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Reviewer: jaaykayy (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

god that was glorious !!!


i hope to see #s 45 and 46 make an appearance in Edwards List.. ;)

you deserve every last review, story hit, and recognition for this masterpiece.

congratulations. :)

ps- i loved the entire thing, i cant pinpoint what i did/didnt like. it was entirely amazing. it was truly the perfect ending. ::sighs satisfiedly::

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Such an enjoyable story

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I'm glad she wasn't a typical newborn, and remembered Edward quickly.

Reviewer: juliette729 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Awesome story! i've been following it for a while and greatly enjoyed it. i went back a week or two ago and started re-reading from the beginning and your writing and the story definately evolved and grew as the story went along. Thanks for sharing this with us.

You do know you now need to write a story based on Edward's list, right? Pretty please!!

Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change


You have a beauitful and lustful mind :)

The list needs an number 50 -They are in AK (Lived there for four year) what about in the snow - thinking ice castle (dreams of a young girl living in below zero environment)

 I believe that I've lost it when the idea of Edward licking blood off of someone (purposely left vague.  Fill in the name as to your preference :) is completely HOT! And this chapter left me with the question is there ice cream in the freezer?

Reviewer: inlovewithtwilight (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

great story!!!!!!You did an amazing job!!

I loved the end!

Reviewer: elephantshoes47 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

That was a PERFECT ending!! Actually more than perfect. I love the intensity of the cabin wrecking and the sweetness of her one month birthday and the treasure hunt. Gah, I'm speechless.... Thank you so much again for writing this! Good luck with your novel, and I hope the sequel (should you choose to write it, which I hope you do!) is just as amazing!!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I was sad coming to the end. I found the twilight world during the saddest time of my life. During the time I lost both of my parents,within months of each other. twilight was the last story i got to read to her. She loved it,after that I became unable to process or feel for a long time I  listened to the 4 books on tape over and over unable to bring my self back to life. My theology class was discussing twlight and some one told me about fan fiction and gave me this site,I enjoyed it but it want until I came acrossed this story that being able to feel alive again was possible, i found joy passion laughter and peace here in your words,i printed this out and read to some of my classmates all of us huge fans of sm world  I followed you chapter by chapter as you unfoled this tale,smut and all loving every word and thought.make me want to get back to my life as before,we all feel your talent as a story teller has surpased any thing eles we have read and we will remain here waitng if you ever decide to write edwards list   my very own edwards has been here for  this dark journey with me and has benifited much from your ability to put passion to the page  thank you I WAIT WITH MUCH  HOPE WE CAN TAKE ANOTHER JOURNEY TOGETHER YOUR BIGGEST FAN   CRIS

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Wow. I loved the mushy part that she wrote down. I was gonna say he should have said I love you more, but he was only there for 18 days, so wow. AWW!!! And I loved the pictures of the suite. so cute.

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

Just time for a quick review before I HAVE to go to bed and ... well, think about THAT!!!!!  I don't know about Edward, but I'm feeling pretty undone myself right now.  Bloody hell, but that was ... unbelievably gooooood.  Keep this up and I may never recover!

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows



Great great chapter...

Great great story...


I can't believe its done... :( But done so well.


I think your bella post transformation was beautifully done..


LOVE the blood scene... very erotic..  Loved EPOV of it.. how her scent confused him initially and how it gave him a myriad of sensory, physiological and psychological responses...


Thanks so much for this story.

LOVED It all!

Lotsa love.

Reviewer: cozyegg (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

The Epiclogue was fabulous.  I really enjoyed this story so much, and I think once she was changed you really captured how they were now "equals".  The Christmas gift was the best, I'd wondered how that was going to play out.  Excellent - I really enjoyed this story!

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Gah. I. Loved. This. Story. It was awesome and amazing and a bunch of other words that mean the same thing that I can't think of right now because I am so in awe of you and this story. Thank you for writing this! It was...ohmy I can't even form a coherent sentence at the moment. Perfect mix of smut and sweet! I can't wait for the sequel! Great job!

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding


Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Mmm. Yummy. How did I miss all these updates???

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Blood talk? No problem - this is vampires we're talking about and, as Rose so succinctly put it, blood and sex kinda go together.  As for the end - wow, that was so sexy, I'm panting here just thinking about it.  Hmm, I wonder what Edward's got in store for Bella next (Jeez, I can't wait for the wedding night - no fade to black in this story, hehe!)

Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

It is so bittersweet to see this story end since this was actually the very first fanfic i have read ever!!!! So for that reason has a very special place in my heart.

My fav part of this chapter is the gift,it is so beautifulyl written and just perfect the way she actually finally gave him her blood.

Good luck with your stories hope you get published soon,u can be sure i will be on the lookout for oyur work.

Looking foward for the sequel very much!!!! but take oyur time u know we will be patiently waiting.

Looking foward to keep reading WYWG.


Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Well, CRAP! The List is done?! That's just depressing! Yes, Edward's List will be fun, but I quite rather enjoyed Bella's...story. I agree with you that it's a coming of age story, so Bella's coming of age story. It just's almost like a personal thing now, like it's a part of me. I've thought about it at inappropriate times, waited with bated breath for an update, laughed with it, cried with it, gone "awww!" with it, you've made this so personal it's scary, but I love it! Most authors can't do that, but I'm glad you could. Or maybe it's just me, I could be crazy, it's been known to happen before. =) This is definetly my favorite story. As sad as I am that this is over, I'm glad they got the ending they deserved. My favorite parts? There's too many! Definetly wrecking the house, and him drinking her blood. I completely love this story, and I love you for giving us this masterpeice!

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Laura, first of all congratulations!!! This story was amazing, I’m really glad I was able to share this journey with you. Each of the chapters were really important to me (although I’m not sure I was able to review as much as I would have liked). Been able to have this different version of their coming of age (as you put it) was an incredible alternative. I’ve to say that this last chapter is one of my favorites along with the weekend I.II.III. I have to admit that since Bella donated her blood I was really intrigued by how that point in The List was going to be accomplished, and I truly was pleased by the way it went (I enjoyed every second of it).

I really hope you write the sequel sooner rather than latter, but if Edward's List is in your projects I’m just going to wait until you start posting it; I’m sure it’s going to be worth the wait.


And just as how you said “from one Lister to another, good-bye and good night, til we meet again”.


Kisses. R.


P.S: Good luck with your novel!!!  

Reviewer: lorilynn74 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Oh.My.God. 'Nuff said!!!

Reviewer: KayRad816 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I have to say, I'm kinda sad that it's over. I'm glad that Edward's List is in development though, I know it'll be great. =]

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

awesome ending, i loved this story!!!

Reviewer: Coolltw (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Just got done reading the entire story and I LOVED IT!! It was so good. Just the right amount of lemony goodness without being too nasty. And you did great justice to SM by keeping all of her characters true to themselves. I can't wait for Edward's List!!

Reviewer: ellla (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

:) this was very good! bella is very bella. I can't wait the next chapter...

Reviewer: jacoblover98 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

wow i love it

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