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Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Not a problem...quite scientific...lots of fun!
Reviewer: Lindamaine (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
God, I love you. I haven't even read this chapter yet, but I just had to say that.
It's so nice to have people out there who UNDERSTAND!!!
Reviewer: meggypoo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
so hot!!!
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
O.M.G. So fucking hot, I can barely contain myself!
Reviewer: Stormsongwitch (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
The List. Chapter 20.
"...Jacob would see and I would mouth 'mine.' Fucker."
Holy hell. I don't know why, but there is something extraordinary about that idea.
It would be incredibly cruel to actually do to Jacob. But there is something about the raw honesty of sexual possessiveness there that is refreshing. Well done.
Reviewer: Janet (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
this is a fantastic story! i really love that bella gave edward her blood as a gift! that was awesome! thank you for writing this story, i thoroughly enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Vampessa (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Holy Hell!
Reviewer: Vampessa (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Whoa! Excellent! Creative use of the shower head!
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Holy Mother of God that was fucking incredible!!
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was one of the hottest exchanges I have ever read!!
Reviewer: Lindamaine (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
You should be making millions with this stuff. You're supernatural.
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
After reading JPOV - my husband needs to thank Bella too!!
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
FUCK!
Reviewer: Queen_apples (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Luv this story sooooooooooo much.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
This is quite a list,,,,,i wonder if stephanie meyer ever thought about the real bellas desires quite that way...good story
Reviewer: TeaWithLemon (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
In this chapter, I am liking the mix of lightheartedness with the determination of Bella's list. And I love the line about wishing the normal vampire curses worked, that was a great line. Also, I really, really like stories in canon and you are sticking with everyone's personalitied so well.
off to read more!
Reviewer: Lindamaine (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Evil. I still give you a 10. Love your Alice!
Reviewer: TeaWithLemon (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
In the spirit of 'review as your thoughts appear' request, here's my first one: it's very hard to take time to write a review when I'm dying to dash forward to the next part. Ha! But right off the bat, I think Bella's voice sounds realistic, given Edward's old-fashioned-ness, if not a little too confident. Okay! Off to read more!
Reviewer: Lindamaine (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Keeps getting better. Impossible.
Reviewer: Lindamaine (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
How the FUCK do you do that?????
Reviewer: owenic (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Utterly amazing.
At first i thought it was just another lemony tryst. But as i continued to read (and very thoroughly enjoyed the lemon-esque quality, i might add) i realised what a talented writer you are!
The clever prose and depth of character was remarkable. Thankyou so so much for relishing the English language (something i feel is quite lost in todays' "net speak".
Oh, and i must say, after reading and re-reading my favourite chapters the other night, i very nearly called my husband "Mr Cullen". Now, thats a tribute to putting your reader in the book!!
Reviewer: TwiCarm (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
EXCITING!
Reviewer: ItalianPrincess (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Who could blame her???
Reviewer: WriterMerrin (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
*applauds* This was a great choice for a story to be reading this weekend centered around watching New Moon. I love this AU because it feels so much like canon, but better. I'm relatively new to the fandom, but this is the first time I remember reading about Esme giving Bella her own crest jewelery. It is a forgone conclusion that Bella would get something at some point, but it isn't even mentioned in the book. Very nice touch.
Reviewer: HP62442 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Normally, that would be totally digusting but he's a vampire, so not so much. So because he is a vampire, its execllent. Although, I really wanted to to have Edward taste her blood, because he bit her, not to kill her, but just a little bit, but still I think the blood vial is good, especially since she will be a vampire.
really good chapter, delilghtfully kinky!
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