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Reviewer: Carolamex (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This was just Amazing!!!!! Loved every word of it! I wish you all the success possible with your writing! Thanks for this gift!
Reviewer: CullenLuvr (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Would it be out of line for me to tell you I love you? LOL! Your story is absolutely INCREDIBLE!!!!!!! I have been enjoying reading it so much and I've been recommending it to my other Twilight-obsessed girlfriends as well. You have quite a gift!
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Do you by chance know where I can pick myself up a vampire?
Siiiighh..
The real world just isn't as fun as fiction!
smb.
xo
Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED Bella's wedding presents to Edward! They were soooo perfect! And the wedding was beautiful :}
<3
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Wow, I think I need to invest in a piano..
smb.
xo
Reviewer: tique (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This was just fantastic. There were a few minor things that seemed goofy or out-of-character (the cowboy outfit comes to mind) but they paled in comparison to how amazing most of it was. The earlier chapters were the best, but everything was awesome, particularly Bella's transformation chapter. You really brought the characters to life and filled in a lot of holes that the books have left out, in my opinion. Thank you so much for writing this!!!
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I just wanted to point out that I disagree with the characters being considered OCC. Just because Bella and Edward's love life wasn't explicitly written in SM's novels, doesn't mean it wasn't there between the lines. I really feel like you have been able to keep B&E in character while revealing their fantasies. Let's face it, we all were wondering what was REALLY going on in their heads while reading the novels. So thank you for your gift of writing and creativity!
smb.
xo
Author's Response: Thanks for that! I don't think we always remember that Bella was asking Edward about sex half way into book one!
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
As much as I have enjoyed the fanfiction of other authors on this website.. you are one of the best when it comes to writing the way Bella and Edward's novel characters would speak, think and act. Your B&E are completely believable and loveable, yet you've still made them your own. I can't wait for Bella to push Edwards limits!
I'm two chapters in and am just as hooked as I was with SM's work, if not more. Can't wait to keep reading! This is my new favourite story and you are my new favourite author. :)
smb
xo
Reviewer: HungryEyes (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
This is hilarious (in a good way)! I really like it - it's different and it makes me laugh!
Reviewer: LightStarDusting (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Whew. *Fans self*
Is it hot in here?
Reviewer: Obsessedtwibrarian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
HOLY SHIT!!! WHO CARES WHETHER YOUR STORY IS OOC??!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!! If they want true SM canon, go read something else!!! LOL I loved it that Jasper found her panties first! That shocked the hell out of me! LOL LOVE THIS STORY! It's absolutely sinful and I'm in a sinful mood!
Author's Response: hehe, glad you likey
Reviewer: Obsessedtwibrarian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Hahahaha! Can't wait to read Edwards reaction to the panties in the middle of his bed!!!! Girlfriend, your Bella is torturing our poor Edward to DEATH!!! LOL
Reviewer: Obsessedtwibrarian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wowee! OMG! Poor Edward! Surely he could have gotten a little release too!! Just a little one? LOL
This is decadent and delicious! Edward saying "fuck" really did it for me....
Yeah...it sure did...
Reviewer: Obsessedtwibrarian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Woo! *Fanning myself with the electric bill right now* That was HOT HOT HOT!!! LOL
This is really cute ! Like a sex "Bucket List" LOL I'm reading on! No time to waste with more typing!!
Reviewer: Obsessedtwibrarian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
LOL Poor horny Bella!!!
Very interesting story! I'm curious enough to read on! I like your "voice" in your writing! Don't know how to describe it except its very realistic and funny!
Reviewer: LightStarDusting (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Hey there! I'm a big fail on reviewing the first 10 chapters and that wasn't very cool of me. But I figured a girl's gotta start somewhere so here I am!
Loving your story, enjoying the hotness very much. Nice to see a Bella who is in control, knows what she wants, and goes for hers!
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I love this story!!! I can't say what i liked best. I love the gift of her blood. That is truly ingenious. Thank you so much!!!!
Reviewer: rtgirl (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
my. God. that was awesome!! i don't even have words. i could not stop reading. i have no idea if you have written edward's list yet, but i'm gonna start looking, that's for dang sure. SM should be ashamed that she didn't write it this way!! gah! i'll read this as many times as i have read her books, i'm sure!!
Author's Response: I haven't begun the sequel yet, although I will be writing a one-chapter standalone story from it for the girls who won my auction for The Fandom Gives Back. That will post publicly in January. I probably won't get to the full story though for a bit after that. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
With every chapter I read I am amazed at well you manage to capture Edward's speech. Most fics make some sort of attempt but you actually manage to hit it head on. I can practically hear it, all proper and rythmic in my head.
"I wasn't sure I had ever heard Edward utter the word ‘guy' before." Great line! That's exactly what I was thinking :] It just doesn't go with his 1900 self :]
Last, have you found any men like your Edward? Perhaps you should post a listing because I don't think they exist ;}
<3
Reviewer: Honeybrown (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
ok needless to say you are saved a my favorite author this is the my 1st read for this site and i am hooked because of you. i reviewed along the way but want you to know i enjoyed this better than breaking dawn.. i know you are busy but i just wanted to you to know how great this read was for me wink wink
Author's Response: So glad! Thanks!
Reviewer: 5xchea (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
u r good at this!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Honeybrown (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Very touching i loved that Jacob got to fall in love and was not left out in the cold and Bella got to spend time with Charlie
Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow. you continually impress me :]
<3
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Wow. That was amazing!!!!!!
Reviewer: passionflower (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Wow. As usuall, you must be tired of hearing that, but W O W!
Bellas entries are so beautifully written and it feel like it is she who has written them too.
And here in the end, reading your version of Bellas last moment as a human it really got to me. Small tears are falling from my eyes, wettening my cheaks. The way you tell the story is..beyond words for me (in english, still using my I´m from Sweden, excuse)
But W O W!!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! So glad you're enjoying!
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