Mmmm, Typing with very shaky hands here.....  I haven't left a review yet, because against my better judgement, I started reading this at work today.  It took all I had just to read without my face or my breathing giving away what I was reading.   I figured I would just leave one this evening.  I continued reading on my phone as I made dinner, and when I finished eating I was well into this chapter.  Obviously there were unresolved emotions from the previous chapters, but when I got to the piano I totally came undone.  That scene was romantic eroticism at it's finest.  By the time I finished this chapter, I believe I was a spent as they were.  Excellent work Laura, I can't wait to continue.

Thanks, I really needed that! LOL

 

I loved the whole thing.  It was everything that I would want in my vampire man....if I had one.  It was so erotic that I couldn't put it down until I finished the whole story.  I am not sure how you could top this but I will be looking for more to come.

again cried the whole time... happy tears then sad... i could really feel what Edward was feeling.... 

i cried but i loved it!!! u have become my fav FF author!!!!!!

AMAZING!!!

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!! whats going to happen next omg i cnt waiit 

This chapter was far better than anything I could have hoped for! AWESOME!!!

hot....enough said

I'm not sure how you explain Jacob imprinting in your version, but since (I'm presuming) there will be no Renesmee, it does make everything much nicer!  (Thinking: maybe it's fate?  The day Edward decided to use a condom was the day the universe found Jake an imprint?  But at least it took the drama out of Jake's attending the wedding.)

I loved your description of the wedding.  When I read Breaking Dawn, I was pleasantly surprised to find that Bella & Edward's wedding was very similar to my own, and every time I read a re-telling of their wedding, I have a renewed appreciation for the day I made my husband "Mine!  MINE.  MINE!"

A wonderful story!  I had so much fun procrastinating while reading it (but I eventually got my work done, promise!)  The ending was my absolute favorite.  So adorable and sweet.

This was the first fanfic I ever read, and I don't think I reviewed anything in the beginning cos I was obsessing going through probably twenty fics at a time. I was completely obsessed reading/checking everything ExB, well still am but to a controllable degree. I don't know how I became so OCD about fics, it has to be some kind of fear of missing out on something or just plain greediness. I'm rambling about this because I don't understand how everyone else isn't like that (I think), and how they can actually concentrate on a few stories and not check out _every_ damn story there is.

I wasn't supposed to write all that, but re-reading this just had me think of when I first discovered this site. I'll always remember this chapter because E says 'fuck'. It's so out of character on the surface, but still in character. Just a less controlled side of Edward that SM never showed. God forbid if he cussed! Though I think in Twilight he did once 'curse under his breath' or something in the car when they were trying to get away from James, but I always imagined it was something like 'goodness gracious' or something equally lame. Reading him say 'fuck' had me laughing for at least half an hour, I was just so happy (which is kinda weird, but then again Bella liked it too). Strange what that word can do lol.

I just thought I'd say something, this story was my first (haha) and I'm really enjoying going back to that when I first started reading fanfic. I didn't even know that you could write smut (not that I knew that word then) let alone read. It was quite a shock. From mormony Twilight to this. I definitely prefer fanfic to the books, not just for the smut. Smut is a nice bonus and adult people do adult things. You just feel so cheated after those fade to black scenes in BD o_O Realistically you knew SM wasn't going to write any porn, lol, but still you get all 'yay a naked Edward' and stuff and then boom, Bella just wakes up the next morning. A good story doesn't have to have graphic sex in it, but with Twilight, there was this huge sexual tension and build of for three books and what do we get? NOTHING.

I've never written this much in review, the sentimental value The List has for me is just so great I got inspired. So yeah, I love this story. I'll continue reading now. 

I kind of laughed at her reaction to the water turning cold. And also to the frenching.

Holy Shit