Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
oooohhh yeah let's go for the weekend omgomgomgomgomgomgahahahahah
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
this is the third time i read the list, and i'm going to read it again, and again , i can't wait, for the next chapter,i know what;s comin,,, and loved it
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Soooo good! I love his fantasies. And I love that he added to her list. They need a list together. Well done. I love the image of Alice and Bella laughing on her bed into the blankets.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I just absolutely loved the entire Epiclogue! My favorite scene was when Edward got to enjoy his Christmas gift. I can't thank you enough for writing such an amazing story. I will add you to my favorite authors list and see if you have written anything else for Twilighted. I am fairly new to this website but looking forward to read ANYTHINg AND EVERYTHING you write. You are an amazing writer with real talent to string words together in a way that affects to reader on a very deep level...I wish you all the success as a published author...please let me know under which name you publish your books so I can buy them at the store. Once again, I can express my gratitude enough...Thank you. Thank you. Thank you for bringing us this wonderful story.
Bethany
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm thats al I got to say
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
goodness that last line is heavenly...
Reviewer: Azalyn Branegan (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I must say that I really enjoyed your work. Between the lemony goodness and the romance you truly captured the emotions and personalities of the characters so well. The treasure hunt was perfect in that I could imagine Bella doing such a playful thing to disguise her true intentions. Wonderful work and I can't wait until you allow us to delve deep into Edward's smutty and passionate mind!
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
THat was one of the hottest things I have ever read thank you love!
Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Removable shower heads are amazing great idea about the cold water feeling like him
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I have no words to describe how much I loved reading this chapter!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
This is waaaaaay better than Breaking Down.....made me cry...
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I love the twist you put on the story...I like to know that Jake has found a more appropriate soulmate than a toddler girl...LOL
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Very beautiful chapter...I like it that you skipped the pregnancy...I like him using condoms...
Reviewer: shoecraz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I loved it all!! I am curious about edwards list though..four pages is a lot of yummy things...i love this story! it is totally amazing
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You reworked the original story marvelously. I loved all the changes, they made sense and felt very natural. Great job!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Just loved it...it is perfect...
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Really good chappy!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I loved this chapter!!!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I loved this chapter! Edward's surprise was so like him...I wonder which composition he submitted...Bella's Lullaby or Esme's favorite or something else?
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Thank you for this wonderful chapter...I can't wait to read on, but unfortunately I also have a life so now I'll go and live it for a while and then I'll return to reading.
B.
Reviewer: moonshaadow 31 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow, I just found this story and I am obsessed with it. I have read 13 chapters in one night. This is great.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
God, this chapter was amazing!!!! I didn't know whether I would like it, but there are no words to express how fucking sexy it all was. Edward is a sex god!
B.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Okay.......no words.....
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Thud...I am dead...the phone sex was fantastic! I think the tattoo is on her hip directly above her pubic bone.
B.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I just loved this chapter!!!! I can't believe how much I love the whole story. I wonder how you came up with the concept of the list? Thanks for the great entertainment! I hope you had a nice Valentine's Day.
Bethany
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