT JOB!!!
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Man oh man. That was soo intense! I think that has just become my new favorite chapter. How could either of them stop themselves from penatration when they were both naked and he was so close to her center? All he had left to do was position himself a little lower and BAM! I think that would have been great if they would have just caved and give in and did it. But alas, Bella is right and Edward would have regretted it and ruined the magic of the moment afterwards. But OMG! I was holding my breath and hoping. On to the next chapter...
Reviewer: minutewithoutyou (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
WOW I waited quiet sometime to be able to finish the final product. Got to chapter 23 and now that it's finished was able to read it to the end. ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT! Sooo looking forward to a sequel for Edward's list!! That sounds like it's going to be soo hot! keep up the amazing wrting!
Reviewer: hookedontwi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I"ve been reading this off and on all day but I've been remiss in reviewing sometimes, because I'm just too damn eager to move on! This chapter was no exception I LOVED Emmett's text. I love Emmett.
The phone sex was hawt. Srsly.
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Your story was one of the first excellent fics I read at this site. It will always have a very special place in my heart since I discovered it early on in my obsession with twilight fanfiction. It was the perfect balance between romance, humor, and of course the all important smut. You should be very proud of your accomplishment. I hope it gets done in iFic soon so I can listen over and over during my long drives to and from work every day! I will miss looking forward to your updates. *wipes tear*. Definitely planning on printing it out for safe keeping. Ending it with the blood gift was absolutely perfect by the way.
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
One of my favorite stories. Thank you!
Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
loved every moment of it
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Wow! I just wanted to say I felt the story ended where it should have. You did a great job of keeping Edward and Bella just that, Edward and Bella. Can't wait for for new stories/updates from you!
Reviewer: TLCullen132 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
way to go bella!!! cant wait to see what edward comes up with for payback...
Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I am so sad it's over...but how it ended was perfect! :)
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
wow I cant believe its done I loved it sooo much thanks soo much. I liked emmetts little freak out about the tattoo I know it wasnt in this chapter but im not sure I reviewed that chapter. I loved how carlisle and esme gave her the cullen crest. And demolishing a house was great they dont seem as wild as em and rose but im sure they could be and you wrote all the characters so well.I cant wait for your book to come out. Thanks again for sharing your story
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Fantastical chapter ... great ending although I'm sad that it is the end. You must do a sequel.
Loved Loved Loved the Christmas treasure hunt. What a present to give to Edward. I liked the reasoning behind who could participate in the giving and why Bella couldn't do it herself. Great job!
Reviewer: twilighter_87 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
A good chapter to end the story with...And Bella, giving the gift, was my favourite part I think. Although the other parts were equally thrilling to read.
It's sad to see the end of the story, but I'm glad I stumbled across it :) This is one of the first stories I started to read here at twilighted, and I jut got addicted (both to ff and the list) So thx for a wonderful story...
And I would love too see a story with Edwards list ;)
Reviewer: Canet (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
ahhh you gotta love the physic that is alice!!! i likie so far!
Reviewer: CaliMum (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I am sorry to see this end. It was such an amazing journey to take along with these two. This final chapter in particular had a lovely balance of emotions. I really enjoyed it all, it would be hard to pick any one thing in particular from the 3 sections to point out.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It's a beautiful story!
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
That chapter was da bomb! I was wrong about where the tatoo was. I like where it is though. Boy, that list is really starting to dwindle down. NEXT!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
*squee* Wonderful! Absolutly wonderful! Couldn't have hoped for a better and more appropriate epilogue! I especially loved the last line. Sometimes it's so hard not to make an epilogue cheasy, but that was just perfect! Loved it! Thanks for writing such a brilliant story! I enjoyed every chapter of it! >.<
Reviewer: Lily Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Fuck. Yes.
That is all I have to say.
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Ah ha! Thank you for pointing out how Jasper's gift would recognize Bella's suffering despite the morphine. That bit always irked me in BD. :D
Reviewer: rosmarinastar (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gah, my heart goes out to Edward when he thinks Not yet! but says yes to Bella. Oh the angst! I'm hoping hoping his sweet relief will be just as simply and poignantly wrought. On to read more and find out!
Reviewer: misscullen112108 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
in so sad to see the story come to an end but at the same time im happy. (if that makes sence)
i want another story plz!!!!! im so happy to have found someone who understands how to detial such amazing sences!!!!!! i absolutly love it n i could never get enough.
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!! actually great doesn't even come close to how i really feel.
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