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Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
You are still doing an amazing job with the story. What a difference a piece of paper makes huh? Maybe I need to try making a list and see how that happens in real life.
Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read the remaining chapters.
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Wonderful story so far, I can't wait to read and laugh more. I am so loving her list so far.
Reviewer: divinemissm (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
What I liked about this chapter is the fact the Edward's heightened senses led him on to something. I was thinking about that earlier on. And of course, leave it to Alice to save the day so to speak lol...I'm off to the next chapter to see if she hid the notebook and what happens next!
Reviewer: Jenna_N (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I just want to say
Thank You. This is the most amazing story ever. I had no idea there were such wonderful writers out there and you write exactly what I wanted to read. You displayed Bella and Edward just like I wanted them, better than Stephanie Meyers did! I loved every minute of this story and I can't even begin to tell you how much your story improved my sex life. My husband thanks you too! I was very sad to get to the end but I will never forget this story and I'm sure will read it again! Thank You again so much for this beautiful piece of literature!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for such nice words!
Reviewer: lira21 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
hey!!I am new in this site and I'll start to read this story. I think I'm gonna like it hehehe
Reviewer: xtinaonfire (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
i wouldve never thought of that! leaving my panties! where did bella get this boldness?!?! lol
Reviewer: xtinaonfire (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
thats was one of the hottest things ever!!!
EDWARD CURSED! AND GROUND HIS DICK INTO HER! UP AGAINSTS A TREE?!?!? amazing.
he took charge, let loose, and was still considerate! he's fucking perfect, just like this chapter!
Reviewer: xtinaonfire (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
damn! EDWARD let loose for once! i like it when guys moan too. its sexy and cute for some reason. sexy because that means w/e ur doing feels good and cute because he's expressing himself. its especially sexy/cute when its a silent, brooding type of guy who doesn't talk much...anyways, good chapter!
Reviewer: xtinaonfire (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
YES! shower fantasy! i have a shower fantasy too, i think every girl does...lol
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Damn girl!! This chapter and the last were so freaking hot! Where do you come up with this stuff?
Reviewer: TwiMon (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Forget being wet. Both hands?? OMG!!!
Reviewer: fsaav (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I just finished the entire story and I'm shaking as I type this...lol. I had wanted to review when I finished the first chapter because I was just overwhelmed by how much I loved this, but I couldn't stop reading for long enough to do that! This is the first fanfic I have read and I never thought I would be able to do it since I just love the books so much I didn't think it could compare. Your story is just unbelievable. Wonderful. Fulfulling. Filling in so many voids for the "original" characters that I didn't even realize I felt. The details of intimacy were definitely something I had been craving and you more than fill those in for me. I absolutely loved your version of Bella's change more than I could ever tell you. It was so emotional, heartwrenching...and beautiful. Another thing I really enjoyed was getting to experience Bella's transforming relationships with all of the Cullens. They all became so much more real and the way she handled it all definitely was in her character.
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this, for allowing readers inside of your mind the way you see Bella and Edward. I can't thank you enought. It was perfect!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for such kind words!
Reviewer: nana11 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
OMFG this story is so damn gorgeous, i can't believe somebody can write so great :) i love every little word of this story and i wish it would never have to end lol naughty,naughty,naughty... hehe but that's exactely what i wanted to read. it's really the best story i've read :D hope there will be a sequel one day... edward's list would be veeeery interesting too, i think ;)
so all i can say (again) i loved it and your writing is totally awesome :) damn i need an edward,too... NOW lol
Diana
Reviewer: wiccachick58 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
okay so first i would like to say you kick ass that was the best story i have read thus far. i couldn't stop reading it so yeah bravo ur the best hope you write more and thank you again for such a good story
Reviewer: TeamTrueLove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
An amazng work of art...thank you!!
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
“Harder, Bella. I would touch you harder.”
OMG you are one naughty little minx!
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
This just keeps getting better, LOOOVE IT!
Reviewer: Sabrina09 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
LC your writing is fantastic, I love the way everything flows.
I'm on chapter three and hooked :)
Reviewer: Sakura81 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
WOW! This was amazing! I'm sad that I've finished reading! I'm pretty new to reading fan fiction and was skeptical of it in general in the past but when I started reading this, I COULD NOT STOP! Talk about a turn on! I like the ending of your version a lot and I like the outcome of everything you wrote from the wedding scene. You are very talented and I am looking forward to reading your other work. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Reviewer: smajors (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
god that was so good and i was watching twlight while reading it made it so much better
Author's Response: Visual aids! haha :)
Reviewer: smajors (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
god that was so good and i was watching twlight while reading it made it so much better
Reviewer: melissa109 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Loved it. Great story in more ways then one.
Reviewer: smajors (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
oh that is so good.
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I love this naughty little Bella!! This is such a fun book to read. Can't wait to see a lttle more naughty Edward!!!!!!
Reviewer: dmh2006 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Loved the truth part. A little too much, I must say. ;)
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