Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
In the name of all that is holy... Betcha james bond didn't do it in the Aston Martin.......
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
THat was hot hot hot....
Reviewer: riki74 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just read the 1st chapter and LOVE Bella's characterization. I've got to get to bed now (it's 4:30am in Cali); but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story this weekend!
Reviewer: riki74 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just read the 1st chapter and LOVE Bella's characterization. I've got to get to bed now (it's 4:30am in Cali); but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story this weekend!
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Never thought of using the shower head. I prefer the spa jet myself. this chapter gets you in the mood.
Reviewer: EmiMills (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I really like this story . . . I'm speechless.
Reviewer: fallenangell2010 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i am in awe! this has got to be THE best story i have read! your writings are amazing, i keep coming back to read them over again! cartainly a job well done
Reviewer: xzyzyx (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I'm speachless. That was very well written. You stayed away from the "cheesienss" I see all to often in Erotica. Props to you
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
ohhh my lord wowzers
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
ohhh Eddie is a pantie pincher lol
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
my brain has now fully shut down
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
love jazz view,
ohhh Eddie in the shower can i can have a good day just thinking about it
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
gotta love DTE yummmmmm
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OMG that was sooooo freeking HOT
cant wait to see whats added on her list
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
wow
trust Ali to pop in then lol
Reviewer: kell74 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
wow i think i need to get me a shower head like that
and wow what first chap
Reviewer: enagelski (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This is the second time I've read this story because I felt like the first time I rushed through it. I absolutely loved everything about this!!! I probably will read it a 3rd time sometime soon. Please please write more.
Reviewer: monkeygirl73 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Sniff.. wiping a tear. Bella's new list is beautiful and the entire chapter amazing beyond words!
Reviewer: monkeygirl73 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
The part on Edward's list about Jacob seeing and "mine" was fucking hilarious! Love it! Can see Jacob scampering away, tail between his legs... LMAO!
Reviewer: nanaL89 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
WOW!!!! amazing that was wonderful im at a loss for words at how great that was
Reviewer: hyperheather77 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
i am thoroughly in love with this story and its only been 2 chapters. i love this more open bella and she has some awesome very blush worthy ideas. i cant wait to read more to see what happens and wow this story is HOT. gotta love edward and bella! i like the little details you added in about writting short stories as well, because i do that too.
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
That was the best damn chapter and that's saying a lot considering how much sex has been in this story. I absolutely LOVE the idea that you did with the book for Edward.
Reviewer: bella343 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wow, if this keeps up Bella's gonna get a suprise soon. hope it gets even better after this chapter.Your an AMAZING writer keep up the good work and produce more stories please.
Scarlett
Reviewer: chelsea0577 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OH MY GOD ! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOD !!!!!!!! I AM LATE TO FAN FICTION BUT HAD TO REVIEW THIS ANYWAY ! ITS BRILLIANT ! YOU NAILED IT !
Reviewer: bella343 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Im loving it. keep up the good work.
Scarlett
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