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Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I'm not going to comment. Going RIGHT to the WEDDING!
Reviewer: gojeannie (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Love your Alice! My favorite line: She smiled. “Yep.” She popped the ‘p’. I giggled like a 12 year old at that.
Reviewer: gojeannie (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I'm grinning like a fool, your Edward is SO charming and yummy! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: gojeannie (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I have heard so much about your fic for such a long time now that I am finally checking it out (I feel like I'm about 2 hours late to the party, but I know that I'll still have a great time). A promising start indeed!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
very cute ending :)
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I was wondering when he would discover the list! I'm so glad he did. I felt the change instantly! AWESOME!
Reviewer: totsandfries (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
so i just started reading this story and holy f-ing s---
it is the best story i have ever read
Reviewer: Miria (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
this is one of the best things ive read in ages. thank you for making my week so much better.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I think I am going to have this dialogue in my head for special occasions for a long time....
“I will, Bella. But right now I want you to come. I want you to come all over me.”
“Yes.”
“Do it, Bella. I want it.”
“Yes. Oh God. Oh, Edward.”
Oh God. Oh, Edward...indeed.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
How can we hate you, when there is such promise around the corner! That naughty panty thief! By the way, as a huge Alice fan, can I just say I love her influence in this story.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Sitting very uncomfortably in my chair right now, legs are a little too close together....
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Jasper......Jasper with Bella's panties...Jasper with Alice....still savouring every last detai.
And Edward, dear god woman! What makes this so incredibly burning hot is how well you describe their physical actions and emotions.
I knew this story was great, but I think I must have forgotten how much so. Totally blown away.
Reviewer: Treadora (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This is a great story. Filled with steamy goodness I cannot find one thing to complain about, not one! My favorite Edward yet!! I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Keep up the great work!!! Please!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I forgot about Edward's POV! What a treat! I do however remember the blood, and find it one of the most compelling elements of this story. So happy right now reading.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
A Lesson in Release is one of my all time favourite stories, and after reading this I think must go an re-read it once more. Fantastic scene. You really capture the erotic tension so well, and your descriptions of Edward - oh my god, absolutely incredible.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I am loving this story all over again! Amazing. So perfect. So right. The characters, the descriptions, the dialogue, the moments of incredible hottness. An absolute delight. I always get so restless after I finish a book or a story, I finally found a new place in imagination to find comfort in. Thanks.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I've kept this story for a special treat, it is almost too good...I started before and got up to Chapter 13, but wanted to save it and go back to it again in sequence to re-reading the originals. I've just finished Eclispe, and now extremely excited to continue this story from the beginning. I've recommended this story to countless of people, and my heart is racing to begin this story again for myself.
Reviewer: so ist das leben (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
just imagining that car got me excited about this chapter :P you've done it again laura cullen!
Reviewer: so ist das leben (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
oooooo hot hot hot hot hot :D
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I wish I had an Edward (sad sigh)
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I liked what you did with the cars. Bella would have accepted a new one much better in your version!
Reviewer: moaninmymouth (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
it's getting better... :D
Reviewer: moaninmymouth (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
so ok, since you really want me to review I will do it.
First impression: ok. Would have appreciated a little more detail. Just as I was getting used to an image (of the two of them in the meadow for instance) it was alredy gone. The shower episode has a lot of potential for detail too.
Let's see what's next :)
Reviewer: duckindistress (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I cried when Charlie and Bella were saying their goodbye.
When I first started reading your story, I thought it was just going to be a smut fest. Which I was loving by the way, but somewhere along the way, I realized you have absolutly captured the essence of the intesity of Edward and Bella's love. It is all consuming and powerful, everytime I read a chapter I want to go make love to my husband. You really have taken SM's story and interpreted the story line. I was never much of a fan of the whole pregnancy in Breaking Dawn. I think you have taken the story to it's more natural conclusion.
I'm sad now because I only have a couple of chapters left, I really don't want the story to end. SO i've been putting it off.
But I just wanted to praise you for the good job. You truly rock!
XX
Reviewer: miska de cat (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
lol
love alices comment at the end
yes, still reading it
couldn't resist
he he
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