you little bitch!! (not really) i CRIED!!! actually CRIED!!! at Charlie's speach, it was beautiful but really simple loved it, this chapter was beautiful xxx

I read the warning about blood (blood doesn't bother me - if it's coming from an artery or vein!) and then went and got some dinner.

Returning to read, with dinner in hand, I completely forgot about the warning and found myself lost in the middle of a section about Bella's period with a big bite of taco in my mouth.

Needless to say, I had to find something else to read during the rest of dinner.  I returned after I had finished the tacos and was drinking beer instead.  ;)

Aside from the "Ew, gross!" it was a very clever chapter.  Good job!

I was immediately captured by your title and the images you chose. I was intrigued to read this one before I even read the caption, and then after that I knew I wanted to read the whole thing. So now I have started and I am just as enraptured as I thought I would be. The perfect balance between the innocent Bella we know and the saucy things we all like to think.  I can't wait to read more. One thing I didn't like, and it might just be the format of the website, is all the spacing. It's like read a line, go down a line, etc. Anyways, I hope this helped.

You are too imaginative!!

It occurred to me while reading this chapter that, while you definitely play with a little OOC-ness, the general concept is pretty true to character.  Bella and Edward are checking things off the list without (so far) having sex before marriage (as Edward has insisted).  

In fact, you make foreplay sound better than sex!

I also appreciate how Bella ultimately has the power in this story.  If she wants something, she just has to figure out how to get Edward to give it to her.  She isn't afraid to conquer small battles to enable herself to that end (e.g., talk to Carlisle, discuss the list with Alice), and that is a pretty strong message.

Finished story over a couple of days and I must say, it was absolutly fantastic. One of the best Edward, Bella stories I have read. You are a very skilled writter and put a lot of feelings and emotions into the story, which at times put me to tears. The essence of the story shone through throughout, and really captured the moments. The inimate parts were inspiring but my favourite parts were when it was just Edward and Bella talking. I enjoyed these parts because it put innonce into the story and through these bits it showed the love that they share for eachother.

I am happy that you are the only author to have put Jacob as the good guy in my head, for he is my least favourite character in the books. It showed the care and friendship he has for Bella, and his ability to accept her relationship with Edward.

Thank you for this incredible story and I hope you go far. You are very talented and deserve the best.

Good luck on the future! 

haha well if it's any form of a compliment I'm wide awake and reading your adorable story at 3:20 in the mornnnin'... Alice is utterly fantastic ;)

Hi Laura, I know it´s been a while since you´d wrote the last chapter of "The List" but I just wanted you to know that I LOVED it! I wanted you to know that I´d cried whipping tears reading every word, feeling what Edward would´ve felt seeing his old house for the first time after so many years. I´ve always thought about Edward´s life before he´s changed. I´ve always wandered how´d his old house looked like and you´ve just... showed it to us! THANK YOU! And I´m looking forward to reading the "Edward´s List fic".  Ana Cecilia

I couldn't stop crying all this chapter... oh god you made my real edward come alive in so many different ways... and i say my real edward because i never liked rob to play my most beloved character, he wasn't at all at my edward, the one i imagined... oh god you are so wonderful... thanks for this four days i pent reading this...hope you have a great life... thank you again. greetings from mexico..

mr.cullen has a panty fetish..lo/e it !!

fully loved it!!! Good luck on your book can't wait to see it out!

I just want to say that my friend suggested this story to me and the moment I started to read it I couldn't put it down. It was an amazingly good twist on the actual story Stephenie Meyer wrote and I am happy I read it. I think what I loved most about the entire story though was the spot-on description of Edward and Bella's love. I always pictured their type of love to be truly indescribeable by words and you happened to pretty much describe it perfectly. At times, I could almost feel their love as if it were my own. This was an amazing story and you are without doubt an amazing author.

hey....i am new to this site and this is the first book i am reading....the concept is intriguing and this chapter was pretty good as well...:)