Thank God for Alice and her passion for shopping because with the number of knickers that Edwards stealing, Bella would be going commando permanently. Panty thief extraordinaire!

And please don't let Emmett tone down his inner twelve year old. We love it!

Definitely feeling the tension building up for the weekend. What is Edward going to come up with? Just how bad can the boy get? Oh, I hope it's real bad!

 

This chapter covered the whole range of emotions. Laughed loads at the whole Emmett situation. You can just imagine his glee at finding those signs.

Then the cute and romantic letter writing. Lets face it, it was the whole heart wrenching romance that made us fall in love with B & E in the first place so it's great to see that it still has a place in your story. Good choice of poem. So Edward.

And then the steamy phone sex. I feel I desperately need to come up with some more hyperboles to describe your story. There's only so many times I can use the word 'hot' but it just seems to sum it up so well!!!

FAVE PHRASE: "Okay, lets not think about number thirty-one right now [bookstore] because the possibilities [airplane] are just too [nightclub] freakin' [elevator] limitless [movie theater]." LOL - so many possibilities. Good job they'll have the time!!!!

Bad Ass Bella, loving your work.....lov-ing your work!!!! What more can I say???

Love, love, love this chapter. Was totally cracking up over the whole (non) conversation with Carlisle. Laughed so much - total genius.

And then theres the club....and the Aston action. If you've got to do it (and boy, do they have to) in a car, go classy. Bella sums it up perfectly "“Oh my fucking God that was hot.”

FAVE THOUGHT: Edward growling - OMG!

 Oh bless Edward and his sweet little old fashioned ways. Really liked this chapter. I just wanted to give him a hug. You can so see how this is what Edward would have felt. He's from a different time and I liked the fact that this wasn't overlooked. Great characterisation. I didn't mind that nothing got crossed off the list at all.

Saying that, looking forward to Bella getting number 18 off her list. Dominating an all powerful vampire?...nice! 

FAVE PHRASE: "Naked.  In my shower.  The one with the showerhead." - Love the nod to Bellas previous escapades.

What can i say? Apart from,excellent as always,and i hope to hell my mother doesnt find out ive been reading this.

Thus far, this is the best citrus filled fanfic I have ever read. Your writing is wonderful, the pacing is good, and you're funny too. Nice work.

Ha, ha, ha. Go Jasper! LOVE IT!

Mmm, Edward in the shower. Had to take a moment (or two) there to think that one through. And then what he was doing in the shower. PHEW! Did someone turn the heating up here???

FAVE PHRASE: "What the fuck?"   Chuckle....

Good girl Bella! Really liking where the story is going. Totally love Alice's involvement. You can so see her actually doing this and how fab would it have been if we'd had this help when we were starting out with our first boyfriends! Good choice of the leather couch too. Liking her style ;-)

FAVE PHRASE: "La, la, la.  Conversation not happening.  La, la, la." Made me giggle.

FAVE PICTURE IN MY HEAD: Edwards black eyes. How hot would that look???

Firstly I have to say - Laura, you are freakin' A-MAZ-ING!!! I have spent the last two days beyond hot and bothered since discovering this story on Friday evening when I stayed up till two in the morning reading it, bacause I couldn't take my eyes off it. It's now Sunday and I have made it up to Chapter 17. But with more will power than Edward and Bella put together, I have stopped reading to go back to the very beginning so I can review each chapter in turn. Okay, no great hardship having to read all these chapters again (a total pleasure, in more ways than one!) but it struck me that if you had taken the time to write such an awesome story for my entertainment, the least I could do was give something back to you by reviewing each chapter, like you asked all us readers to do. So I'll try and remember my thoughts and feelings for each chapter (the word HOT just doesn't seem to sum it up sufficiently) and let you know what my favourite themes and phrases were. It may take me a few days but it's the least I can do considering how fun your story has made both my and my boyfriends weekend. He finally has seen a plus side to my Twilight obsession!

And so Chapter 1 - Bella finally gets with the program and begins to consider all the things we girls in Team Edward has been thinking about for ages. THANK GOD! Love Stephanie Meyer, love the romance but come on, this man is hot personified. Time to turn the temperature up. How hot is it gunna get? And will her ideas match mine? Can't wait to find out......I'm already with her on the shower and the meadow though 

FAVE PHRASE: "Gotta love those removable showerheads"........ Yes Bella, you do. They've become the best friend to many a female in times of need!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the multiple reviews--I love seeing which lines you list as your favorites.  So glad you're enjoying!  Can't wait to see what you think of the ending chapters!  Laura

Ok had to scroll down to talk about Emmett again. You have him down perfect. The texting is awesome. I'm rolling. *Ok back up to finish the chapter*

Ok so the blood thing did kinda make me a little...squirmy, but it did make me look forward to were your going with this.

AWWW he said Bella Cullen. Ok rushing to catch up still. BUT I LOOOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!

this story is great, but i have a question:  whatever happened to the blood that carlisle drew from bella as a present from her to edward?  seems to me something needs to be said bout that

Author's Response:

Keep reading!