I loved it but you should write a follow up story about 39,40,45, and 46.

AWESOME BUT I THOUGHT IT WAS CUM NOT COME! RIGHT!?

This is the second time I'm reading this & have the same big-ass goofy grin on my face as the first time. Absolutely love this story! sigh  I wants me some Edward NOW!

Author's Response:

Read (and grin) away!

Please consider voting for my original novel, a paranormal novel with vampires!, for a possible publishing contract  http://textnovel.com/stories_list_detail.php?story_id=2092 -- you don't have to read...and it's free to sign up...(if you vote and fan I get 2 points...)

Thanks for reviewing!

hot would love to be in that shower!!

Fantastic!  I really enjoyed the story...boy was it steamy and funny and interesting!  Keep up the great work and I will be sure to look out for more of your stories.

 

 

This was amazing...I got so turned on...I laughed...I cried it was truly amazing

first of all i'd like to blame you for ruining my eye site and for my lack of sleep for the past 2nights! i've been hooked on your story since i started and couldn't stop hence the semi-blurred vision i have for staring at my laptop screen!

this is such a great story--my only complaint is that it's done! 

i decided to write a review when i finished as opposed per chapter coz i didn't have the patience to stop reading.

my favorite parts were--well aside from the obvious (~_^)

1) was when they were on their weekend away & the sun came out --it was so original! i so did not see that coming! as in wow!

2) blood donation--carlisle's remark when bella left his office was priceless

3) EMMETT--comic relief--THANK YOU!!! loved when he discovered the tattoo & the cards and loved it every time he made an appearance in the story! 

4) actually ALL the characters--you captured everyone's personality PERFECTLY!!! and "chill" edward is better than suffering edward!

5) structural damage--ENUFF SAID!

6) EVERY CHAPTER!!! 

i just couldn't remember all the details coz my brain's really fried with the overload of "favorites" in you story

i really enjoyed the good read!!!

...i just wished...well, we know bella's list...it would have been great to read edward's as well--don't even have to go into details, just an enumeration of what he wrote would have been great.

honestly--you rock! great writing skills--i'm completely floored!

thank you for taking the time and effort in creating this fantastic fanfic! now if you'll excuse me as i get some much needed sleep & prepare for a visit to my eye doctor after i wake up! LOL!!!

 

Author's Response:

XD--thanks for providing me with smiles first thing in the morning!  Great review!  Glad you enjoyed!

This is one of my favourite chapters. I read it and kept on hoping things would go this way, and it turned out better than I could have ever imagined. Fantastic.

I loved the breakdown of the last few minutes and the heartbeats in them. It made me as anxious as Edward :)

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Really awesome chapter...=)

Just wanted to tell you that this story is awsome! Definately the way I would have liked Braking Dawn to turn out. Actually, it is better. ;-)

I espacially like your Bella. In most of the story´s I´ve read, Edward is the one putting effort in the relationship, giving, and Bella is just taking and doing nothing for him on her own (for exmple, Edward is always the first one to say the three little words, to open up to her, things like that, just very egoistic). Your Bella is trying to do things for him, too. Like when she realises that he needs a little more time with her human-self, the blood-donating and so on. That was great!

Damn