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Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
That boy is pure evil..adding #36 to the list....but I love it! Only thing though, I thought she would eat the ice cream of of him!
Reviewer: Dalloway (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Ya know I frankly NEVER understood how she was able to wait until the wedding night anyway! I mean COME ON- he's frickin Edward for frick's sake! At least here she won't have to wait for everything--- ;)
Just started this one- but lookig forward to continuing!
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I loved your story and have registered, voted and subscibed to Forever Freed. Good luck with the contest. I loved the list and look forward to reading Forever Freed and anything else you have written.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
There is just so much going on in one chapter!So much to comment on -
I loved your line about marriage being - "... a soft, safe place to land. And being that for someone else. And making your way through the world with someone at your side." So true and it makes me feel really lucky to know it.
The dare, the sexy, playful banter, the licking, and that growl! Oh my god. Fanning self, soooo hot!!!
Emmett just desserts- in a word - Brilliant. I love Jasper's contribution to Bella's acting abilities. (I'm a Team Jasper on many occasions).
And being a Team Jacob at times as well, my heart aches for Bella's loss of her friend and all of what her truck represents.
There is so much more, I need time to fully take it all in before I move on. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, I love this story.
Reviewer: just a fleeting thought (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker."
That is too good!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I think your car choice was ok...but personally I would have gone with a Pontiac (sorry, my favorite make).
I always thought vamps could multi-task...but I guess driving sex doesn't count :)
And I liked what they did to Emmett for revenge.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I loved the fact that he endered a contest, just to get the sypmhony to play Bella's Lullaby...so sweet!!!
Reviewer: sben3208 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
...I love you so very much. This chapter...unf. enough said. I'm gonna go replace some batteries and have a smoke now. thanks. lol
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I can honestly say this one had some sweet, tender moments. Like Bella rescuing Edward from the sun and their conversation infront of the fire to his thoughts in bed while she slept.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I am not disapointed, I just want to know how I can get a weekend like that?
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
It was nice seeing the boys together, even though Emmett is a pain!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Since blood is a part of life, it doesn't bother me. I am starting to think, that distant lemons are just as good as up close and persoanl lemons!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Aw shoot! I forgot she wrote that to Carlisle on one of the posterboards that Emmett found. As for the tat, it would most likely be in a place that only Edward would see. Then again, it could make a good 'tramp stamp'. I guess I will have to keep reading in order to find out.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
8 out of 24 things on the list left to do. Dang that girl is good!!! And so are you at writing Laura Cullen!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
This onegot me so speachless.....can't breath....panting to much..... more, more, more...
Reviewer: sdavis2k (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wow I find myself liking this story line more so then the original one honestly. Given its a bit more smutastic, so the 14 year old girl market would be more closed off but I like it better. The plot and characters seem to have even more depth. Thank you for sharing this with everyone, I am sure a story of this magnitude was a challenge to plot and write.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
What a sex kitten!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Shoot!! I didn't know that the boy had it in him and at a rest stop to boot!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Still a great story.....lemme guess...Edward has the white bikini underwear along with the blue lace ones?!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Dang...now my eyeballs are sweating and it is hard to read!!! I think she is going to have that boy whipped by the time this story ends.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Bella did warn him...as th Klingons say "Revenge is a dish best served cold." What can I say, I am a Trekkie, too. This is just getting better and better!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
She is gonna give that poor boy a heartattack (if his heart was still beating)! A saucy little minx, she is. Still loving it!
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OOOOO...You go giril!! Another great one...and yes, I have read A Lesson in Release and its sequels.
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love it, I love it....saved by the Alice!!!! What would Bella do without that girl?
Reviewer: Cullen Cousin (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I like what I have readsofar...poor Bella, at least she found an outlet for her "fustrations".. :D
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