Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Good God, its three in the morning, and I need to go to sleep. I dont want to go to sleep. I want to continue reading. But I need to go to sleep. Sheer wonder at your ability. I always feel awkward when I write intimate scenes, and I cant ever get them right. Kudos.
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
heyzeus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Oh Sweet Jesus...that was unbelievably hot...I hope that they really talk about their feelings though
Reviewer: swandive (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
the best story i have read on this website!
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Damn.
Reviewer: kimberlytwi (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I laughed. I cried. I couldn't stop reading this story.
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
good Lord amighty. thats all I have to say about that. I thought it was interesting that you let Edward curse... but still good. lol. Awesomeness.
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I literally laughed out loud like ten times in this chapter! Awesomeness..... sheer awesomeness.
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
oh god
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
ok. I really really like this story, and I have only read two chapters of it. I had always wondered what had happened between the end of Eclipse and the beginning of Breaking Dawn, because some of SM's word choices seemed like we had missed quite a bit... Pretty awesome story so far.
Reviewer: Rosy Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Beautiful chapter....i love it
Reviewer: Eaglerise (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Wow! This was wonderful. I cried throughout the entire book.
Reviewer: Rosy Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I just can say,i love so much the way you explain everything...i´m in love with your story..thanks so much
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Oh my goodness, i don't know where to begin. Your story was one of the very first stories i read as i'm only new to fanfic. I've enjoyed following your Edward and Bella so so very much that i'm really sad that it's now over. Thank you so very very much for putting all the time and effort into your incredible tale. I had saved the last few chapters up so that i could just read them all together because i knew i'd be sad about this ending, so i figured i go out on more than one chapter. It was so hard resisting your updates but i'm glad i waited and had four whole chapters to read.
Your change chapter was amazing. It was so well written and i loved how she discovered herself. Beautiful. And the gift. The whole time since she donated her blood i've been thinking about this. It was such a brilliant idea of yours for her to give him that. Such an amazing gift and the way you wrote it in the end was even better than i had imagined. It was perfect. I really loved that and it's definitely my favourite part. As always your lemons are so freaking zesty, it makes me insane. You are so good at writing those. You really need to let the fandom know when you get published because all your Twilighted fans will buy your paranormal romance for sure. I know i will.
So thank you again. This is one story i'll think about for a long time to come. It's one of the greats and i'm so happy for you breaking all those Twilighted records. Over a million reads is truely amazing. I can't even imagine how that must feel. Well done. You deserve it.
Author's Response: Thanks for this great review--I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: Linzza (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Amasing... Thank you SO much for your story!
I even cried a little when Bella was talking to her Dad. It was so... touching, you know.
And now I have to work... but I can't 'cause there are four more chapters! I can't just leave without reading them. It's really like a drug!))
Thanks!
Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You said it best: Sogoodsogoodsogood :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the multiple reviews!
Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Bella's getting brave... I <3 it!
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Edward marked her, WHOA!
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Alice to the rescue! :D
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Yeah, I REALLY like Edward using the word "fuck" :):):)
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I'm really liking Edward saying the word "fuck" out loud and in his thoughts :D
Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I'm loving the additions to the list!
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh my, Edward swore ;) Bella's breaking him down, lol.
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Horray! Edward lost control for once.
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Reviewer: mrstwister712 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Not sure if my first review went through so here was the jist:
Good on Bella for taking matters in her own hands :)
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