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Reviewer: Black Eyes Blood Red Lips (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
i'm fucking in love with this story possibly more than i'm in love with edward.
just thought i should let you know how you have encaptured my heart and my inner dirty self;)
sigh, lucky bella. as ever
Reviewer: Black Eyes Blood Red Lips (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
i'm fucking in love with this story possibly more than i'm in love with edward.
just thought i should let you know how you have encaptured my heart and my inner dirty self;)
sigh, lucky bella. as ever
Reviewer: dhiatt (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
drooooooooll. Best chapter yet!
Reviewer: mskizzle (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
...I love Alice
Reviewer: dhiatt (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
holy hell...I need to invest in a dress like that lmao
Reviewer: dhiatt (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
more more MORE! lol another enticing chapter!
Reviewer: dhiatt (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
droooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllll
Reviewer: Mary Frances (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
That was 1400% better than the honeymoon in canon!
There was a really good balance of romance and sex in this chapter, especially for it being a honeymoon. I even liked the parts where you took personal liberties (like Edward saying, "You make my heart happy," which is unlike him, but so cute!).
Reviewer: truerosey (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Wow, HOT HOT HOT!!!! This fic is amazingly sexy and what makes it even better is how you stay true to the characters. Even with how tame Edward is in the books you just know that deep down he's as sensual and sexually domineering as you write him! And domineering Edward is PHENOMINAL! I've been looking for a 'true to character' yet insnely sexy fic for days and this is the only one that's had me enthralled and reading non stop. I litteraly got to this chapter after reading allll day and don't want to stop until i'm finished! Oh and the romantic and humorous aspects of your writing are also great and dead on! Good job!!!!!
Reviewer: zooey (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
wow!! i love #10!
Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I loved this story sooo much!! In fact I think I liked it more than the original SM version! It made me laugh and cry and of course blush. I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the future, even if I have to purchase it from Barnes and Noble! Thank you so much for posting this story on Twilight.net!!
Laura a.k.a Stella Sin
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I can't believe she was able to give his his house back, and help him to recover some of his human memories. That was absolutely beautiful Laura.
Congrats on selling your novel, I will keep my eyes open for it.
Thanks again for your story, I have thoroughly enjoyed every last word. I'm just sorry to see it end. It would make a fantastic movie, and it wouldn't leave us all frustated and angsty like the books have. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely love the Saga, but I find myself wanting to yell at them to just let go already, it's been long enough. Unfortunately when the series was targeted at teens, you can't really go there, but it does tend to leave us older fans, wringing our hands.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
And so it begins, endless love, joy, wonder and amazement. How I envy her.
Thanks Laura, this one story will definitely be read and reread many times.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Her love for him really knows no bounds, to be able to give him that wonderful gift to ease his strife during her change. Always thinking of him, and ways to make his like easier and more complete. The book was a wonderful idea Laura, so sensitive and caring, her way of being right there at his side through it all.
Thank you, and thank you for not succumbing to your temtation to let him kill her. I don't think my heart could have taken it.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Nooooo, how could you leave us hanging like this??? Fortunately, I only have to wait until I get a few minutes at work this morning to get into the next chapter.
I love the way you have the whole family trying to make her last days as a human as full and complete as possible. It is definitely a little bittersweet for E I'm sure, givng up the girl who saved him from an eternity of loneliness yet gaining the woman who will gladly be his forever.
Thank you Laura,
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Goodbyes are so hard, I swear, menopause combined with these stories and I should own the tissue company.
You are a truly talented lady Laura, thank you for sharing that.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Ok, now I've lost count of how many pairs of panties I've soaked. LOL I'm glad B is using a journal to keep her memories. I'm sure they will give her much pleasure to read back through them and reestablish the memories in her mind after the change.
Fabuloous honeymoon, Laura, thank you.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Sob, I always cry at weddings, but this one was especially tearful. So much heartache, so many trials and tribulations just trying to get there and for it all to fall into place so beautifully, it was just overwhelming. Just about the time I calmed down a little, Jake showed up and I lost is again( even knowing that it was coming). I do have to say that Sam kind of threw me a little. I totally wasn't expecting that, but maybe they will still be able to be friends and not lose each other completely.
I love Jake's "gift" to them.
Thank you Laure, this was simply beautiful.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
So many emotions from this one, I feel like Jasper. Such love when she was relaying her thoughts and feeling to each of them, I was crying, it was so beautiful. Such lust and excitement when E found the list and then started planning how to give B her fantasies. Surprise at Rose's seemingly genuine delight as being invited to shopping. I wonder what B got him for a wedding present???
Siggghhhh, thank you so much Laura, for allowing us to feel this wonderful story.
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Love, love, love the way they got Em back, but he's right, vampires have long memories and I'm sure there will one day be major payback.
Every time I think E can't be anymore perfect, he does something else to just make me shake my head. God, if only he could be for real.
Thanks Laura,
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Can't type, trembling too much.
Thank you Laura,
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Awww, Iwant my very own Edward. So loving, so tender , so everything....
In keeping with the theme of the weekend, and since after all, you are in control.
Thank you Laura,
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter, sometimes it is good to find a story after it is already completed. :-)
Thanks Laura,
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I have to say I didn't find the blood discussions disgusting at all. Given the nature of the "beast", is simply seemed a natural part of the conversation. And I gotta admit, period sex is a great cramp reliever!
Oooo, I'm so excited to see what the girls have up their sleeve for Em, and I love seeing Rose and Bella bond more.
Thanks Laura, now on to the next chapter....
Deb
Reviewer: Perrylover (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OMG, the tattoo is a fabulous idea, I have 3 ideas where she put it. Over her heart, on her butt or below her bikini line, just above home sweet home. I think E would like it the best at option 3.
LOL, Em is so going to pay dearly when B completes the change, hehehe, I can't wait.
Thanks Laura!
Deb
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