I cried, I actually cried at this chapter. With Alices thoughts as she left the food outside the bedroom, I was off and kept going all the way until the end. I think because I came to this story when it was completed, I have the advantage of being able to read the chapters straight through one after the other and the emotion that has been building through the last few chapters all culminated here. I've not read anything so full of emotion in a long while. It was just so beautiful. You have an amazing talent, Laura.

This chapter, there isn't a fave phrase, it's a paragraph "I worshipped Bella as much as she could handle on Thursday.  Not just with my body, but with my words.  I read poetry to her.  I sung to her.  I told her stories of my favorite moments together with her.  I repeated my wedding vows to her.  And, when we just needed to be quiet and still, I held her, saying with my strong arms and smooth hands all that needed to be said." ....Simply breathtaking....

Oh the lemons, the lemons, the lemons. So many amazing lemons. And the railings make a re-entry (pardon the phrase!). Hmm, boyfriend not here - need batteries!

Aargh - too many favourite phrases:

1. "He really didn't say he wanted me dressed as a cowgirl, Alice, just to ride him like one!" Ha, ha, ha!!

2. "Edward hissed and then whipped his face down into it and roared like I had never heard before".....mmmm...what an image.....

3. "Stripping and riding now.  Talking later." Authoritative.... I like it.

Best erotic Twilight fic I've read, and I've read alot. 

I just finished reading Eclipse, and Breaking Dawn is still priced at a pretty penny in hard cover... but I found your story.

Honestly, afer reading this, I wouldn't mind skipping the fourth book.

*tips hat*

That was erotic and very tender. I don't know about the continuous use of the "F" word. I just can't see it with them. Not all the time. But that's just me. Love it to death!!

OK I think I'm going to be saying WOW through out this whole story! That was hot by the way!

Wow! 

I really didn't have any idea what they had planned for Emmett, it was perfect! You had me laughing out loud again.

Yay! Edward found the list. And the cheeky so and so added another one. Good shout.

Loved Emmetts thoughts and how Edward found it hot. Can't beat a good bit of possessiveness.

aargh - can't wait until the lab table appears in the next chapter. Had my eye on that one for a while now. Having a hard time forcing myself to write this review knowing what's coming up.

FAVE PHRASE: Bow chicka mow wow. So Emmett. So funny. Tee hee.

 

 

 

 

Ooh, good chapter! Went from hot to romantic and back to hot. Liked Edward finally getting with the program and doing what we've all been crying out for him to do the past few chapters. And then I LOVED the railings scene - very sexy.

Edwards internal battle at the beginning was genius. Yes, no, yes, no. Really amusing. You manage to sum up thought processes so well, very clever. 

I loved the way you wrote Jacob in.  That is the way it should have been in the book!

Fantastic chapter, had me laughing out loud as well as enjoying the lovely lemony goodness.

I thought this story was so amazingly good! You had me laughing so many times with Emmet and his dirty humor ;D I live for that kinda stuff. And I loved all of the cute/romantic/lovey-dovey parts with Edward and Bella. Oh! And I thouroughly enjoyed what you did with the Jake situation. I'm so glad he imprinted on someone else. Overall I loved it! Ooh one last thing, I'm really glad you amde Charlie and Sue have a "thing" after Bella left. Not only are they both no longer alone, but I wanted them to be together anyway :] so great job

Thank God for Alice and her passion for shopping because with the number of knickers that Edwards stealing, Bella would be going commando permanently. Panty thief extraordinaire!

And please don't let Emmett tone down his inner twelve year old. We love it!

Definitely feeling the tension building up for the weekend. What is Edward going to come up with? Just how bad can the boy get? Oh, I hope it's real bad!