oh holy mother of god! a sequel!!!!!!!!!????? if i had any $ you bet your fanny i'd bid for that sneak peak! Unfortunately my well is rather dry, i will simply have to wait and pant like one of pavlov's dogs with the rest of the plebians for when the sequel comes out on its own time. Good luck though! Oh and just as an after note, this is my absolute favorite fan fic i've reread it at least four times lol.

I cant tell you how many nights you kept me up reading this! It was absolutely amazing! You portrayed every character perfectly in my opinion. I wanted to cry when I read the last word, and I can't wait for a sequel! Your such a great writer, Laura. I wish you the best of luck in your writing career. Thank you, again, for creating such a wonderful story. :D

Jasper and Alice!  Yay!  I swear, the most romantic moment in all four and a half books was "I'm sorry, ma'am."

(Gasp!) Alice had an ulterior motive!

You fool, Edward.  Don't you know that if they're trying to keep you from reading their thoughts, it might be because you don't want to know?

She popped the ‘p’.

It would be "She popped the 'p.' " In American English, periods and commas go inside.

It would be "He looked between Alice and me." It's a direct object.

Edward was "lying" next to her.

 

It's nice to see a character who actually has to tell her male partner what she wants rather than him magically/coincidentally/instinctively doing it without being told.

Heh heh heh!  It's Bella from canon, but only a bit more realisitic and funny/

Holy shit!!!!!!!!!!  That's all I can say!  Awesome!

unbelievably great!

Oh, Edward finding the notebook was priceless!

Okay, I went into this thinking that it would be good to do as you ask and write reviews for every chapter, but I have no earthly idea how to review the smut.  I couldn't let this chapter go, though, because I LOVE the way you let Edward taste her in this chapter. It's something I've been thinking about since I first read the first book.  I have to admit that I fear for Bella's teeth every time she goes down on him, but other than that, this story is spectacular and has kept me from getting anything done all weekend.

Very hot. Love this concept!

Loved it from start to finish - Bravo!!!! B xxx

WOW!!  Thank you for this wonderful read!

Laura Cullen, well done!

You really have adopted Meyers' style very well. Seamless. The characters are bang on. And I didn't feel creeped out by any thoughts that Alice was going to hit on Bella or the like. You retained that pure filial love thing. The story is really planing along, like a speedboat.

For some feedback on the previous chapter, I liked it too. My only thought on Chapter two, and I don't think this a criticism, but there's something about Edward always wanting to eat Bella, and mate with her...and eat her that is so very very hot. I loved that he was overcome by lust but I think the thirst has got to remain, as ever, a thirst for her blood, as this, alone, is probably the most erotic element in the books. Maybe it's just me. Do you think the blood thirst may be sort of like thirsting for someone's life force? Lusting after their very being?